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Posted: 18 years ago
oh sorry kal aik hi scene pe commnet kai baar baar remove raha tah mera sab likah hua 😡 haan to subah mein kashish wakes up aur khuhsi bhi uthjati hai kashish ab fresh hoke sujal ko uthane lagti aur sujal ko sota dekh ker she goes to him aur uskko seene pe apna haath rakh k aur sar rakh k uske kaan mein kehti hai k uthju na sujuuu oh that was sooooooo sweet na 😳 aur sujal sleeply ehmmhmm,aur kashish phirse kehti hai uth jao na baby aur phir sujal ka kehna kia hau kashu? 😆 😆 this was very funny by him 😆 aur tabhi khushi enters 😳 aur suddenly scen changes 😆 now khushi kehti hai machi macho abhi tak nahi uthe kia?aur kashish kehti ahi k meine boat kaam kerna hai tum uthao apne messo koaur ab in the next part kashish ka ana aur dekhna k khushi sujal k upaar bethi hai kashsih foran se khushio ko kehti ahi utro neechay khuhsi meccho k lag jayegi aur sujal ka kashish ko kehna k koi baat nahi kashish kia ho gaya was very very appriciatable 😳after that he hugs khushi n closes his eyes 😳 aur khushi bhi apni aankhien band ker leti haitab kashish ka apne sar pe haath marna aur bolna k tum ise bigaardo ge sujalaur waisay aap;log ne zoo nahi jana kia?ab zoo ka naam sun k to khushi khush ho gayi 😃 chalo na mesho chalo zoo aur ab sjal kehta hai acha acha babaab on breakfast table khushi n kashish r their aur sujal ata hai ab sujal kashish ko cherna start! 😆 haan to kashsih tum bhi chalo gi kia hamare saathaur haan q?aray nahi bus woh security reason ab kashish ghussa 😡 k sujal mujhay aisa mazak bikul pasand nhaiaur sujal is not ready to b stop n he says k mein mazak kahn ker raha ha hun i mean it 😆 😆 ab kashish cries like a kidmein dadi ko batongi 😆 n sujal slowly mein dady ko batongi,mami ko batongi 😆 aur kashsih like thsi kia kaha?aur sujal chnages the topic k wht a bright sunny day kia din chuna ahi tumne wah!n kashish bechari raises her eys poor kashish sujal bhi na kitan tang kerta hai bechari ko 😕 per pyaar bhi to karta haina 😳 i think yehi wajh hai k kashsih uski her baa sunleti haivery nice parts well done dear 😳 plz cont soonnnnnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh sorry kal aik hi scene pe commnet kai baar baar remove raha tah mera sab likah hua 😡 haan to subah mein kashish wakes up aur khuhsi bhi uthjati hai kashish ab fresh hoke sujal ko uthane lagti aur sujal ko sota dekh ker she goes to him aur uskko seene pe apna haath rakh k aur sar rakh k uske kaan mein kehti hai k uthju na sujuuu oh that was sooooooo sweet na 😳 aur sujal sleeply ehmmhmm,aur kashish phirse kehti hai uth jao na baby aur phir sujal ka kehna kia hau kashu? 😆 😆 this was very funny by him 😆 aur tabhi khushi enters 😳 aur suddenly scen changes 😆 now khushi kehti hai machi macho abhi tak nahi uthe kia?aur kashish kehti ahi k meine boat kaam kerna hai tum uthao apne messo koaur ab in the next part kashish ka ana aur dekhna k khushi sujal k upaar bethi hai kashsih foran se khushio ko kehti ahi utro neechay khuhsi meccho k lag jayegi aur sujal ka kashish ko kehna k koi baat nahi kashish kia ho gaya was very very appriciatable 😳after that he hugs khushi n closes his eyes 😳 aur khushi bhi apni aankhien band ker leti haitab kashish ka apne sar pe haath marna aur bolna k tum ise bigaardo ge sujalaur waisay aap;log ne zoo nahi jana kia?ab zoo ka naam sun k to khushi khush ho gayi 😃 chalo na mesho chalo zoo aur ab sjal kehta hai acha acha babaab on breakfast table khushi n kashish r their aur sujal ata hai ab sujal kashish ko cherna start! 😆 haan to kashsih tum bhi chalo gi kia hamare saathaur haan q?aray nahi bus woh security reason ab kashish ghussa 😡 k sujal mujhay aisa mazak bikul pasand nhaiaur sujal is not ready to b stop n he says k mein mazak kahn ker raha ha hun i mean it 😆 😆 ab kashish cries like a kidmein dadi ko batongi 😆 n sujal slowly mein dady ko batongi,mami ko batongi 😆 aur kashsih like thsi kia kaha?aur sujal chnages the topic k wht a bright sunny day kia din chuna ahi tumne wah!n kashish bechari raises her eys poor kashish sujal bhi na kitan tang kerta hai bechari ko 😕 per pyaar bhi to karta haina 😳 i think yehi wajh hai k kashsih uski her baa sunleti haivery nice parts well done dear 😳 plz cont soonnnnnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part 👏 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!.......khushi and sujal are so sweet 😊 😆 😛 😆 😊 ........... sujal is so sweet when is teasing kashish.....asking if she has permission to go to the zoo 😆 .... and poor kashish is all confused 😕 ........ khushi enjoying the scene 😆 ........ continue soon plzzzzzzzzz........can't wait 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part....nice one...pllzzzzzzzzzz continuw soonngr8 part....nice one...pllzzzzzzzzzz continuw soonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
gggrrrrr8888888888888888 part neelu 😉. kitne cute hai teenon bhi 😳 . and look and kashish yaar she is so worried ki khushi sujal ke paith par bethi hai to sujal ko lag jayegi😕😕😕. kashish you are so concered about sujal, itna bhi nahi samajti ki khushi kitni choti hai. sujal is as cool as ever!!!! 😉 . satana kabhi nahi chodega. indirectly he calls her a human animal who will scare away everyone 😆😆😆 . the part was awesome as usual 👍🏼 . i am sure agle part mein bahot masti hogi. they will go to zoo. will enjoy a lot 😆😆😆 . usme khushi and sujal will tease kashish, usse satayenge. kashish will try to be upset but then sujal usse manayga 😳😳😳 . they will also have some sweet romance between them. they will get to know each other more closely ❤️ . the next parts will be hilarious.continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzzz...... can't wait any longer. bye. takecare. 😊😛😊. "i have also commented on your other fan-fic of sujal and kashish. do read it!!"
Edited by fravashi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

