PYAAR KI RAHEIN-sk fanfic [cont.-part 2] - Page 43

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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome set of parts ab toh bas ek hi kwaish hai ki sujal kabhi na badle its amazing to read sk romance and sujal and kushis playfull ness i just love the way you write the story hey u rock girl cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Ok nxt prt-

k-[nudges him,with elbow]control karo!

s-nahi hota,aap hi to humein out of control kar deti hain!

Abb teeno r roamin arnd the zoo seein animals & all

s-main abhi aaya

k-kahan chale?

s-arre aa raha hoon naa

s goes

k kh ka haath pakadke uske saath ghum rahi hai

both k & kh r njoyin

achanak k ke peeche zor se sher ke dahadne ki awaaz aati hai

k darr jaati hai

k-[closes her eyes] aaaaaaaaaauuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!

Darrke ankhen band kar lie hain

She hears sounds of laughter,to opens her eyes

Dekhti hai,saamne s aur kh haas rahe hain

k-achcha,to ye aap logon ki shararat thi!

s-main kya tum to badi darpok ho!

k-achcha aur tum to bade veer ho!

s-wo to hoon![with pride]

k-achcha achcha abb chalie!

Abb phir se wo zoo dekhne lagte hain

They go inside reptile house

Jahan bohot andhere hai

K ne kh ka haath pakda hua hai

Aur s unke aage aage chal raha hai

S ye saab bhayanak se snakes etc dekh hi raha tha

Ki uske saamne ek green colour ki badi si chipkali aa jati hia

s-[ghabrake,peche haat jaata hai]aah..oh..!

abb k & kh r laughin

aur s sees ki ye unki chaal thi,wo chipkali nakli thi

k ne string se baandhke uske saamne rakh di thi

k-[laughin] aab kyun darr gae,bade bahadur bann gae the naa,chipkali dekhkaar darr gae!

s-emm..wo..wo..main to bass..wo..main…

k is giglin

abb teeno aur ghum rahe hote hain

shaam ho jaati hai-

k-sujal,main thakk gai,aur nahi chala jaa raha hai mujse,wahan park hai ,chalo naa!

s-ok chalo!

S,k & kh go 2 a khali si jagah jahan aas pass koi naa ho in the park

& sit

kh-maachi,wahan jhule hain,main jaun?

k-thik hai jao,paar apna khayal rakhna,zyaada dur matt chali jaana!

Kh-ok[kh goes]

Aur s jaake,k ki god mein sarr rakhke let jaata hai,& closes his eyes
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Posted: 18 years ago
yeh sujal bhi na kashish k peechay haah dho kk per gaya hai aaj lagta ahi k kashish ka bad day hai 😆 dara dia usko shukar hai koi bara sceen nahi create hua wahn warna kashish to shyad behosh hi ho jati 😆 aur khuhsi also mecho k saath milke machi ko tung ker rahi hai 😉 ,aur upar se bol raha k tum to bari darpok ho bikul sahi kaah kashish ne khud jaise bohat bahdur haiina chipklai se dar gaya 😆 ,kashish to phir sher se dari thi.khiar ab agaya jabnab kashish feeling tiered aur she says k mein ab nahi chal sakti calo park mein chaltay haina n they goesto a park aik aisi jagah hai jahn kio nhai hai... 😳 ab khushi wants to play aur jhoolay mein bethan cah rahi hai n kashish allows her but kehti hai apna khayal rakhna now sujal kashish ki god mein apna sar rakh k let jata hai oh that was sooooooooooooo romantic very very nice i can imagine kitne achay lag rahay honge woh log ...... 😳 me w8ing 4 the next part plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soooooooon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Ok nxt prt-

Aur s jaake,k ki god mein sarr rakhke let jaata hai,& closes his eyes

k-aare ye kya karr rahe ho,tumhe yahan sone aaye ho kya?

s-tum haan kaho to main kahin bhi so jaun!

k-uff ,tumse kuch kehna hi bekaar hai!

s-kaho matt bass karo aur karne do!

k-hey bhagwan kya karu main?

s-pyaar!

k-suno khushi ko akela wahan jaane ki ijazat deke maine sahi kia naa,usse chott to nahi lag jaegi naa,mian jaake dekhun?

S is not replyin,ankhen band karke k ki god mein dreamily pada hua hai

k-arre wo rahi khushi,arre dekho usse khelne ke lie apni umar ke dost bhi mil gae,achcha hai wo unn chotte ladkon ke saath khel rahi hai,uska mann laga rahega!

S gets up,hastly

s-ladke????????kahan hai ladke??????????unhone agar khushi paar line maarne ki koshish ki naa,to main….

k-[giglin]sujal,wo bachche hain,dekho saab kitna ghul-mil rahe hain!

s-tum jaanti nahi ho,ghulne milne ka nxt step is line maarna,chance maarna,achcha impression jamana,maine bhi to pehle pehle tumhare saath aisa hi…….[s stps]

K is hairaan,looks at s hairaani se

k-kya?[smiling]kya kha tumne

s-emm..wo..kuch nahi aise hi..chodo na..tum..chodo wo saab..

abb s ghaas paar let jaata hai,araam se

& k uske seene paar sar rakhke let jaati hai [u knw naa like makin a T shape]

k-achcha suno,ek baat kahun!

s-hmm

k-pata hai,muje lagta hai ki naa,tum ek bohot hi achche pita banoge!

s-pita?[bit hairaan]kyun?

k-kya kyun?laagta hai,to bass lagta hai!

