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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: kajenlife

awesome update

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thanku so much...
will update soon..!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved all d updates... continue n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishtypiya

loved all d updates... continue n do pm me...


Thanku ..! and ya will pm u ..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Nice part dear...!!
Loved tge ar convo..
Ridhima is rite on her place... Arman left her so that she could move on...
Bt now armaan.. Blaming her for leaving him...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: little_angle

Nice part dear...!!
Loved tge ar convo..
Ridhima is rite on her place... Arman left her so that she could move on...
Bt now armaan.. Blaming her for leaving him...


thanku so much..!!
stay tuned..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 6


(in terrace)
Armaan- nhi riddhima hum milenge...hum zaroor milenge...kyuki aaj tak aisi koi deewar bani hi nhi..jo armaan se riddhima ko dur kar sake...tum kisi aur ki ho hi nhi sakti ho riddhima kyuki tum sirf meri ho...tum sirf meri ho riddhima...YOU ARE ONLY MINE..


(armaan terrace se riddhima ko dhoondne nikalta hai vo har jagah dekhta hai..par use riddhima nhi milti..vo thak kar fire escape jaata hai..or vha dekhta hai ki riddhima vha bethkar ro rahi hai...vo andar jaata hai..aur riddhima ke paas beth jaata hai...par riddhima rone me itni khoyi hui hoti hai use kuch pta hi nhi chalta hai...jab armaan uska shoulder par haath rakhta hai tab vo apne khyalo se bahar aati hai..)
Armaan - baat karni hai riddhima. ...tumse abhi...
(par riddhima armaan ko ansuna karkar vha se chali jaati hai..armaan use pukarta rehta hai..but riddhima nhi sunti or vha se chali jaati hai...)
Armaan(with hurt face)- baat to tumhe mujhse karni padegi dr riddhima gupta...

IN LOCKER ROOM
(pura gang vha hota hai armaan aur riddhima ke siva)
Nikki- yeh kya ho rha hai...yaar..riddhima ki akhir kya galti hai...us bechaari ke saath kya ho rha hai..
Atul- tu sahi keh rhi hai... Yaar.. Aur armaan jo hamesha hasta rehta tha...dusro ke problems solve karta tha...aaj uski life me itni badi problem kaise...aa gyi...
Rahul- I know guyzzz...kisne socha tha ki armaan riddhima jaide do. Itna pyaar karne walo ki love story aisa mod legi...
Muskaan- guyzz...tum log is story me kisi ko bhool rhe ho...
Abhi- bhool rhe hai kise muskaan?
.muskaan- sid ko guyzz...sid ko...socho jab use is sab ke baare me pta chalega to uska kya haal hoga vo to puri tarah toot hi jayega...vo riddhima se boht pyaar karta hai...
(armaan locker room me enter ho hi rha hota hai...or vo muskaan ki baat sun leta hai)
Armaan- iska matlab riddhima ki engagement sid se huyi hai...??
(sab armaan ko dekhkar shock ho jaate hai..or kuch nhi bolte..)
Armaan- or kitna chup rhoge ...(armaan ki ankhon me aansoo aa jaate hai) kya riddhima ki tarh tum sabne bhi mujhse muh mod liya hai.?
Anjali- pagal hai kya armaan...tu aisa kaise soch sakta hai...hum tere dost the hai..aur hamesh rahenge...
Rahul- ha yaar...tu kabhi aisa mat sochiyo...hum har kadam par tere saath hai..
Armaan- par jiska saath mujhe chahiye.. Jiska saath mere liye sabse zaroori hi..vhi mere saath nhi hai...
Muskaan- armaan... Tu use bhool jaa yeh soch ki vo teri zindagi me kabhi aayi hi nhi thi...uski or sid ki engegement ho chuki hai armaan ...
Armaan- sirf engagement huyi hai...muskaan shaadi nhi...or engagement toot sakti hai...tum sab jante ho ki riddhima par sirf armaan ka haq hai..riddhima sirf armaan ki ho sakti hai...
Anjali- armaan.. Tu pagal ho gya hai..tu aisa soch bhi kaise sakta hai...riddhima or sid ki engagement ho chuki hai...
Armaan- ha..unki engagement hui par pyaaar to vo mujhse karti hai na..agar mujhse pyaar na karti na...to mujhe sach btaane ke baad fire escape me is tarah ro nhi rhi hoti...
Anjali- thk hai armaan... Mujhe tere or ridhzi k milne se koi objection nhi hai...lekinn...jab tak ridhzi nhi chahegi.. Me ridhzi ke faislee ki respect karti hu..agar ridhzi tujhe apni life me vapas chahti hai..to I promise me tum dono ko milane ke liye kuch bhi karungi..lekin agr vo aisa nhi chahti hai...to tujhe use bhoolna hoga...
Armaan- aisa kabhi din ayega hi nhi mujhe pta hai..riddhima ke liye armaan hi sab kuch hai vo mujhe hi chunegi...mujhe usse baat karni hogi..
(armaan vha se chala jaata hai...riddhima ko dhundne or dekhta hai riddhima cancer ward me patients ko check kar rahi hoti hai...armaan uske paas jaata hai or kehta hai..)
Armaan- riddhima mujhe tumse bat karni hai abhi...
Riddhima- but mujhe tumse koi bat nhi karni hai...(riddhima mudkar jaa rhi hoti hai ki armaan uska piche se haath pakadleta hai..)
Armaan- baat to meri tumhe sunni hogi dr riddhima gupta..
Riddhima- armaan.. Mera haath chodo...
Armaan - nhi jab tak tum mujhse baat nhi kar leti... Tab tak Nhi chodunga tumhara haath...
(Riddhima piche mudti hai ..uski ankhon me aansoo hote hai...vo kehti hai..)
Riddhima- armaan agar tum mujhse pyaar karte ho..to plzz mera haath chod do..
(armaan riddhima ki yeh bat sunkar uska haath chod deta hai..riddhima bhagkr vha se chali jati hai)
Armaan- baat to tumhe meri sunni hogi riddhima

