3~*NOT just a passionate affair~*Pt 40 Pg2 - Page 86

Originally posted by: chembi

oh lashy u beautifuly pen'd down the jo's inner turmoil. jo considers her as a new bride oh god but reality hits her to the core.jo's family members reactions are quiet natural and most of the families will react in this way only.If thy found out their son/daughter is in luv with the person who r of dif religion or cast they react in this way only and immedaitely ends up in this decision only.Oh god why jo didn't wake up jalal poor boy how he will contact her already her phone s missing and there s no possibility of friendly visit 2 her home:Oh plz lashy make jalal 2 visit jo's hme and i want jalal 2 share his and jo's relationship with his ammi.

Originally posted by: radhika7

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Nahi Nahi dont even think of finishing it ...Its kind of weekend dose you know...I love your writing...I will soon come back with my comment on part-39...love you lashy

Originally posted by: divyavm

And you got me trouble with my Mom .. She was like what took you so long to go to sleep 😆 What would I say 😉

Thanks sweetie 🤗

Originally posted by: Rasika29

Lashy Di..🤗

I don't know what to say after reading the update I think every praise will fall short.👏

I love the way you described how the reality hit Jodha, her inner turmoil you have shown it beautifully .

Thanks so much Rasika 🤗

You write so beautifully and it always has a touch of real life 😳. The situation at Jodha's home the way her parents and brothers were worrying for her frantically calling around...you can find it at any home.

Yeah..

But wait a sec what all Maan actually told them?😕 Is he The stalker?

They asked him where she is and he told them might be with Jalal.. 1 am girl's parents call to find out difficult to cover up after that na.. 😆

I really liked the way Jo faced her family and finally told them that she loves Jalal, she is a brave girl indeed, who loves both her family as well as Jalal.

Yes she has to be brave if she doesn't want to cave in to this rishabh jhanjhat!

Hmm, her mother figured out everything...and ready to marry her off 😔.

Bring it on, I believe both Jo and Jalal, they will not let go off each other this easily. And I believe you too Di..😛.

Love you for this amazing update🤗

Thanks so so so much.. loved the words 'Bring it on!' 🤗

Originally posted by: cosmosandme

Awww ; it's my vacation going on so I have so much spare time hence reading everyone's comments. It helps me look at your story from different perspectives ... It's kind of fodder till u update the next part.😃u can definitely take ur time in replying😛 I m loving people's comments here.

I m unable to express lot many things that the rest of the people here put up so nicely.

Btw Few days back I listened to tip tip barsa pani and was completely awed by thinking the journey jodha-jalal paved from this song to sun raha he na tu. Couldn't think of anything else other than the adorable duo while listening .made me nostalgic. I never ever liked this song as much as I liked it then.but don't like sun raha he tu that much; god knows why but I have never dared to hear that song

Originally posted by: rishbala3018

Ya right life does have this ups and downs and i know it 😉

I know 😉

Thats not the only reason fir blurting the truth i m sure!! Still lets see...

🤗

Originally posted by: najma123

wonderful update. why was it so short? or maybe i felt so. xD. and, maan why did he tell everything? stupid guy. this marriage isnt happening. make jalal come like a hero...

Originally posted by: AntaresVega

It must have been REALLY REALLY emotionally draining for you if it can affect our moods to such an extent. I really appreciate your effort. I have always wanted to write but I step away from that domain for the fear of having to undergo this turmoil. To be a great writer, one has to live the character...imagine oneself in the shoes of a character to emote their feelings and completely live the character (Each and every character) till you can pen it down and till your satisfied with it. And this is precisely the reason why sometimes I do not pester you for an update and I take my own sweet time to read and comment. And as you has earlier stated in a note, the chapters have become much more painful. It is necessary for the story and I can understand that it would have taken ten times more effort from your side to pen it down.

You have to live the character and then come out of it. 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: smithasrk

Run Jodha Run to Jalal

I know not possible

She is going to be in house arrest

😭