Fought For Ur Soul..(ar ff) part ~ 16 updated 28/5/2015 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Awesome Angali dear
loved it
Missing Armaan 😉
thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
GoSh!!!
It was supposed to be Shilpa...and then... Sapna...!!! 😈
It was really a good one...👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: megha_kajen

awsume part dear...loved it... :)


plzzz armaan ki entry jldi karao...



thanks megha...
armaan enrty.. may be in a part or so..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: panamaa

dil superb update

loved it
here to where is our hero dil
update soon



😊😊
i wont say thankuu..

heroo will sone..
wait kro...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks a lot dear...
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thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Awesome Angali dear

loved it
Missing Armaan 😉
thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊



thank u soo much...

armaan will come soonn...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: mish2427

GoSh!!!

It was supposed to be Shilpa...and then... Sapna...!!! 😈
It was really a good one...👍🏼



yo dear it was sapna...
a cool twist..😛

thanks dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ojaswi_kajen

wow awesome update...interesting one...!!!!



thanks dear...
im glad u r liking it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
part 5

Recape.. Anji found out the actal culprit who wanted to harm rudhima... Sapna..

Next morning ridhima woke up with a head ache..

Anji :.gud morning ridhima ab kaisa fel kr rahi ho..

Ridz : di hm party se ghar kb aye.. Mujhe kuch yaad nahi araha..

Anji : are chil ridhima vo jo kl juice pia tha use tujhe alergy hogi n u fainted.. Fir main or shilpa tujhe ghar laye...

Ridz : ok..!!

Anji : chal tu fta ft ready hoja ill prepare breakfast..


Ridz : ok di..!!

Anji leaves to prepare breakfast.. Before going to fresh n up ridhima cheks her phone..

Ridz : omg sapna ke itni sari mis cals n msg... Mujhe pta hi nahi chala.. Ill cal her up..
God y she is not picking up...
After 3-4 tries stil no responce..
Ridhima opens msg box..

Sapna 's msg...
Ridz sorry aise bina mile jarahi hn.. Bt i have no other option dad ka phone aya n mom is not well she is really very critical Mujhe apne ghar vapis germany jna hoga.. N vo bhi hamesha ke lie.. Ab humari schulimg khatam hogi hai n dad want me ki main aoni graduation vahim se krun + sath main humara family busines..
Ridhima was shocked reading the msg..!!

Ridz : diii... Shilpiii...

Anji n shilpa : kya hua kyu chila rahi hai...
(both said together )

Ridhima ran runing to anji.. Sobbing..

Ridz : dii.. Shilpii...

Shilpa :kya hua..

Ridz : shilpii vooo ..

Shilpa : ridz..kya bhain bhain kr rahi hai bolegi bhi..

Ridz : diii dekho ye mujhe dant rahi hai... Diii.. Apko pta hai vo na...
Uuaaiinn (sobing...)

Anji : ridhima rona bnd kr n bta..

Ridz : di saps chali gye hamrsaha ke lie bina mile bs ye msg chod kr..
N shows her the msg...
After reading tje msg..

Anji : ridhima.. Tune pdha na emergency hai.. use jna pda..!!

Shilpa tries to consoul her..

shilpa:ridz dekh use jururi km ths islie hi gye hai na... U should be happy for her...!!

Ridz : hmm u are rite... Pta toh tha hi she wil go one day..pr bina mile bina warning.. Ill mis her..

Anji : chalo ab go n get ready tumhare clg admision ke lie jna hai...!!

Ridz : ok di...

After breaksat 3 girls went for shilpa n ridhima 's clg admision..
Late at nite...!!!
Anji on cal with some one..

otherside: hello..

Anji : i know ap preshan hai bt she is fine trust..

otherside: tum pr trust tha isle ye responsibilty di.. Acha ye btao koi progres hue..!!!

Abji : nahi as usal us mtra ke bad faint.. Bt u dont worry im tring n v wil suceed some day..!!

otherside: in know ab tumhe apni powers bdhani honing im sending him..

Anji : how can he.. He is still young..

otherside: v have no other option.. Kl raat ke sapna insisent ke bad uske clan ke log or jda try krenge to ...
According to our sources.. Sapna ek powerful member thi unki clan ka.. Unhe bahut bda los hua hai n vo log shant nahi bethenge...

Anji : i know i agre bt uska yahan ana safe hoga..

otherside: this wil be his practicql test ab time agya hai vo fight kre apne parents ki tarah .. Dont forget he has triple powers..

Anji : thik hai jaida apko sahi lge.
Hade..

N cuts the call...!!

Few days pased smothly.. Now ridhima has came out of shocking news of sapna left like this...!!!
Ridhima n shilpa started their clg...

From their scul frnds none of them were their clas it was only shilpa n ridhima...
Bt coz of their frndly natire they made lot of new frnds & were enjoying new clg life..!!

A wk later..!!!
Near clg gate..!!
A boy entered gate on a sports bike with ful speed.. N coz of which bokks fall dawn from ridhimas hand...

Shilpa : who the hel.. Biklul tamez nahi hai ise..

Ridhima bent down to pick up the boks..!

Shilpa :ise toh main sabk sikhati hn..

Ridz :.relax shilpi..

Shilpa : aise kaise relax..!!
N drags ridhuma to bike paking..
that boy was standimg with his back towqrds ridhima n shilpa..
Shilpa holds his arm makes him face them...

Boy : excuse me..

Shilpa : tamez nahi hai tumnhe.. Itni fast bike chalete...

That boy was lost in his thoughts.. Watching the two girls standing in front..

Shilpa : oye helli tumse baat kr rahi hn..

Boy : im sorry..

Shilpa was about say something ridhima stops her..

Ridz :.its all rite...
Chal sjilpi...

Boy :.excuse me actualy im new here can u plz guide me...

Shilpa : do u really think il do that.

Ridz : shilpi..

Shilpa : wat..

Ridz : chup.. im sorry from her behalf... Go strait then 1st rite.. Vahan pl Reception n library jo info chahie vaham se mil jayegi...

Boy : thanks ( with a smile..)

Shilpa : tu pgal hai use sorry kyu bola..

Ridz : tu cls main chal..

Evening at home..!!

Ridz : shilpi relax..

Shilpa : wat relax u ldka kitna iritating hai.godd..!!! N more over he is in our cls n asinment partner..

( in cls teacher informed that for this wks asinment cls will be divided into grps of 3 .. Ridhima shilpa n that new admision boy..)

Ridz : itna bhi nura nahi hai vo...

Anji : kya hua..

Ridhima was teling the clg incindebt

Ting tong..

Shilpa : main dekhti hn..
Tummm...!!!

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