'PaNkHuDiYAan - shades of lives entwined' ~angst update~ - Page 5

Originally posted by: kri1

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OKAY! I AM 1ST. I KNOW IT'S DUMB... but I like being first on works that I adore... and I complete fell in love with this. LIKE OH MY GOSH!

I gotta admit, I didn't understand the first paragraph-ish at first... but then I read it again... and fell in love with it...DEEPLY.

I was dumb for not understanding at first...but then I realized that this is just ultimate uniqueness when it comes to writing... and you have to engulf yourself totally while reading it...and engulfing is exactly what I did. Like wow. Your diction and just play on words... makes this people reading this piece go in awe.

Well done. I loved it! The inner turmoil within both of them is evident and just beautiful to read.

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar

I love this! You're an amazing writer Rini! Loved your choice of words and loved how perfectly Sanyu's mindset has been described! =D I'm looking forward to more!

Originally posted by: anuaskif

Beautiful ... Beautiful is all that I can think of.

Mesmerizing shade of Sanyukta's life entwined... now with Randhir 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: ChasingLiberty

Hey !!! I was wondering when you girls are going to update !!

And THAT update was definitely worth the wait !!

The title of the story was definitely justified.. and you writing is a class apart .. i am in awe of your strong vocabulary .. Totally envying it right now !! It was just beautiful ..

Sanyukta thought so wrong of him initially ! And her current state of mind is penned down beautifully !!!

Keep writing !!!

Originally posted by: Parshian_SAK

Adorbs...!!!😳

The way Sanyukta's inner questioning is described ...!! It cudn't be more apt..:)

M looking forward to more 👏

Sakshi