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Posted: 20 years ago
nids, natz, rameena and golu...great parts..love ur stories...plz cont soon 😊 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue armaaan.plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 👏
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ok..farahji telefilms mein kuch technical problems ho gayien thi, jiski wajah se episode could not be posted.....well, its all working now.....so heres the ...um..fourth (i think)...part!

KTH 2...recap:...sujal and kashish go to office while akshat apne bhai aur mom keh mana karne keh bawajood bhi sujal se office milne gaya......so here it cont.


akshat:..kashsih mein tum se nahi....apne...doost se milne aya hon.

sujal and akshat exchange gazes while kashish smiles...

akshat: (walks upto sujal)....humari doosti keh beech mein jitni bhi duriyan....shikayatein hain.....sab mitane aya hon

sujal keeps looking at him
akshat:...jo kuch beet gaya kya hum usse..........bhoola....i mean.....kya hum phir se.......(he looks at kashish).......sujal....mein yahan.....
sujal is constantly looking at him! and then finally brings a smile across his face.......

sujal:...akshat...(he shows confidence...sujal ki speciality)....hum doost the, hain aur........(he puts his hands on akshat's shoulder).....aur raheinge......koi shak? (he questions innocently)

akshat ki ankhein num ho jati hain, he rest his hand on sujals hand and comes forward to hugs him....while kashish in the background wipes her tears and smiles.......)

"yeh doost hum nahi choreinge....
choreinge dum agar
tera saath na choreinge"....(nahi nahi, yeh extra piece hai.....the song is not included in the scene...lol)

ajj jaise sujal ko sab kuch mil gaya tha....apni doosti....apna pyaar...........apni zindagi....he was full of happiness........magar no no no....itni jaldhi nahi...koi tha jo uski khushiyon ko bardaab karna chahte tha.........

rewa:...swayam yeh akshat ko kya ho jata hai...kyun woh ab bhi un garewals se rishta rakhna chahta hai.....muje kuch samajh nahi araha.....(she is heavy hearted while swayam holds her)

swayam:...mom....sambhaliye khud ko...akshat to bacha hai, usko un garewals ki chalon ka andaza nahi, likin i promise you mom.....mein un garewals ko barbaad kar don ga......kahin ka nahi choronga!...i am promise mom...i promise.....(he gives her a consoling hugs....yeh kya hota hai 😛 😆 ...anywayz..yeh lines bahut suni suni hain....hehe....lol)

......swayam ki ankhon mein badle ki aag saaf naraz arahi thi.......
swayam:...sujal garewal....you're finished!! (bhai dhamke dar music ho jaye....lol)

break time......sangi yeh breaks zaroori hain.....sponsors se paise jo pakre huwe hain...lol!!!.......

so we're back!.........

akshat:...ab muje chalna chahiye
kashish:..abhi to aye ho
akshat:, jis kaam keh liye aya tha woh maqsad pura ho gaya (he smiles at sujal)
sujal:..to....resgination waapis loge?(he asks cheekily)
akshat:...kal se....
sujal:..(pats him)...thanx
akshat:...sujal plz....yeh keh ke sharminda mat karo
sujal:..acha thodi der to ruko...mein coffee mangwata hon....... (he turns back to call the operator)
akshat:..nahi sujal plz, muje kaam hai.........aur phir tum dono bhi to koi project discuss kar rahe the.....carry on with that (he says mischievioulsy)
kashish aur sujal dono kuch sharminda se ho jate hain...
sujal:..haan...woh....umm....
akshat:....(giggles)..mein chalta hoon......bye kashish!

he leaves and closes the door behind......ok pehle door ke andar ki baat ya bahir ki............i think pehle andar hi dekh lete hain! 😉

kashish:..aj mein bahut khush hon sujal..
sujal:..hmm, mein bhi!
kashish:..toooo...coffee mang waye.....
sujal:...well..pehle woh project wali baat to puri kar lein...(he winks at her)
kashish:...sujal ab bhi nahi sudhro ge......(she blushes)....
sujal:....kabhie nahi...
kashish hugs him....while she says:...yeh pyaar humari kamzoori nahi takat ban na chahiye sujal.......