S makes a face as if yeah yeah! Ur jokin! Its not true

K doesn't pay heed 2 this

k-aur pata hai kya,maine soch lia hai,I think bachcha jo hai naa shaadi ke 2 ya 3 saal baad hona chahie!tumhe kya laagta hai?

s-hmm[closing his eyes]

k-aur naa,muje to 1 hi bachcha chahie,ladka ya ladki kuch bhi!tumhe aur chahie to bata do!

s-kashish hum yahan family planin kyun kar rahe hain?

k-chup raho! Pata hai sujal kya?

s-kya?

k-muje lagta hai ki naa hamara pehla bachcha ladki hogi,pata hai kyun?

s-nahi pata

k-actually maine naa kahin pada tha ki attractive parents ke 1st born female child hi hote hain zyaadaa tar,so u c!

s-so,hum attractive parents ki category mein hain?

k-bilkul hain,tumhe nahi lagta?I think ur cute,& I think we look cute together 2! Aur suno naa!

s-hmm

k-kya hmm,tum sun nahi rahe ho,ki main kya keh rahi hoon!

s-main saab sun raha hoon,bolti raho!

k-haan,to I was sayin ki naa maine naam bhi soch lie hain,tumhe kuch change chahie ho to bata do,ladki hui to uska naam kajal aur ladka hua to uska naam suashsish!

s-hmm

k-pata hai kyun?

s-nahi pata

k-kyunki dono hi naam sujal aur kashish,yaani hamare naam ko jodkaar bante hain,samje! To ye hi naam rakhe naa?ya koi aur?

s-tum jo kahogi wo hi naam rakhenge!

k-ok[smiles]aur suno!

s-sunao!

k-ladki hui naa to meri tarah dikhni chahie,cute si,aur ladka hua naa bilkul tumhari tarah,macho sa,hai naa!

s-jaisa tum chahogi waisa hi dikhenge!

k-aur suno,tum hamare baby ko roz school bus tak chodoge samje,aur Sunday ke din uski sari zimmedaari tumhari,pehle keh rahi hoon,baad mein jhagda matt karna!

s-jaisa kaho waisa hi karunga![lazily,closes his eyes holdin k ka haath]

while k is dreamily smiling

k-sujal!

s-hmm[abb kya style]

k-usse naa tumhi home work karana,tumse achcha teacher usse kabhi mil sakta hai bhala! Pata hai,muje to apne baby ke bare mein sochkaar hi uspaar pyaar aa jaata hai!

s-itne bade papa saamne hain,usko to pyaar karti nahi ho!aur..khair jo bhi hai sab kar dunga!


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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 👏 👏 wow.....it was so sweet part....
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part 👏 !!!!!!!!!!!!........i can imagine everthing 😊 ..... when sujal and khushi are laughing on kashish.....because she got scared when she heared the tiger voice and closed her eye tight 😆 ..... and when the three of them went to the reptile zone..kashish hold khushi's hand and sujal walking ahead of him 😊 .... when suddenly he see a chipkali...step back and found khushi and kashish laughping at him....he also found out that it was there trick 😆 😆 ...... then they went to the park....to take rest for some time 😊 ..... then khushi leaves to the park where other kids were playing 😊 ..... leaving sujal and kashish alone there...sujal puts in head on kashish lap and close is eye....after some time kashish says while looking toward khushi who's playing with other kids.......and say's the she look so happy playing with those boys and girls 😊 ...... and sujal hears boy and gets up fast 😆 😆 😆 .... like a really protective father 😆 .... after that they lied on the grass and kashish start taking about what a good father sujal will be 😉 .... she has planned everything alredy 😆 ... like how many kid she want?..when?...boy or girl?.....everything 😊 😉 😊 ........ and sujal is like listening to her with his eyes closed 😊 ...... great part 👏 👏 👏 ....... really enjoy really your story.....continue soon plzzzzzz 👏 👏 👏 ..... want to see SK romance 👏 ......... continue soon plzzzzzzzzzz.......can't wait 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
finalllyy caught up with ur ff. 😃 its amazing 👏 the last part was really cute 😉 😛 cont soon 😃 can't wait
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Posted: 18 years ago
wooooooooooooooooooow, so cute 😳 . family planning ha!!!! 😉 neelu excellent yaar ⭐️ . kashish kitne aasani se sab kuch bol deti hai. ladka,ladki ka naam. unke saath kon kaisa rahenga. she will be the best mother ever and, yeah!! even sujal he will really be an adorable and lovely father 👏 . but yaar he is not showing any reaction 😕 😕 😕 . sirf 'yes yes' karta hai that's it. yaar usne bhi thoda interest lena chahiye na!!!! 😉 . you know after seeing this all i think sujal ye sab aise hi nashe main keheraha hai in kashish ki godh but he will change i suppose.usse baad mein pata chalenga what all he said to her and he will get mad at her as again that betrayal thought will come to his mind 😡 . plz neelu aisa kuch mat dikhana!!!plz,plz,plz. 😭
continue soon yaar plz....................can't wait any longer. bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 hey just loved the last line of the second part ab toh kashish ko samajne toh do ki sujal ko pyaar chahiye.............

hey you are a star girl cont soon ⭐️
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Posted: 18 years ago
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U R JUST AWESUMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!

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