IN EVENING
(armaan duty khtm karkar corridor me sochta hua locker room ki tarf aa rha hota hai)
Armaan - ab to me tumse baat karkar rhunga riddhima...(ki tabhi vo corridor me anjali se takrata hai) ohh sorry anji..vo galti..
Anjali- its okk.me hi phone par lagi huyi thi vo mom and dad 2 din ke liye shimla gye hai..to mom ghar ke liye kuch samaan bol rhi thi meri hi galti hai mene tujhe dekha nhi.. chl bye..
(armaan anji ko bye karkar locker room me enter hota hai vha muskaan rahul or atul hote hai armaan vha riddhima ko na pakar thoda shock ho jaata hai..)
Armaan - yeh riddhima kha gyi mujhe aaj hi usse bat karni hai...
(atul se puchta hai)champ riddhima kha hai..
Atul- ridhzi..vo to ghr gyi abhi 10 minute pehe hi nikli hai..
Armaan- par abhi to me anjali se corridor me mila..vo to yhi hai..
Atul( blush karta hai)- ha yaar tujhe pta hai...dr kirti ne..aaj mujhe or anjali ko night duty di h...mtlb aaj raat me anjali saath saath..
(muskaan or rahul saath chillate hai)
Muskaan, rahul- chi...atuuulll...
(atul serious hokar)
Atul abe yaar... Mera matlab hai me aur anjali sath saath duty karenge kitni gandi soch hai tum logo ki...(yeh kehkar atul locker room se chla jaata hai..muskaan rahul bhi armaan ko bye kehkar chale jaate hai..armaan akela khada vha sochta hai)
Armaan - riddhima chli gayi...aaj mujhe usse baat karni hogi acha mauka hai..dr shashank aur padma aunty bhi ghar me nhi h aur anjali bhi yhi hai..riddhima se baat karta hu...
(armaan car lekar riddhima ke ghar jaata hai or ring bajata hai riddhima kholti hai aur armaan ko dekhkar shock ho jaati hai..)
Riddhima - armaan tum...?tum yha kya kar rhe ho...
Armaan- tumse baat karne aaya hoon riddhima or tumse baat kiye bina yha se nhi Jaunga...chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye...
Riddhima- to phir raho yahi...( riddhima uske muh par gate band kar deti hai..phir vhi gate par bethkar rone lagti hai...armaan gate ke baahar se bolta hai..)
Armaan- riddhima me tumhaare ghar ke saamne betha hu...aur vhi betha rhunga ...chahe aandhi aye ya tufaan... Jab tak tum mujhse baat nhi kar leti tab tak nhi jaunga yha se...(armaan riddhima ke ghar ke saamne jaakar thand me beth jaata hai...riddhima armaan ki yeh baat sunkar upar apne kamre me jaati hai...aur armaan ko dekhti hai..armaan bhi riddhima ko dekhleta hai...aur vhi se chillata hai..)
Armaan - dekhte hai riddhima tumhe kab tak fark nhi padta hai ..
(riddhima apne aansuo ko.control kr rhi hoti hai ki tabhi side table par pda uska phone ring hota hai..vo jakr dekhti hai to sid ki call aa rhi hoti hai...vo phone pick karti hai..)
Sid - hello riddhima...tum thk ho..
Riddhima( khud ko control karti hui kehti hai)- ha sid.. Me bilkul thk hu...
Sid- thnk god...pta nhi riddhima.. Ajeeb sa mehssos ho rha h..dar sa lag rha hai...khi me tumhe kho na du...me sab kuch bardaasht kar sakta hu..par tumhe nhi kho sakta tum to janti ho me tumse kitna pyaar karta hu...
Riddhima- hmmm...
Sid - riddhima...tum is engagement se khush hona...
Ridhima(sid ke question se nervous ho jaati hai)- sid tum yeh kyu puch rhe ho...
Sid- yuhi bas aise hi man kiya puch lu..achaa chlo ab mujhe jana..hai..vo koi board of member aaya hai yha inspection k liye...ok bye..love u...(sid wait karta hai ki riddhima love u 2 khegi..)
Ridhima- bye sid( par jab riddhima nhi kehti hi to sid phone kaat deta hai..or khud se kehta hai..)
Sid- pta nhi kab yeh word tumhare muh se sunne ko milenge...tumhari ankhon me abhi tak apne liye pyaar nhi dekha hai...par mujhe yakeen hai tum zroor ek din mujhse pyaar krogi..
IN GUPTA HOUSE
(arman niche se chillata hai.)
Armaan - ek baar.. Mujhse baat karlo riddhima plzz ek baar
Riddhima - arman plzz jao yha se (yeh kehkar ridhima window me curtains daalkr window ke pas khadi hokar roti hai..)
.armaan- to tum nhi sunogi meri baat thk hai.. Tumhe koi farq nhi padta na...thk hai.. Me bhi dekhta hu kabtak farq nhi padta...(yeh kehkar armaan paas pda hua sheeshe ka tukda lekar apne hatho me pakadleta hai..or uske haath sr boht saara khoon girne laga hai...or armaan riddhimaki window ki aur dekhkar chillata hai..)
Armaan - koi farq nhi padta na riddhima... yhi hai meri saza behjaane do mere...khoon ko...tum chahti ho na me tumhe bhool jau...to beh jaane do mere khoon ko..jisme sirf ek hi naam hai..RIDDHIMA...mere saans me.. Mere jism ke har hisse me..mere khoon me..sirf ek insan hai or vo tum ho...agar tum chahti ho ki me tumhe bhool jau to yhi shi...yaad hai riddhima...mene kha tha na..tumhari har farmaish meri sarankhon par... agr tum chahti ho me tumhe bhool jau..apne khoon se tumhara ansh mita doon..to thk hai riddhima me tumhari yeh farmaish bhi puri kar dunga...ab is khoon ko behne dunga...apne khoon se tumhara har ansh tumhara naam mita dunga..aur khud ko bhi mita dunga...

