~**Jaan-E-Maan**~ Lktff P: 10 pg:6 - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
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it has been soo long
please continue soon
Nisha ❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey i m so sorry guys i know i have not write from a long time but i was quite busy.....and also my finals are coming up next week but as i writting late....i m putting few parts together.....

so here it is.....
Part:5

Recap:

She opened her mouth to call out, but no sound came out… laksh heared a slight gasp from kt..and hold her by shoulder and turns her facing him and saw that she was crying, her striking wide red
L: kt kya hua… tum roh kyu raho ho.?
Kt: [finally voice came out of her and she shouts at him] maine kaha na muje akela chod do, just leave me alone…just go..!!!!!!!!!

Continue….

Laksh with all shocked on his face leaves and went to his room and think what happened to kt, laksh feels his throat tighten, felt lost and miserable…his thoughts are driving him crazy….

Scene cuts to downstairs…
All the arrangements are done, even punditji was here tulsi is searching for kt and ganga is searching for laksh…

T: (asks Ganga) arreee….ganga tune Krishna tulsi ko dekha?
G: nahi maa..woh mai bhi laksh ko dudh rahi thi…lagta hai dono appne appne kamre mai hoge….
T: accha tu ja ayr dono ko bula kar aa….thik hai…
G: jee maa…(smiles and went to laksh's room)

Scene cuts to laksh room…

Laksh was standing by the window looking at kt's pic in his wallet….and thinking " kya ho gaya hai kt ko? Woh mujshe baat kyun nahi kar rahi hai…lagta ta hai who mujshe pyaar nahi karti aur use mere baat ka bura laga hai………"( damm…u just said that u in love, u didn't say that u love her…then what will she do except of crying and shouting….alright let me come back to story….)
All this thoughts are killing him inside…he just can't stop thinking about her…his heart can't hold it anymore this thoughts are making his heart heavy, he wants to cry as loud as he can, but just few tears pop out in his eyes….

From behind Ganga comes in….

G: aareee…laksh …..

Laksh suddenly comes out from his thoughts and wipes off tears from his eyes…..
G: tum abhi tak tayar nahi hua….niche saab tayari hogaye hai aur pun..(before she finishes her sentence, laksh turns to face her and his face is all sad, dried tears in his eyes and it looks like all the world sadness is on his face….

something like below...



Ganga see him and gets worried…
G: kay hua laksh tum roh kyun rahi ho? Kay baat hai?
L:[tires to hid his sorrow, pain and hurtness and tries to bring up a happy and delighted face up but just can't do it but he tries his best…] Kuch is nahi mom mai kaha roh raha hu….
G: [knows that he is lying to her cause she can read his face she's his mother]
G: laksh agar tumhe juth bolna nahi aata plz use maat bola karo, aur khash kar mere samne to nahi laksh mai tumhari maa hum tum mujshe juth nahi bol sakte…..
L: kya mom aap bhi na mai kyun juth boluga…
G: [takes a dried tear from his eyes and shows it to him] toh phir yeh kya hai?
L: [ just don't have words to say and just rushes into bathroom [and while going] aap jaye mai aata hu…
G: kutch to baat zarur hai…..

Ganga leaves to call kt…….

continue in next part....

love
unnati
Edited by unnati72003 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part: 6

Kt is in her room….she stood in front of mirror….she looked at herself from all angels…..

Kt: mujhe me kya kami hai…..[she thinks of the mini skirts girls whom laksh flirt with] mujhe to kami hi kami hai….mai who mini skirts vaali ladki yo jaise nahi hu…..lekin agar laksh tumko mujhse pyaar hi nahi karna tha to mujhe sapne kyun dikhye….aur main bhi tuhare bharose kya kya sapne dekhne lagi thi……lekin kya mujhe sapne dekhne ka koi haak nahi .... kya haak nahi hai…?
[and closes her eyes and tears rolls down her cheeks]

A voice from behind "Bilkul hai !!!"

Kt: [wipes her tears and turns around to see who it was…..and it was none other than ganga]

G: [give a very cute smile]
Kt: [tries to hide her sorrow, her red face, red eyes and wet tears]
G: ham sab ko sapne dekhne ka pura haak hai beta…..[she just heard kt saying " kya mujhe sapne dekhne na koi haak nahi?]

Kt: areee….chachi aap….[in a very sad tone]
G: hha mai….tum aab tak tayar nahi huai….
Kt: [still in a sad and very low tone] bas abhi ho jati hu…..
G:[ notice the sadness in kt's tone] kya hua beta aaj tumhari aawaz mai ye udasi kaise…agar koi baat ho to mujshe kaho……
Kt: [tries to hide everything just like laksh tried to did…..and brings up a happy face] nahi chachi aisi koi baat nahi hai……
G: mujhe cachi kehti ho aur mujshe juth bolti ho…..
Kt: chachi aap bekar mai paresan ho rahi ho…asisi koi baat hi nahi hai to juth kay bolna[ turns around not to face her as she can't say lie in front of her and she can't control her tears anymore]

G: accha aisi baat nahi ho to[ holds her by sholder and turns to face her] mere aakho mai dekh kar bolo…..