muma ko bol dungi!!!!!!!!!papa ko bol dungi!11!military ko bol dungi!!!!!1police ko bol dungi!!!!!!!! 🤣

that lines by sujal were so funny...i swear

Edited by ami_princess - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
plz continue i waiting to see zoo with sk and kh 😊 and gr8 part 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
cont koro na plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

Ok nxt prt-

s-kuch nahi,kuch nahi,main to keh raha tha ki wht a bright sunny day!kya din chuna hai tumne zoo jaane ke lie,brilliant!tumhare chunav ka to jawab nahi,jst awesome!

K rolls her eyes sarcastically

abb teeno ka naashta khatam hota hai,& prepare 2 go

s kh ko apni god mein le leta hai

s-aaie madam!aapki savari taiyaar hai!

Kh giggles,aur s ke god mein chadke,kisses s on cheeks

Kh-[giglin]mechoooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!

Teeno reach the zoo

S phir kh ko apni god mein le leta hai

s-kashish,tum aur khushi yahin ruko main tickets leke aata hoon!thik hai!

k-thik hai,2 adult aur 1 child,hai naa means 25 rupae

s-nahi,2 child aur ek adult

k-sujal tum child nahi ho,6 feet ke aadmi hokar khudko child kehte ho!

s-main nahi ,main to tumhari baat kar raha tha!

k-sujal!tum phir se shuru ho gae!

s-achcha achcha ,main tickets leke aata hoon

k-hmm[smiles]

s kh ko k ke pass safely khada karta hai,& k holds kh ka haath

& s goes 2 tak tickets

kaafi der ho gai hai

k & kh r waitin ,abhi bhi s nahi aaya

k-pata nahi,tumhare mesho kahan the gae,itna rime to nahi lagna chahie!

Tabhi-

K sees s comin looking lik a road side vendor

Haath mein bhaar bhaarke chip,biscuits,etc ke packets leke

S comes 2 k & kh

s-kashish,ye lo tickets,pocket mein hai nikal lo,emm..mere haath zaraaa busy!

k-[hairaan & giglin]tum ye saab kya utha lae?

s-arre mujhe laga,kahin andaar bhook-vook laag gai to,wahan kuch milta nahi hai andaar thts y!

k-par itna saara!tumhari yehi aadaat bohot buri hai tum harr cheez zarurat se zyaada le lete ho!

s-kaam paad jae to,islie lia!

k-kum kaise padega!aage se mujse poochke lia karo!

s-thik hai,thik hai chalo abb andaar!

k-chalo [k strts 2 go]

s-hello,madam,ticket to nikal lijie meri pocket se!

k-oh haan![k s ke pocket se tickets nikal leti hai]

s-abb chalo!

k-ruko!

s-abb kya!

k-abb ye ki,itne saare packets lekaar tum andaar kaise ghumoge,tumhe dekhkaar muje tension ho rahi hai,2-3 packets rakho,aur baaki uss dukaan wale ko wapas karke aao!

s-abb wapas those naa hota hai,

k-saab hota hai!

s-dekho,main baki packets car mein rakh deta hoon,khush?

k-hmm,[murmers]paar wapas kar dete naa!

s-kashish plz!

k-jao jaldi abb rakhke aao!

S packets car mein rakhke aata hai!

Teeno enter the zoo

Kh s ki god mein hi hai

Kh-mecho,app bohot lambe ho,apne godi lia to kitna unchaa ho gaya naa!

s-haan,main to hoo hi aisa,tumhari maasi zaara naati hai nahi!kashish!

k gives him a bit gusse wala look,jise dekhkaar s ko aur mazza aa raha hai

kuch stairs hote hain aage-

s-abb dekhna khushi hum dono sabse pehle high speed mein pohochenge!

Kh-yeshhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!mechoooooooo!!!!!!!!

s-ok,on ur mark,get set!

Kh-go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

S bhaagke,kh ko uthae hue full speed mein stairs se neeche uthaar jaata hai

Jisse kh ko bohot mazza aata hai

& k is laggin behind,comin in her own speed,bechari karti bhi kya itni badi heel pehnke chalna mushkil hai

s & kh-chalo aao naa late lateef!

K smiles & kisses kh on cheeks affectionately

S[murmers 2 k]-mujhe nahi milega?

k-bilkul nahi!

s-[sighs & murmesr]some1 has all the luck!

Abb teeno kisi animal ke cage ke pass jaate hain

Jahan bohot bheed hai

Kh to s ki god mein hai hi,paar usse itni bheed ke kaaraan kuch thik se nahi dikh raha

Kh is getting pareshaan

Kh-aah..eh..ehun….[makin a mayus face]

S senses the kid's tension

Aur kh ko apne kandhe paar botha leta hai

Holdin her legs safely

s-abb dikh raha hai?

Kh-haan,haan haan!abb dikha,dikha!bilkul thik she!

S gives a sweet small smile

& k bhi s aur kh ko aise saath mein dekhkaar muskura deti hai

Edited by belanila - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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