'neva leavng you !'SeaSOn 2 (Till part 13 Pg.36) *Discontinu - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: samy18

hey dear firstly sorry for late reply and thanks for all the pms😊
this awesome ff i like it very much and all the update were lovely and nice please do continue soon👏


itte saare claps ! 😲!!..oho! -.-!
..en it's okay !! 😃..en wc !
...thank you very much !! ... thanks again..!!.. oh I will ! 😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: azina

amazing upload next soon

thanks..!! will try to..!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wooowwweee!!!!!

Your plot is just amazingly awesome . Pls pm me next time when you update 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeah I know m extremely late ! mama ki shaadi thi yaar vei sorry :( !

here !

Part 7 !

"..sanyukta ! after college.. I went to London with my dad !!..we settled their..en I got an job easily !!

my dad was still the same !! drunk !!!..I used to enter my house..en would find my dad somewhere on the ground !!.."..his voice broke a bit !!

"..I appointed servants to be with him !! but of no use !! dad would shout scream break things en until they let him go outside !! en once he was outside he would run away somehow to a bear shop or somewhere...en then one of the servants would have to find him !!.." he lifted his eyebrows as I kept my hands on his ...I couldn't think of anything better !! his voice had always trembled when it came to his parents !! well either his lips would tremble or uhm ! ugh ! you know ! I gently smiled at him !!...

he held my hands more tight !!..I caught his arms en embraced them..leaning my head on his shoulder..as he continued..

"..I used to miss you a lot sanyukta !! that house that city used to suffocate me !! being you no more there with me was the obvious reason of it !! I used to remember our every fight ..every moment shared wheather it was you who would stand beside me en help me through my worst times..or me being with you ! at that time I had said I regretted that night !! but I en my heart know I never did !!.."..

I know what was he talking about !! that day !! ..when we had shared something ...which we couldn't give a reason to as why did it happen ? It just happened !! but the thing was that like me ...he to didn't regretted that night !!

*flashback !*

we were on our college 'professional' trip to a small village near by !!...
after the exams !! this was definitely needed ! actually this village had a big industry being working there !! en so vardhaan sir had canceled going to be 4th year students vacations !! en made us visit here !!

"..I don't the heck get that why ARE you excited ?"..kaustuki said irritatingly as I was about to sit on my seat !!

"..en I don't get that why you AREN'T !!"..I said poking her playfully !!

she rested her elbow on the window side en kept her chin on it..!!

I smiled brightly !! I so wanted to see an INDUSTRY !! wouldn't it be so cool ? I mean like big heavy machines being worked in front of YOU by YOU !! I was damn excited to see it !!...en our bus started to which my excitement grew bigger !!

we reached in almost around 5 hours !!...en every one was damn tired !!..en so we decided to rest !!...

we picked bags respectively en entered the small hotel typo !!..

"..iss list ke according vidhushi is with kaustuki ! jiggy with me ! sameer with sahil ! sunaina with rakshikta ..."...en the list went on ..till I or rather say we ...you know na who we yeah ! yeah I en that MCP ! ! so like until we...

"..WHAT ??"..I en randhir yelled in out most shocks !!
"..are you kidding me VARUN !!"..I yelled en snatched the paper which had the list on it !!..

"...where is my name ??.." I searched for umpteenth time my name but all went in vain !! ..

"...leave it ! tumhara na hee toh achha h !! ...but where is MINE ??.."..randhir snatched the sheet from me ...trying to found out his name !!..

"..any problem students ?"...en here was that idiot PKC !! ussko dekhhe to aissa lagta h ki..ki bhagwaan must have hanged himself to death after making him..ya kuch b aissa !!...

"..sir sanyukta en randhir don't have their names in the list !!." varun said calmed ! yeah ! sure ! isska naam tha na list m ! that's why he's sooo calm ! varna abtakk mahabharat ka yudh ho rha yaha pe ! huh !!

"..ohh no !! how is this possible ?"..PKC blurted out en saw the list !!
abbe dhakkan tere dekhne se humaare naam peda thodi na ho jayenge !!
huh !!

"..well then !! the only solution is that you have to share rooms..!!"..baaki saare rooms full h..!! aur yaha pe adjustments bhi nhe ho sakti !!rooms are already very small.."


"..ohh no sanyu ye PKC kya bol rha h ??"..
"..budhha pagla gya h !!." en I looked at my right !! where randhir stood..still looking at pkc..!! it seemed as if he had seen a ghost !!..his eyes were nearly popping out of his head !!


a sorry is waiting here as my new SS "Last days !" :D !

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4067799/last-days-sandhir-ss-complete-part-7-12-pg-25

Edited by archita358 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
me firsttt
with every update you build the suspense more and more
I still can't guess what rd is doing with the bomb nd y
nd sandhir sharing a room {ahem ahem}
can't wait for next
make it soon
Edited by myrahh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
What happen between them??? Arghhh y this cliffy????
Plz plz cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shubhrabardhar

Wooowwweee!!!!!

Your plot is just amazingly awesome . Pls pm me next time when you update 👏


haha ! thanks much !! :D ! I will pakka !
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: myrahh

me firsttt
with every update you build the suspense more and more
I still can't guess what rd is doing with the bomb nd y
nd sandhir sharing a room {ahem ahem}
can't wait for next
make it soon

haha ! you congo ! ;) !
hehe !! nahi karungi to tum padhogi nhe ! :P
yo they are ;) ! *naughty*
hehe !! I will try pakka !!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: unishaz

nice.. Thanks for pm..

thank you ! wc !

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