(yeh sunkar riddhima khud ko rok nhi pati or parda hata kar dekhti hai aur chillati hai...)

Riddhima- ARMAAANNN...

UPCOMING SCENE
Sid- iska matlab..hai..dr armaan aur riddhima...riddhima is engagement se khush hi nhi hai...uski ankhon me me apne liye kabhi pyaar isliye nhi dekh paya tha kyuki uske dil me to sirf dr. Armaan hai...vo yeh sab ek vaade ke liye kar rahi hai..



part7


(riddhima bhagti huyi armaan ke paas aati..hai..aur uske haath se sheeshe ka tukda chudwaane ki koshish karti hai...par armaan nhi chodta hai..riddhima rote hue kehti hai...)
Riddhima- armaaann...please chodo ise ...armaan khoon beh rha hai..tumhara.. Please ise chod do..armaan..
Armaan- rehne do riddhima beh jaane do..is khoon ko...
Riddhima- armaan please chodo...armaan tumhe dard hoga..please...
Armaan- nhi ho rha riddhima dard...yeh dard us dard ke aage kuch nhi hai.. (apne dil par dusra haath rakhkar kehta hai..) .jo yha hota hai... jab tum apna muh mujhse mod leti ho...aur ab to is dard ko aadat bnani padegi kyuki riddhima to ab armaan se pyaar hi nhi karti...
(riddhima apne aap ko aur control nhi kar paati hai..aur chillati hai)
Riddhima- karti hai... Riddhima armaan se pyaar karti hai..aur hamesha karti rahegi...
(yeh sunkar armaan sheeshe ka tukda chod deta hai..aur asmani rang ho bg me start ho jaata hai)
Armaan- to riddhima armaan se apni feelings kyu chupa rhi hai...kyu nhi maan leti riddhima ki vo armaan ke bina nhi jee sakti hai...
Riddhima- maanti hai riddhima...riddhima maanti hai ke vo armaan ke bina nhi jee sakti hai...par vo kya kare vo nhi chahti hai ki uske aur armaan ke pyaar ko sab selfish mane...
Armaan- to kya is dar se riddhima aur armaan.. Ek dusre se juda ho jayenge...hamesha ke liye ek dusre ke ajnabee ho jayenge..ek dusre ke liye gair insaan ho jayenge...kya duniya waale aage chalkar armaan riddhima ko ek dusre ke liye GAIR mukarrar kar denge...
Riddhima- nadaan hai vo log jo kehte hai...ki riddhima armaan ek dusre ke liye gair hai... Tum hamesha kehte the na..ki riddhima sirf armaan ki hai...vaise hi riddhima ko bhi lagta hai ki armaan sirf uska hai...to kya hua armaan riddhima is janam me na mil paaye... Agle 6 janmo tak riddhima sirf armaan ki hogi aur armaan sirf riddhima ka...is janam me armaan riddhima ka jism na mil paya ho... par unki rooh to ek dusre se mil hi chuki hai...koi shareer ko to juda kar sakta hai...par rooh koi kaise juda karega...
Armaan - to kya is janam me riddhima armaan ko bhula degi??
Riddhima- kabhi bhula nhi.. Payegi...par vo apne aur armaan ke pyaar ko.badnaam bhi nhi hone degi...vo jaanti hai armaan...bhi yhi chahega...kyuki aisa ho hi nhi sakta...ki armaan riddhima ki baat na samjhe...armaan to riddhima ki khamoshi bhi pad sakta hai...arman samjhega na.??
Armaan(sir hilakr ha karta hai)- armaan samjhega...armaan uske aur riddhima ke pyaar ko badnaam nhi hone dega...vo unke pyaar ko hamesh paak rakhega...i promise...tum apna farz nibhana riddhima...apna vaada nibhaana...
