3~*NOT just a passionate affair~*Pt 40 Pg2 - Page 115

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Posted: 11 years ago
lashy, as always ,u are d best. am short of words, how do u create such magic with jalal nd jodha.. i look up to ur update more than cv"s jj...u are a marvellous writer..now pls u must pm me for every update u write...nd plsss...update sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww my poor Jodha and Jalal 😭 Going through tough times. But I know they'll come out of it with flying colours. As usual, flawless writing Shraddha. 👍🏼 ⭐️ Waiting for more updates. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

That is EXACTLY why I'm not letting them have any kids so early 😆 Speaking from experience.. I had 7 years to enjoy too


No issues ... my dear lady ... u can happily take a leap of 7 years of their wedding in this story & give jalal his twins from jodha ... 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

😈 Good guessing Varsha 😆 I don't know why I derive great pleasure in troubling you


Lashyyy ... dont tell me you are planning to separate them ... else i will attack u with my angry mob ...😡
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

😲😡

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Kitne hopes rakthe ho yaar tum sab 😭 Meri aankhn bhar aayi..


Lashy maate ... sunn rahii ho na tum ... roo rahe hai hum sab ...!!! maate, ek vinti karte hai hum ... jo aur ja ko alag mat karna 😭 bas unki shaadi karwa do ... mein 2 nariyal ganapati ko chadaungi aur uska prasad banwake tumhe parcel kardungi ...
Edited by varshaakulkarni - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chembi

Hi lashy why you did this to jo and jalal and plz end this track as soon as possible😭.
Arre baba... kitne rote ho sab.. don't cry it'll all be well in the end...

Oh why didn't you wrote jalal's part after that long sleep and why this part is so small.😭
I did dear... nearly 1/4 of the update was him reliving his portion after the sleep... and don't worry its not the end.. 🤗

.I agree that I don't consider what we did sinful, because my views are different... but just because I'm a socialite's son...just because I party...doesn't mean that I wouldn't know how to value a genuine relationship...what we had was not a blind date, some drunken sex or a one night stand! This is not trivial for me either...far from it! Why I appreciate what we had was because it was very personal to me...' he sighed 'I am so proud of the fact that YOU - an independent decisive woman that I love... trusted ME with the most important sentiment in your life to help you feel better... I find it so dignified that two emotionally and physically torn people found solace in one another... if that's not beautiful, I don't know what is! So, nothing you say now is going to make me undermine what we shared!' his eyebrows knotted into a questioning frown 'And why are you blaming yourself? Yes, you've changed in love...but, who doesn't? Heck, I have!' he slapped the table But that doesn't mean we've lost our identity... instead, we've given ourselves a new identity...'
i loved this part so much lashy you penned down jalal's pov very well and it shows how jalal value their relationship and their love.You both deserves👏.
Thanks so so so much my dearie 🤗

Now jo wht's she upto ?No comments about jo's family and rishab. Plz some clue about stalker in next chap and in between oh god this stalker also loves and lust jo na and wht if he know about rishab and wht if he do anything worst to jodha ?Oh god i don't want anything worst to happen to jo 😔 and continue soon.😊
See why did he harm Jo? Because she was so close and Ja and not leaving him.. so, he was trying all he could to threaten her.. in Rishabh's case that's not true na.. 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni


No issues ... my dear lady ... u can happily take a leap of 7 years of their wedding in this story & give jalal his twins from jodha ... 😆

Or lashy can start a new ff on their after marriage story.😳 There is a lot that can be written. 😃
Honestly @lashy give it a thought. After all it is in much demand now.
And if I m not wrong it's time for a new thread .
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Posted: 11 years ago
Rishta and rishab...damn!!!! Things have gone downhill for the couple...Singh family is forcing their daughter in a marriage...that's exactly what happens in most of the cases...forced marriage is the ultimate solution for every problem...stalker is not even an issue...not once they thought that the repeat of the previous attack can't be written off...how long the girl will be locked up?? What made them sure of the fact that there won't be any repeat if the girl is married??? But...stalker is a trivial issue...a boyfriend is a bigger issue...phew!!!!😡

Just like jalal, I was also taken a back when jodha chastised him for not stopping her🥺...but...ya, she did what most of us do...the loved ones bear the brunt of frustration and anger...because you know no matter what, they are not gonna leave you...they will understand you...they will be by your side...❤️hats off to the guy...he has got a way of handling tough situations...every single time...oh I LOVE him...❤️he always look beyond what meets the eye...tries to understand why jodha is behaving in a particular fashion...for him, his relationship is first and he has never let his ego come into the equation...he is simply awesome...muahh muahh muahh...someone please bring him out of the story and then he will be mine...

Jalal has to resurrect jodha's broken confidence...the stalker attack followed by a miffed family has broken the spirits of jodha...everything important to jodha is slipping out of her hands...she has been pushed to a corner...she needs someone who can remind her that she is a fighter not a quitter...she needs someone to push her in the right direction...and...who better than jalal...that's what a relationship is all about...when one partner stumbles the other is there to support...🤗

I am in love with this story...great job lashy...*clap clap clap*...lub you...❤️🤗

Thankoo for the pm...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
but lashy di..i read somewhere u live abroad ...sorry if am being personal..but then how you know soo much about INDIA!!!???😉😉...you KNOW about INDIA as if you LIVE here...😳
Edited by J2lover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chyetta

lashy, as always ,u are d best. am short of words, how do u create such magic with jalal nd jodha.. i look up to ur update more than cv"s jj...u are a marvellous writer..now pls u must pm me for every update u write...nd plsss...update sooon


Thanks so much dear... will definitely pm you henceforth... I thought I was.. shaayad choot gayaa... 🤗

Originally posted by: --Rashmi--

Aww my poor Jodha and Jalal 😭 Going through tough times. But I know they'll come out of it with flying colours. As usual, flawless writing Shraddha. 👍🏼 ⭐️ Waiting for more updates. 😊


Thanks so much Rashmi.. so nice to see your comments here dear.. 🤗 and thanks for the trust..

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