sujal:...yeh pyaar meri takat, meri khushi aur mere jeene ka maqsad hai kashish......isi keh dum par to meri jeet hai!
kashish:...humari!......

ok so alls well inside....ab zara bahir bhi dekh lein.....

akshat is stepping outside the building (RnG) when someone pushes him back..
akshat:..are bhai...sambhal keh
rishi:..tumhara bhai nahi hon mein.....aur dobara muje is naam se mat bulana warna is ka matlab bhi bhool jao ge.......understand (he points a finger at his face)

akshat ignores him, fixes his collar and starts to walk!

rishi: (puts a hand on akshat's chest)...hey.....yahan ane ki himaat mat karna dobara.......aur apne us bhaii se keh dena.....keh ab woh rishi garewal se bach keh rahe warna........

........akshat and rishi face to face.....looking into each other with hatred......keh achanak.......episode kahatm ho jata hai.........lol!!

ok..so will continue soon. plz do comment...aur sorry aj sirf ek hi break thi...... 😛 take lots of care
love............farah!
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Posted: 20 years ago
THE MOST AWAITED PART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I THINK....

ALL DA WISHES GRANTED!!FARAH,PINK READ IT 4 SURE OR MUJHA INDIVIDUAL COMMENTZZ CHAHIYA...GOT IT 😉

ITZZZ R SWEETOO 😳 😳 BAK SOO TIME 4 CELEBRATIONS!!!! BUT OOOPPPPPSSSSS........


Kucch Dard Zindagi Ke Part 7

Recap: Police comes to inquire about some criminal, seeing the police kashish is scared… rishi informs everyone that they're big b is coming home… the kids plan on doing a surprise party as its not only the kushi of his coming but also his b-day…. They tell kashish to come over the next day so she can help them out in the decorations, kashish agrees… on going home kashish realizes its sujals b-day also the day after tomorrow…. The next day rishi comes to get kashish, kashish helps out in the preparations…. All r taken aback seeing akshat and kashish is happy seeing her old friend…. everyone takes their spots again, n someone walks in, hearing the voice kashish is taken aback, but before she can think something, the lights hit her, she looks up and the thaali falls from her hand…………
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(KASHISH FAINTZZ AGAIN 😆 😆 ...WAT 2 DOO...TRAGIC STORY HAI)


All the shocked when the thaali drops from kashishs hand, kashish starts feeling dizzy and as she closes her eyes she has flashbacks…. The doctor saying "im sorry hum unhe bachaa nahee sukay" aarti yelling "sujal is dead" doctor handing her sujals stuff…. She telling aarti "sujal kaahin nahee gayaa hai zinda hai…." she talking to sujals photo saying "aisa lugtaa hai barso ka intezaar kal katumb hojaya ga……" she faints and aarti runs and catches her…. all r shocked….
Piyush runs to kashish…. Veena tells him to take her to the room downstairs….. kushboo runs to get water…. Piyush lays her on the bed and rubs her hand "kashish…….." aarti sits beside her… kushboo comes with the water…. Veena sprinkles some water on kashishs face…. she does this two three times when kashish slowly gains conscious and mumbles sujals name…. Piyush and veena are taken aback……

Outside…. Rishi and aman go towards the gate…..
Rishi- welcome sujal bhahiyya!
Sujal- hey rishi….. (he hugs him)
Kushboo comes outside and goes to her big b….
He then goes and hugs aman and kushboo…. All wish him happy b-day…. Rishi is upset that cuz of kashish, they're whole plan went to waste and their idea of making their big b happy also did….. aman tries to calm in down, but in vain…..

Piyush tells veena to go out as sujal is probably waiting for her…. veena looks at kashish, when aarti tells her to go and shes here with kashish…. Veena gives a faint smile and walks out….. aarti tells piyush to go to, at first piyush declines when aarti forces him and he leaves….. outside veena hugs sujal, and tells kushboo to get another thaali…. Kushboo quickly gets the thaali, and veena does sujals arti…. Veena hugs him again and becomes emotional saying he came back after such a long time…..
Aman- mom please! Give piyush bhaiyya his turn!
Veena- dehka na sujal kaise kurte hai yeh sab mere saaht…. Bas ab tu mujhe chorke kaahi nahee jaana…..
Sujal- mama aap bhi na…. Khoob ache se jaanti ho mujhe apne se na door behjna ke bahane….
Aman- big b u please go meet piyush bhaiyya, I'll take care of her……
Sujal giggles and hugs piyush….. piyush asks him how he is….. sujal nods…. The guest also wish him…..