Riddhima- riddhima...naam yaad rahega na..
(armaan rote rote has padta hai..)
Armaan- yaad karne ke liye bhoolna padta hai...tum mujhe bhulna mat riddhima...ab hamari raahe alag hone jaa rhi hai..
Riddhima- to kya hua...agar hamari raahe alag hone jaa rhi hai...hamari manzil to ek hi rahegi na...(finger se aasmaan ki taraf ishaara karte huye.)vha...armaan riddhima vha milenge...vha hogi hamari manzil ek..jha koi hamare beech nhi aa payega...koi bhi nhi..kya armaan riddhima se aaj ek vaada karega?(apna hath aage bdate huye..)
Armaan- karega...aur nibhayega bhi...
Riddhima - to vaada karo armaan...phir se vo pehle wale armaan ban jaoge...jo har baat par muskuraata tha...armaan riddhima k liye yeh karega na...vo yeh vaada nibhayega na...
(armaan apna hath ridhima k haath par rakhta hai..aur kehta hai)
Armaan -nibhayega...hamesh muskuraunga...sirf tumhare liye...kya riddhima armaan ki ek last wish puri karegi?
Riddhima- (rote rote ha me sir hilati hai.)
armaan- to riddhima kabhi nhi royegi...sirf muskurayegi...
Riddhima(rote huye smile karti hai)- muskurayegi...riddhima muskurayegi...sirf armaan ke liye.(phir vo serious hokr puchti hai).armaan kya tum last baar mujhe...I Love you keh sakte ho...
(armaan yeh sunkar zor se rone lagta hai or kehta hai..)
Armaan - I...Love...I Love...(armaan ke muh se rone ki wajah se words nhi nikalte hai)
Riddhima- please aakhri bar kehdo...
Armaan - I ...Love...I LOVE YOU RIDDHIMA...I JUST LOVE YOU..(yeh kehkar armaan zor zor se rona lagta hai...)
Riddhima(apne aansoo ko control hai) GOOD BYE DR.ARMAAN MALIK...
Armaan - GOOD BYE..
(Armaan or riddhima apne aansuo ke saath ek dusre se alag direction me chale jaate hai...is baat se anjaan ki inki saari baatein sid ne sunli hai...sid shoulder pr bag liye riddhima se milna aaya tha...par jo usne yha dekha or suna vo dekhkar vo shock ho gya... Vo shock me hi kehta hai...)
Sid- iska matlab..hai..dr armaan aur riddhima...riddhima is engagement se khush hi nhi hai...uski ankhon me me apne liye kabhi pyaar isliye nhi dekh paya tha kyuki uske dil me to sirf dr. Armaan hai...vo yeh sab ek vaade ke liye kar rahi hai...
UPCOMING SCENE
SONG SEQUENCE
Mera Jeena Hai Kya
Marna Hai Kya
Jab Saath Tera Nahi
Paa Ke Rab Kya Karu
Jab Tu Hi Mera Nahin
Mera Jeena Hai Kya
Marna Hai Kya(2)

please do leave ur valuable comments..
written by anika
Love Nikita...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Thnkew so mch fr this amazing update dear. m an dmg fan nd I love all ar & arsh ff. if u write any other ff then pm me plz. this story is so interesting. but m happy dat now sid knows everything. hope he'll not separate ar. plzzz update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Superb update loved it
hope ar remain together
little emotional part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So emotional but so gud u r a very Gud writer
Eager to read more now continue soon

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