Kt:[ just can't hold it anymore her tears want to comes out and say everthing to her but she contols a lot and tries to say it by looking into her eyes but she just can't say it….and runs into bathroom with tears rolling down her cheeks]

G: ye dono mai kya hua hai kuch samaj mai nahi aa raha….lekin kutch to baat zarur hai….

[leaves downstairs and tells tulsi that they both are getting ready will be down soon….]

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unnati
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
Part:7

Laksh comes out wearing a kuta payjam but more like sherwani…….

Here is how KP looks



Kt has also weared a same color salwar kamzeez [I always like the couple to wear same color and matching clothes like my friend divya also likes to do that….it make them look like couple well laksh and kt are not yet couple but they will be soon…..]

Anyways here is the pic of kt's dress….



Kt in her room all ready and looking at herself in the mirror putting bindi on her forehead laksh passes by her room and his eyes falls on kt and looks how beautifu; she looks…..kt see laskh image in the mirror and turns around laksh still standing there looking at her…….kt also looks into his deep eyes and they have a nice staring session…..and here comes the disturbance…..

T: arreeeee……..krishna jaldi kar…..

And there staring session breaks and kt starts to leave from there but laksh stops her by hold her hand……but kt jerks off her hand stroms out of there once again leaving laksh all alone and sad......laksh starts to get irritate….

love
unnati

Edited by unnati72003 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part:8

Downstaira: everyone is happy and some god's mantras were playing on….……and kt goes towards tulsi….

Kt: baa aap ne mujhe bulaya….
T: arreee…haan dek punditji bhi aagye hai aur sab tayari bhi hogye hai…..tu ja kar dekhle koi kamito nahi hai…..
Kt: jee baa…..
Kt goes and ask punditji if he need anything else are puja….
Kt: punditji aap ko aur kutch chahiye?
P: nahi beta…..
Kt: thik hai agar aap ko kutch chaiye to aap mujhe bata na….
P: accha beta….
Kt goes to see if the flowers and every other decorations are properly done……and then her eyes falls on Rangoli….and she remembers the old days with laksh….and flashback of the below scene…when pari and arcita throws flowers at them....




Then she comes out of the flashback and notices that it was just a flashback……and suddenly her happy face turns to into sad face……..but the she tries to ignore her feelings….and went to check other sutff…..and there she see that some flowers that were high not arranged properly and she get a stool and is fixing them…..and laksh was passing by there and see that the stool that she is standing on is broken…..and he goes there and tries to tell her that the stool is broken but she just ignores him and do not pay attention to him……and laksh felt so miserable, hurt and gets irritated and he was just about to leave from there…..and the stool breaks and kt falls in a strong & warm arms….. and it was none other than our cute, charming and handsome laksh……

that's it for now guys i will psot my few more parts next week as i have get ready for my finals.....do tell me how was it till now.....plz guys do comments so i can improve myself.....thx

love
unnati
Edited by unnati72003 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
thanks for updating 😊
great job as usual 👏 👏
continue soon...
-Nisha ❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
aww such cute parts 👏
continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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They were really good. Great job. Do continue soon after your finals. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 update!
gud luck w/ ur finals 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys thx a lot for lovely comments....and i m so sorry updating so late....here is my next part......

Part: 9

Recape:

she get a stool and is fixing them…..and laksh was passing by there and see that the stool that she is standing on is broken…..and he goes there and tries to tell her that the stool is broken but she just ignores him and do not pay attention to him……and laksh felt so miserable, hurt and gets irritated and he was just about to leave from there…..and the stool breaks and kt falls in a strong & warm arms….. and it was none other than our cute, charming and handsome laksh……
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Kt falls in his arms.. they share a long staring session…….
Kt: chodo muje…..
L: he kept on staring at her…..
Kt: ( in angry ton) maine kaha chodo muje….
L: come out from his daydreaming….and lets kt back on her feet…..
Kt started walking away…..but laksh holds her duppatta….kt stops ……
Kt: laksh plz…..
L: doesn't let go…..
Kt: turns around and stares at him in angry way….and snatches her dupatta from his hand and walks away……laksh turns the other way and started thinking to himself….ye kt ko kya hogaya hai kyu mujse aise behave kar rahi hai…..kya wo mujse pyaar nahi karti…….? Nahi nahi aisa kaise ho sakta hai……to phir kya baat hai…pata lagana to padega…….and he walks to his room……..
Puja and everything was over……
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NEXT MORNING

Instead of taking bus together, kt left earlier….
Laksh went downstairs in the dinning room…pari, archita and etc…people was having breakfast….. Laksh walked in and sat down with other people…….his eyes were searching for kt…..but he couldn't find her…..he waited a while but then he questions pari that where is kt…?
P: Arreee woh to chali gayi! Usne kaha ki usse kuch kaam hai, isiliye usse jaldi jaana hoga….pagal, naashta bhi nahi kiya usne….kitna samjhaane ki koshish ki, lekin…..
L:[thinks and talk to himself] itni jaldi kya kaam hai usse….laksh gets up from the table and rushes for college…..
P: laksh suno to….nashta to karke jao……
But he was already left……….

i will post my next part soon....do comments.....plz guys thx a lot hope u all like it....in my next few parts romantic scenes of laksh kt r comming up so staye tuned.....to enjoy.....

love
unnati

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