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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Meghna_kriyansh

MD maine iski thodi se daant laga di hai

Madam pure if ne meri daant lagai hai!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm so sorry for being so late
I'll comment for part 5, 6 and 7!

So finally Rey got to know her past and he's all set to make her smile...
Loved his idea of being a secret admirer just to erase her past and make her live the present!
His first gift...dancing shoes...way too special for Kriya.
She hugged Rey with happiness when she realised that it was him who brought back her angelic smile...but she's been betrayed in love and friendship!
She's not ready to accept his friendship...how will rey win her trust again and take it to next nevel.
I'm sure knowing her past Rey would react wisely and would just try to convince her no matter how much our past haunts us its still the past and it can never be our present and future.
Being glad its already passed away he'll make Kriya move on...plz update soon...waiting to see how KR relation takes a turn...will it be for the better...will kriya trust him???
Kriya has to Trust Rey😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
KRIYAANSH SS
PART 8

Hope u guys like it!
Maine jaldi jaldi mai likha hai par hope its nice..
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KRIYA ' S P.O.V

"How do I tell Rey! God!" Kriya kept on wondering. She had reached the accademy early today hoping that she would get an idea on how to tell Rey.

"How about writing? Its never betrayed me till now. " thought Kriya

Kriya hurried to the cafeteria and started writing ...
Hello Reyaansh,
I'm writing this message to tell u that we cant be friends anymore. My past has blocked this friendship and my destiny only allows me to be ALONE...
I cant trust anyone anymore! Am really sorry. Just let me stay alone because that's what my life is all about. For now that's all I can say...

- Kriya
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Kriya knew her happiness was limited and her sadness unlimited. For her, this world was cruel! She had always been given sadness...

She rolled up the letter and stuffed it in her handbag
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REY ' S P.O.V

Rey spent a lot of time in front of the mirror today. Finally, Kriya was his friend which he would soon turn into love. He wore his favorite casuals and left for the accademy.

Rey reached the accademy and went straight to the canteen knowing that it was Kriya's favourite spot.

He saw Kriya sitting alone and rushed to sit next to her

"Hey! " Rey greeted

"Hi Reyaansh. I am sorry but I gotta go. Oh and this is for u" Kriya gave him the message and left

Rey was happy as well as shocked. He quickly opened the letter and started reading it.

He couldn't believe that his angels past had overcome her again. He had to remove it! He had to get that smile again! He couldn't see her alone!

He needed to talk to her but where was she? She was his life! His desire! His reason to live! The girl who makes him smile!!

"Where are u angel?"

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KRIYA 'S P.O.V

Kriya was in the rehearsal hall, dancing! Removing every pain, every sorrow she had! Couldn't she ever be happy? Why was she the only one who had to bear so much? She knew Rey would be heart broken, she was sorry that all his hardwork went down in vain. But she had to be alone! Her destiny only allowed that!

She kept on dancing! Her face was filled with beads of perspiration! Her hair was messy! Her t-shirts was wet with sweat.

She kept on removing her every betrayal by her dance... And the two eyes who saw that was pained with sorrow...
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REY 'S P.O.V

Finally Rey had found her. His heart sank seeing her dance, her pain, her loneliness! He felt as if he had just been shot in his heart! He had, had enough! He couldn't bear to see his angel like this.

Kriya was so involved in her dance that she didn't even notice Rey was in the rehearsal hall.

Rey gripped Kriyas waist and pulled her towards himself, making her dash on his chest.
Kriya was shocked! She knew who he was, she didn't need to look she understood it by the feeling . Kriya tried her best to get out of Rey's grip but he was too strong for her.

"REY LEAVE ME DAMMIT!" screamed Kriya

"Shut it baatcutter! How many times do I remind u that u are living in the present not the past." Explained Rey

"I cant dammit!!! Everyone's betrayed me and now I cant take it! I know even u will betray me." screamed Kriya, drops of tears coming from her brown orbs.

Rey couldnt see that. He pulled her into a hug, stroking her back to comfort her.

"Kriya I was your secret admirer as well. Who comforted u? Who got u out of your past? Who encouraged u? Huh who? And trust me am never gonna leave u alone." Comforted Rey

Kriya understood what Rey was trying to say but should she give him a chance? Should she trust him!?
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PROMO: WILL KRIYA FINALLY TRUST REY?

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Hope u guys like it!

Jaldi jaldi mai likha hai isiliye shayad bura hai, mujhe nahi pata..

Do click the like button and comment pls

Chappals and Jhootas welcome!

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Posted: 11 years ago
mindblowing ...

loved it...specially the way rey handled kriya at the last...

pls update it soon dear...

simply superb
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
rey has to start all over again
poor him
can't wait to see what he does next
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow my drama queen itna jaldi jaldi likhti hain n itna achha OK poor rey n kriya finally I knw she will accept she have too love prachi
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update...

finally kriya decided to tell rey about how she felt..

aww.. rey is so sweet..

kriya just trust him..
he is the best .

amazing..

loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
I just hope kria over come her past very soon
N love it
How rey understand kria so well

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice update 👏

loved it😊
finally kriya telled rey wat she felt😃
poor rey😆
bt i knw kriya n rey will be 1 soon😃
PS-i knw i havent commented fr last 2-3 chapters
sorry fr tat
dnt be angry MS DRAMA QUEEN😊
Edited by Mansi98 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: diyaswaronholic


Madam pure if ne meri daant lagai hai!!!

sahi hua na koi aisa nai krta hai...

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