Inside kashish gets up screaming sujals name…….
Kashish- didi……..didi…….. didi……. Mere sujal…….. wo zinda hai……. apne dehka didi……. Didi apne dehka na…….. mere sujal…… mein kehti ti ke usse kucch nahee hua hai….. wo lotega…….. yeh mere pagaal pann nahee tha……… mere…… mere sujal…….
She gets up and runs towards the door when aarti holds her….
Aarti- kashish sambhal aapne aapko! Kya kurne jaari hai….. waha sab baahr hai…. dehk kashish….. tu plz…….
Kashish- didi aapko sab ki purri hai…… aur main yaha……..
Aarti- pagaalo jaise baatein mat kur…. Kashish waqt ko dehk…… main jaanti hu tune is pal ka….. per mujhe samaj nahee ataa ke ager sujal zinda tha to wo sab jo do saal phela hua kya tha, aur sujal humse door kyun raha?? Tujhe bataya kyun nahee!
Kashish- didi mujhe koi farq nahee purta in baato se, mere sujal loht ayaa hai mere liyya itna hi kaafi hai………
Aarti- kashish!! Bas kur…. Kashish tu………. Main jaanti hu tere dil ki halaat, thora saber aur……. Tujhe meri kasum……… hum sujal se milenge yaha nahee…….. kul……. Abhi tu plz……….. kashish waha baahr taraa taraa ke sawaal uhtenge……. Plz kashish……..
Kashish looks up and then hugs her didi…….. mumbling one line constantly "mere sujal……."

Aarti and kashish come outside…… veena comes to kashish and kashish manages to apologize to her…… when veena says its ok and it wasent her fault, she probably worked too much….. she takes kashish n aarti to sujal………
Veena- sujal behta
He turns around……. "ji mama" he gets stunned to see aarti and kashish….. he looks away from there and looks at his mom……..
Veena- sujal yeh kashish hai…… piyush ki hone waali patni……
Sujal gives a faint smile when kashish shakes her head in "no no" way……… aarti holds her hand tight…….
Veena- kashish yeh mere sujal hai……
Aman comes over "sabse laadla behta…….. so bhabhi what do u say about our big b??"
Kashish- bahut aache hai tumhare big b!
Sujal looks up……
Veena- per kashish tum to sirf sujal se abhi mili ho….. phir kaise keh diyya????
Kashish- kaai baar insaan ke chehra pe lihka hota hai ke wo kaise hai……..
Sujal interrupts "ji nahee…. Chehra pe jaane ki bhool kabhi mat ki jiyya ga (kashish is taken aback as well as aarti) kyun ke zaroori nahee hai ke jo chehra pe dihkaa wohi ander se ho insaan…. Saahla dehra hu, main yeh galti kur chukaa hu……."
Kashish gives him a "what r u saying" look…… veena just smiles…… and tells kashish not to mind him……..

Piyush comes to veena……. "mama main pratham ko lena jaara hu….. wo airport pe kurra hai….. raaht bahut hogaai hai, to mujhe lugta hai mere jaana hi saahee hai…… waise bhi wo akela nahee hai………" kushboo hits her elbow on piyushs and piyush covers his mouth……..
Sujal- pratham araa tha to mere saaht kyun nahee aya? Aur akela nahee kisi ke saaht aya hai kiske???
Kushboo- wo bahi kisi dost ke saaht ayaa hoga…… u don't worry huh……. Piyush bhaiyya go…
Piyush- sujal u take care of my hone waali patni……….
Kashish looks up while sujal gives a shocked look…… he doesn't know what to say…. Rishi gets up on the stage and tells everyone to enjoy the party and bring their partners to the dance floor….. piyush tells sujal to take kashish as he has to go…… sujals face is as if someone has given him a 440 volts shock!
Sujal- main…… per……
Piyush- ab tu per wer mat kur…… aur jaa……..
Kusbhoo- big b plz take bhabhi to the dance floor wurna yeh yehi kurre rahenge aur waha pratham bhaiyya iska intezaar kurte rahenge!
Sujal gives a weak smile….. and puts his hand out…… kashish takes it…… both dance…..
Song in background:

Tere Naam Hum Ne Kiya Hai Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Ho Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Pyaar Bahut Karte Hai Tumse Ishq Hai Tu Humara Sanam
Ho Ishq Hai Tu Humara Sanam

Gulshan Bhi To Ab Veerana Lagta Hai
Har Aapna Hum Ko Begana Lagta Hai
Hum Teri Yaadon Mein Khoye Rehte Hai
Log Hume Pagal Deewana Kehte Hai
Tere Bina Tere Bina
Tere Bina Naamumkin Hai Zindagi Ka Guzara Sanam
Ho Zindagi Ka Guzara Sanam

Naino Se Behte Ashqo Ke Dharo Mein
Humne Tujhko Dekha Chand Sitaro Mein
Virhaki Agni Mein Pal Pal Tapti Hai
Ab To Sasein Teri Mala Japti Hai
Tere Liye Tere Liye
Tere Liye Is Duniya Ka Har Sitam Hai Gawara Sanam
Ho Har Sitam Hai Gawara Sanam
Tere Naam Hum Ne Kiya Hai Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Ho Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam

Kashish is starring at sujal, while sujals eyes are at the floor…..
Kashish- sujal…….
Sujal looks away from the floor……
Kashish- sujal tum mujhse baaht kyun nahee kurte….. 2 saal kaha thay…. Sujal jawaab do…. Plz sujal….. aisa kyun kurre ho tum???
Sujal lets go of kashishs hand seeing his mom is no where around and walks off leaving a shocked kashish……. Rishi is observing all this and isn't liking it one bit….. he wonders whats there btwn sujal and kashish, that kashish fainted seeing him n while dancing he left her mid-way and tears in her eyes…….

Aarti comes to kashish and tells her to relax……
Kashish- didi wo to mujhse baaht bhi nahee kurra….. yeh to bataya ke maine kiya kya hai…..
Aarti- kashish plzz….. dehk yaha sab hai…… thore pal aur intezaar kurle……
After awhile Piyush comes to the gate aarti notices him and tells kashish to act normal, otherwise piyush will ask questions, to which they have no answers…….

