Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Just came across your story.

Very interesting concept.

Very intrigued by the excerpt.

Will Khushi make the call to Arnav?

Can't wait for the update.

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InspiredSoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: 1chilly
Just came across your story.
Very interesting concept.
Very intrigued by the excerpt.
Will Khushi make the call to Arnav?
Can't wait for the update.

Thank you, 1chilly! 😊

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Ipoona

@Ipoona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Inspired ... It is 3:19 AM ... Just woke up ... Have been reAlly busy at work. So your PM was a welcome relief. Thanks for the excerpt ... And the honors ...😃 You my friend, deserve the applause. Eagerly waiting for the fourth chapter ... My hero ... How could I ever miss him ... I saw him in his fevered tosses ... His coffee eyes ... right down to the curls at his nape. Your writing is beautifully layered ... How could you be so lovingly detailed ... descriptive about anyone other than our man ... And it is Khushi who has been handed the task of nurturing him back to health ... An intimate task to begin with. Inspired ... Really loving this story ... Even the fact that she comes wearing green and pink ... Two colors that I personally thought suited her the best ... Loved that you had him thinking of her ... I am all for a good mystery ... But deep down I am a true romantic ... So thank you my friend, for bringing our couple together ... Looking forward to the two getting closer ... His misapprehensions .. Her hesitation ... What could be more delightful ... And thank you horizon for that promo ... Had not seen it ... These two are enchanting to watch ...

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Mehreen

@Motif_Soul

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Arnav and smitten , good to see that.Liked Arnav and his thinking about Khushi's pom pom and that shows how much she is on his nerve...

Edited by MehreenB - 11 years ago

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InspiredSoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

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InspiredSoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ An Appreciation Note ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

My Dear Readers!🤗

YOU are AWESOME! Thank you for loving Submerged! And encouraging a new writer on this forum with your support!

You have been patient with my lengthy and sometimes boring narrative of the past - and stayed with me through the crazy twists and turns - and you are still here, commenting, liking and reading!

Part 4 - it was my longest update so far - 5000+ words 😃

I thoroughly enjoyed writing it - I hope you enjoyed reading it!

I initially thought this story would be done in 4-5 parts ... But there is still so much to tell, and the fun has only just begun! So - do I have your permission to make this story longer, maybe take it to 8 or 10 parts?

Your opinion is important to me - please let me know!

Anyone who likes to receive a PM for updates, if you are not already getting one, please add me to your buddy list.

And my readers, for your convenience, I always keep the Index on Page 1 updated with direct links for the Parts and my notes!

Life has been pretty hectic, and I have not been able to reply to all the comments - but I truly appreciate each and every one of them!

And last but not the least, are you up for some romance on the run? 😉

Your humble writer,

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

wow...what a twist...it is asr all the time instead of dhruv...loved it ...lets see his next plan..

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headtotoe

@headtotoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Wow !!! what a pleasant twist this was ...

The protagonists have met... Now teh story will roll ...

Continue soon...

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ajeetha

@abivicky86

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#189

vow i am just loving this story what a twist never expected this as always shyam has to be the villian

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Oh so it was Arnav all the way.

That came as a surprise.

So now khushi and her acidity working big time.

I hope they find a way out to escape soon.

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