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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Craziness123

Hey harita...
Like always a brilliant update..
And that's needless to say...
Update the next part ASAP...
Will be waiting..

Love
Ayesha,.




Ayesha thank u so much😳
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thank u so much for reading🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: azina

wow awosame loved it upload next part soon




thank you will update ASAP☺️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: katheriene

Awesome update👏
love this caring randhir, hope sanyukta opens up a bit😊
So the mystery getting revealed, eager to know about swastik😲
Update soon




thank you very much for such a lovely cmnt❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DEVU46

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Harita di...🤗🤗
This update was dedicated to me.... Wow.. Di...THANK U SOOO much for dis lovely dedication...🤗am really very very happy...
Now coming to dis update... 😃This was really awesome... 👏Each nd every words was sooo perfect...👏
The story is becoming very very interesting👏...am really very excited to know about swastik 😃😛
Nd di update when hav enough tym...😛waiting 4 d next update...😊
Keep writing more...di.. Keep rocking...🤗
Thanks 4 d pm... 😃Nd shorry 4 d late reply...😛

Di ur collage has started na... 😊Same pinch my school has also started...😃
Nd once again thanks a lot di...🤗 Love u...❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anyania

swastik..mystery is lil' revealing now...
and loved the update..full of dhamaka..
it was cute and good...
update soon.waiting. .





yeah mystery is being revealed😉
thank u for reading
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CHAPTER 7

This chapter is dedicated to Preeti🥳.Thank you for your support darling🤗 and point to be mentioned,you are the most unique plot makers I have come across till date👏.

When one door of happiness closes, another opens; but often we look so long at the closed door that we do not see the one which has been opened for us.

Helen Keller

My eyes blurred and my head started spinning.I felt weak and my legs were shivering terribly.I can't believe he is right infront of me.Although I have seen him many times since his death fear always persists in me whenever he appears.He looked more pale than the last time."Satwik", I said.He nodded,the way he does when I call out his name.I neared him in hope of feeling him atleast this time unlike the other times.But I could feel nothing,absolutely nothing."What took you so long to come again", I extended my hand pretending to touch his palm as I spoke to him.His face was expression less as always."Sanyukta...", some one called from behind.Randhir,he is coming here.I turned to Satwik immediately but he has already disappeared.I haven't seen him in months and when he did appear for once,this guy spoiled everything.He spied on me ,dug out my past and now is not letting me to talk to my brother.Who the hell is he?What the hell does he want?

"Sanyukta?" he put a hand on my shoulder.I jerked it off and turned around to face him.His face looked flushed and there was a hint of fear in his eyes.I shook my head,"now what?"

"Lets go back,I will explain you everything", he pleaded.

"Look I don't want to hear any of your bloody explanations.Infact it was my fault to let you near me.So just do me and yourself a favor,leave me alone", I emphasized on the word alone.

"Okay Sanyukta,look its getting late and your friends will get worried.So just let me walk you to the dorm or else you might get lost in these woods", he cautioned."Come with me", he beckoned me.

I followed him quietly finding no other alternative.It is so weird how the moments of extreme happiness in my life always turn into worst nightmares.I feel like I am doomed forever.I lost my mom and considered I lost my dad too after her death.Then my brother and now I am even losing the one person who gave me the tiniest hope for life.

"Here you go", he said interrupting my train of thoughts.

I looked around,we have reached my dorm.I sighed and walked away not even bothering to say a Thank you' or Good Bye' to him.I entered my room and found it empty.My friends were probably still partying.Oh my god! Those people are born to party!I went into the wash room and took a shower after all tonight has been pretty adventurous and crazy too.I heard the voice of Arpita after a few minutes.Thank god she has come,other wise I wouldn't have anybody to talk to because sleep is some 100 miles away from me.

"Love you", a boy's voice said.It might be Parth.I heard a few giggles and moans.God! she knows that the room door is unlocked and I am in the wash room,doesn't she?I turned off the shower and cleared my throat a bit louder in order to imply that I am still here in the wash room.The giggles stopped and there was silence all over.After 5 minutes I opened the door hoping that the guy is not in the room and to my relief only Arpita is lying on the bed already asleep!I wanted to talk to her but as she was in a sound sleep,I chose not to disturb her and put on my sweater to go out.It was chilling outside.I am surprised how all those girls are partying outside in this cold weather half dressed!I headed towards the library where there are numerous tress and pitch darkness.I slowly walked towards the library which is surrounded by all those trees.It has 30 steps probably on the front side,I sat on one of them and waited for him to appear again."Satwik", I muttered into the dark night hoping that he would hear me.

"Sanyukta,your mom is not coming back",my dad tried to console me as I wailed into my pillow."Sanyukta,listen.Your brother will feel bad if he hears you crying", my dad pulled me.I freed myself from his hands.

"You took her away.Its all your fault.She would have been alive if you weren't drunk.Satwik would have been here with me,he wouldn't be lying on that bed lifeless if you weren't drunk", I yelled at him.

"Sanyukta,I accept that it was my fault", he was on the verge of tears.

I scowled at him,"You accept it?None of your damn acceptances are going to bring mom back.None of them are going to make Satwik normal.You are a murderer,I hate you".I ran out of the room not wanting to see his face again.

Suddenly all of my surroundings started disappearing and I was pulled back out of that place.I could feel some one lifting me up.I opened my eyes scared.It was a nightmare.Where am I?I looked down to see what is holding me up.I could see his hands wrapped tight around my waist.I looked up to see Randhir holding me in his arms.

"Put me down",I screamed pointing downwards.He was startled for a second and then gently let me down."What were you doing?" I shouted.

"What were you doing?Sleeping on the library stairs,seriously?" he snapped,his face was contorted with worry and anger."Do you have any idea what would have happened if those seniors found you like that?" he held me by my arm.

"Back off", I pushed him."I can take care of myself", I started walking away from him."Yeah,I could see that", he shouted but I ignored him and continued to walk."Sanyukta...,who is Satwik?", he shouted again making me stop.



Thank you so very much for reading🤗.Pardon me for such short replies to your wonderful reviews😭But trust me it means a lot to me😃.Please leave your valuable reviews behind😳


Love,

Harita❤️

Edited by Harita1309 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
What an amzing story!!
Wonderful plot!!
The characterization is ossum!! 👏
Good going girl!!
But your updates are so small!! 😭
As soon as I finish reading it I carve for more
Update soon!!
Please update tomorrow na
Pretty Please cherry on the top!!
Love,
Shefali
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Posted: 11 years ago
hmm really loved d concept keep writing
dis satwik story sounds hillarious ,,,,plz continue!!!

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