Piyush calls out for his mom and then sujal….. his mom comes over to him, and piyush tells her something in her ears to which she gets happy hearing….. piyush asks her where sujal is when she said he was here dancing with kashish a while ago….. rishi comes there and tells he probably when to the bathroom as we didn't even give him a chance to freshen up and that it was a long journey….. piyush agrees….. sujal comes down and kushboo takes him to where piyush is standing near the gate………… veena calls kashish….. kashish walks over to veena…..
Veena- sujal dehk piyush ne to shaadi ke liyya haa kurdi hai aur humhe bahut jald aik khoobsurat bahu nahee behti milne waali hai……. ab tu bhi mujhe eik aur behti de dena…..
Sujal- kya matlub????
Kushboo- big b come on….. itne bhi anjaan mat baano…….. mama aapki shaadi ke baare main baaht kurri hai…….
Kashish ka chehra aisa hojaa tha hai ke jaise ke usne kisi ka bhoot dehkliyya…… she waits for sujals answer……
Sujal- mama per…….
Veena- dehk aaj tere koi per wer nahee chaale gi…. Piyush bhi to yehi kehta ta na ke usse shaadi nahee kurni, per phir wo raazi hogaya na…… sujal tu apni maa ki tamana puri nahee karega….. aare main murne se phela tere bacho ko dehkna chaati hu…….
Sujal sighs out loudly holding his head "mama tumhe kucch nahee hora!"
Veena- theek hai nahee maan….. tujhe meri fikr kaha hai…… koi baaht nahee….. mur jaaogi tere bacho ko dehka bager…….
Sujal- mama kaisi baatein kurri ho aap…. Aap to jaante ho na…….
Veena- bas mujhe kucch nahee jaana…..jo jaana tha jaan gaai…….
She starts crying and aman smiles and whispers to rishi "mom kaai baar ache jugaa emotional blackmailing use kurti hai" rishi giggles……..
Veena- haato tum log yaha se……
Sujal- mama kaha jaare ho……
Veena- murne….. tujhse matlub…….
Sujal holds his moms hand and makes her turn around "aap yehi jaahte ho na ke main shaadi kurlu??? Theek hai main shaadi ke liyya tayaar hu!!! Kush" kashish is traumatized……. Its as if "uske pehro taale zameen nikul gaai ho" veena hugs sujal……
Veena- maine tere liyya ladki bhi dehk ruhki hai……..
Aarti feels sorry for kashish and wants to be with her but then goes against it thinking it might put up questions………
Pratham comes in and then moves out of the way….. sujal is surprised "priya…… tum"
Priya- hey handsome!
Sujal smiles while all r very happy…….
Kushboo- wow! Mere dono bhabhiyya bahut khoobsurat hai……
She goes and hugs priya……
[background on priya: shes prathams sister and sujals best friend….. she spend a lot of moments with sujal…….. she understands him and knows him very well….. she was in love with him since high school….. but never actually had the guts to tell him…… she knows everything that has happened with sujal………. Even sujal is very comfortable with her…… he can tell her anything and everything without giving it a single thought…… she helps sujal out in business, which he takes care of in London……]
kashish puts her hand on the table which is a little far from the door…. Theres a show piece which is laying there, she holds it tightly……… bloods starts oozing out of her hand as she remembers old moments spend with sujal………. And thinks "tum mere sujal nahee ho sukte…… wo itna badal sukta hai kabhi nahee…… tum aisa kyun kurre ho…… maine kiya kya hai…….?????"
sujal notices the blood oozing out from kashishs hand, and quietly tells piyush when neither his mom or kashish is looking…….. piyush goes over to kashish…….. sujal leaves from there…. Aarti too runs where kashish is standing………

piyush- kashish yeh sab???
Kashish- huh wo…. Main to……..
She runs out from there……. Piyush is very confused with her behavior….. aarti runs after her…. piyush to is about to walk out when rishi calls him and tells him that lalit is looking for him…… piyush looks at the gate and then where his father is standing…… he walks off to his father…… rishi goes outside when no one is looking……….

Aarti- kashish ruhk! Main kehri hu ruhk kashish….. kaha jaari hai tu? Pagaal ho gaai hai….. yeh dehk kitna khoon behra hai……. kya kurne jaari hai……..
Kashish- didi maine kabhi nahee socha tha ke mere pyaar itna badal sukta hai….. kabhi nahee socha tha, mere intezaar mujhe kabhi yeh waqt dikaya ga…….. sujal ko kissi aur ka hote we dehker mujhse bardasht nahee hota……. Wo mujhse baaht thak nahee kurra hai…… bataa ta kyun nahee hai ke maine kya kiya hai…. didi wo mere saaht aisa kyun kurra hai…… kissi aur ka hone jaara hai?!?!?
Aarti- tu bhi to kisi aur ki ho chuki hai…..
Kashish looks up stunned!
Aarti- kashish dehk main yeh nahee keh sukti ke wo tujhse baaht kyun nahee kurra….. nahee keh sukti ke wo kyun gaya tere zindagi se……. haa per itna keh sukti hu jaha tu aage burri hai zindagi main to wo kyun nahee…….
Kashish- main aage burri hu…. Didi….. yeh faisla mere kab tha??? Kab maine piyush se shaadi kurna chaahi thi? Yeh sab to aap log chaate te na??? Arre ager mere uper hota na to main apni puri zindagi kya saato janam apne sujal ka intezaar kurti!!! Maine piyush se shaadi ke liyya haa isliya ki, kyun ke aapki umeedein judi thi isse…… didi……… aap……
Aarti- tu mujhe galat samaj ri hai kashish…… dehk jaan iswaqt yeh sab baatein kurne ka waqt nahee hai….. hum ghar jaaker…..
Kashish- nahee didi main us party main wapis nahee jaa sukti! Kabhi nahee……. Aap intezaar karo ghar lotne ka….. main abhi jaari hu……
Aarti- kashish pagaalpann mat dikaa….. suhn…… kashish tujhe tere durd chuppa na seehkna hoga….. kashish tere her durd ka ehsaas mujhe haai….. tu yeh bhi soch main ager aisa kehri hu to kyun?? Kashish main bhi jaana chaati hu sujal ke yuhi tere zindagi se jaane ki wajaaa…. Jaana chaati hu ke usne mere behn ko itna kyun rulaya…… per kashish is waqt sahee samay nahee hai yeh baaht kurne ka…… sab hai…. kyun tu aapne rishtey ka mazaak banaa na chAHTI HAI???



