ArHi FF:11:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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the_breeze

@the_breeze

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Hey Lin,

Caught up on the last few updates, loved the way the tale has gone forward... Very intrigued about the visit from India! And I have a feeling that Ram is going to enter the castle soon 😉

Loved reading 👏

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19sayana

@19sayana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Congratulation on new thread..

And It is more than aweosomeee...👏👏👏

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arpitasen

@arpitasen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Nice update...but still want to read more of arnav and khushi

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casper

@casper

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

"Rahim Chacha smiled in understanding, "I am happy for you, sire, that you willingly welcomed the change."

Lord Arnav only smiled in returned and then began to take nimble steps in the direction of the Castle. The butler followed diligently after him."

He is Isn't he..? Its so endearing to see him like this..having both sides of his expressions intact... the arrogance and the softer side and it only because of Khushi that this hidden side of his now becoming a vocal expression...!! be it expressing his annoyance of declaring their private moments to the family or his care towards his care takers and now RAM coming into the picture,,!!

Might I say... Lordy's riding is quite a sight to drool for me too...😳😉 Looking fwd for the end results with Mr. Sena and Indian delegates...!! And I am still insisting to know what is happening to his mid night attacks ??

And Am holding my views on General right now..!! waiting for his next move

PS : do you really see Barun when you write him..? I see so much of Richard Armitage as your Lordy...

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sansu

@sansu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Thread 11...!!!!!!!!

Yipieee yipieee yip!

Yupieee yupieee yupieee yup!!!!

Congrats my dear story teller!

Congrats my dear comrades!

And congrats to all our readers!!!

Way to go buddiesss!!!!

Im jumping dancing screaming and shouting from behind a rock!

Yes...u read that ryt!...a beautiful rock too,i tell u!

But, y? U ask me...

Ah! Dn play these games wid me!

I like seriously missed a new thread which is already weighing 4 narrations!!!!

Oh my dear lordy lord, Save me!!!!

N yes ppl...the blabbers are ending right here...before certain someone,noone or anyone try to find about the lovation of my precious rock!

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Only one thought in my while reading this updt that hw much first lord change what cooking in his mind nw great updt

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Mischief-Managed

@sarahehsan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

I've an inkling li'l Ram would be brought in to be cared for, by Rahim chacha? If yes, I love you, Linny! 😛 I hoped Lord Arnav wouldn't let go of the boy he's grown so attached with. Ram has earned a very special corner in Lordy's heart. Then the mention of Sena and Indian delegates, the convo with Rahim chacha.. Awh! I absolutely am touched by the way you think and create your characters, Linny! And by the sheer uniqueness of sketching them into a tale which seems to be rightfully ours, now! 🤗

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Kiran

@lovedrops

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Hey Lin... First sorry for late commenting for .. I was little busy these days... Finally read all the updates... And Arnav has changed for good. And what idea he got after seeing rahim chacha. Is it about Ram...

Sorry for short comment my dear. Waiting for next update

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hoopoe

@hoopoe

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Rabba ve... ❤️

Dear Lin, that was one beautiful chapter... a simple yet heart touching chapter, subtlety giving a glimpse of the beautiful relationship shared between a faithful servant and a deserving master... the selflessness and loyalty of Rahim chacha... the understanding and benevolence of the First Lord... the mutual respect and care... So endearing...Heart warming!!! 😊

P.S. Rahim chacha's family lives in India?!!!... Hmmm... Interesting!!!

Edited by hoopoe - 11 years ago