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Posted: 20 years ago
ok...i'll continue (pyaar keh rang!)

kashish aur piyush class attend karke bahir ate hain...kashish was still very angry and holding the 100 rupee note....

piyush:...kuch thanda ho jaye
kashish looks at piyush:...agar muje woh mil jaye to mein uski woh halat karungi keh woh yaad rakhe ga?
piyush:....kon..kisi kya halat karogi keh kon kya yaad rakhe ga? (totally confused)
kashish:..piyush......mein uski baat kar rahi hon jisne yeh...yeh (she shows him the note again)....jisne yeh harkat ki hai.......
piyush:..oh god...tum jaisi larkiyan
kashish:..kya?...what do you mean by muj jaisi larkiyan? (she gets furious)....
piyush:..mera matlab...tum jaisi larkiyan bahut emotional hoti hain...kashish...yaar, ek to usne tumhari madat ki upar se use hi bura bhala keh rahi ho......chalo ab jao aur jake kapre saaf kar wa lo.....(he giggles)
kashish:...piyush mein tumhe (she raises her hand keh uski nazar kisi cheez peh parti hai.....ek gari peh.....are yeh to wohi gari hai.....aur yeh kya....us gari ko kholne ki koi koshish kar raha hai......kuch saaf nazar nahi araha......he has his back towards us....ok lets go.....)
kashish:..piyush......woh dekho...
piyush: kahan (starts to look around).....koi achi larki hai ?
kashish:...are stupid...woh ...woh udhar (she points)..yeh wohi gari hai na........
piyush:....haan....shayad.....
kashish:...aur yeh shakas shayad wohi hai jisne mere saath batameezi ki..........chalo.....abhi sabak sikhati hon
piyush:...are yaar rehne do na.....bara aadmi lag ta hai
kashish:..bara ho ya chota.....mujse batameezi karne ka anjaam acah nahi hoga.....tumhe nahi ana mat ao, mein khudhi chali jati hon.....(she leaves instantly....while piyush follows her too)

yahan gari keh paas ek aadmi gari khol raha hai jab usse kashish peeche se bulati hai

kashish:..excuse me!
the guy turns around....wah! kya dashing banda hai....kya ala suit hai woh bhi branded.....shoes polished.....magical scent aur upar se sunglasses.....yes its none other than our very own sujal garewal..........! taliyan ho jayein!!! 👏 😆

sujal removes his glasses.....:..jee...aap ne mujse kuch kaha.........(sujal was impressed by kashish par pyaar jaisi kisi chiriya ne abhi tak dil peh dastak nahi de thi....lol).........
kashish:..jee, filhaal to yana apke siva aur muje koi nahi nazar araha, to mein apse hi baat kar rahi hon
sujal looks at her suspiciously...

kashish:..yeh gari apki hai?
piyush:..kashish, rehne do na
kashish:..tum chup raho (she tells piyush)..jee to yeh gari apki hai....
sujal:.jee...meri hi hai
kashish:....oh i see (she smiles at piyush and picks up a stone from near by....goes infront of the car and smashes the front window)......
piyush:...satya nas!!!
sujal (gets shocked)....what the bloody......yeh yeh kya tareeka hai....do i know you...?....apne meri gari keh saath (he touches the broken glass while kashish smiles).........
kashish:..oh..i am sorry........waise gari dekh keh lagta hai keh aap kahte peete khandaan se hain........to khudhi jur wa leejiye ga yeh sheesha.........
sujal looks at her with anger......
kashish:...par yeh lein......(she hands him the 100 rupee note).....yeh mechanic ko tip mein dene ke kaam ayega......(she leaves after saying this and shows attitude)

sujal: (after she leave to piyush)...yeh khud ko samjhti kya hai....mental hospital se ayi hai kya?....
piyush:..woh...i am sorry on her behalf likin abhi subah apne jo uske saath kiya ussi ka ghusa usne is gari pe nikal diya.....
sujal:...mein ne?....(hez shocked...)...mein ne kye kiya.....
but before piyush could say something ek awaaz ati hai
voice:...big b.....papers mile kya?
sujal looks on his side aur wahan se ek aur dashing young man ata hai towards sujal....
voice:...kya huwa.....mein ne pucha papers mil gaye hain to chabi de dein...i have to go.....

sujal:...o...to yeh tumhari har kat hai
voice:..meri?
sujal: (hands him the mote)....subah tumhari is tip ki recipt meri gari ki front window peh chap gayi hai woh!....kitni dafa kaha hai rishi.....to stay in control.....ab bhukto....meri gari ke sheeshe theek kar wa ke office mein lana.....and you better!

o to yeh rishi tha , jisne subah kashish keh saath....oh ho....bechara sujal....muft mein saza ka haqdar huwa........(yeh mein nahi..piyush soch raha hai....who was listening to both the brothers)

piyush:...i am really sorry...woh kashsih...ghuse mein....
sujal:...its ok...i guess unko galat fehmi hui hogi....khair, itna ghusa bhi acha nahi hota....(sujal begins to leave when piyush asks his name)

sujal:...i'm sujal....sujal garewal....(he hands him a business card)......nice meeting you!......(sujal leaves in another car that he had come in.........ok so huwa yeh keh rishi subah sujal ki gari mein agaya, jabke sujal ki kuch important files gari mein hi reh gayi.....for which sujal had to come to rishi's college.......par yahan files to mili saath hi saath.......kashish bhi.............ab kya yeh mulaqat akhri thi ya ......abhi sirf shuruwat hui thi......hmmmmm.......)

sujal and piyush both leave, while rishi looks at the glass!

a girl comes upto him:...hi rishiiii!.....aaj raat kya kar rahe ho....?
rishi:...aaj raat?...(he looks at her and then at the broken window)....kisi se hisaab pura karna hai..........

ok...guys do comment plz.....hope you liked it and hope it wasnt too pakao.....anywayz...coming up sujal aur kashish ki meeting......lets see if it turns out to be any good!..........take care

farah!
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Posted: 20 years ago
very gd!! farah aaga bohat hi achi hogi ...YAAYY!! N ROMANTIC BHI!! 😳 😆 😉

nids
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Posted: 20 years ago
hey farah thanks story cont karne ke liye kisi ne to likha par ab jara bada part likhna aur jaldi pls aur apna naya fan fiction bhi cont karo
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Posted: 20 years ago
WOW nids....yeeeppeeee sujal is back....muhaawwaaahh!...i am soo happy!!!!........magar why he is like this...aur woh kon mara tha...aur kyun mara tha....aur kyun woh kashish se baat nahi kar raha aur kyun kashish uske ghar walon ko nahi janti thi..............ufff....itne sare sawal......ab jaldhi se next part likho warna mein tension keh mare pagal ho jaongi..........waise....sujal aur kashish ek saath hain na.....kahin uski shaadi piyush se to nahi hogi......acha acha....dont tell....mein par longi!....lol.....
great work and keep it up!!!!........ 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
hey nids ur story is very nice par sujal aise kyun kar raha hai un dono ki galat fahmi door karo pls muje padte hue bhi kuch ho raha hai koi itna rude kaise ho sakta hai wo bhi sujal nahi pls us ka naam mat kharab karo aur farah nice story cont karo pata nahi yeh rishi hamesha in ke bich jagda kyun kar wa deta hai
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Posted: 20 years ago
jaldi se pyaar ke rang ka agla part likho

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