SwaRon SS: Romantic Holiday :)part 4 updated (page6) - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
this ss is quite wonderful and their romantic moments are go awesome just lovely...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
wow love this update
whats gonna happen next? 😲 i want to know now
please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
So I read all.the 3 parts in one go.
this is one beautiful short story.
Loved it. Waiting for some more.
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
LOved every part of it /.The long hours dancing on pehla nasha,The dinner menu :P,The forehead kiss ^_^,everything :)
Lovely Poo.Please update the next part soon .m curious what he will do tomm :o

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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Loved the update
Waiting for swayams plan
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
its lovely... bt ek lip kiss de deti... 😛
waiting fr ur update... update soon... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan

its lovely... bt ek lip kiss de deti... 😛
waiting fr ur update... update soon... 😃

control xD let's keep it slow xD wo swayam hai ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: -dark.horse-

hello people..wassup??after 2 years i m writing something...i knw i have discontinued many of my previous works bt i didnt get any inspiration to write...bt yesterday i had a discussion with my fellow SwaRonian about SwaRon romance so dat motivated me to write something...i want something like my OS in the show😊*fingers crossed*

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">SwaRon SS-Romantic Holiday</font>
so now musical is done n v all r waiting for results...performance went well..dey said dey will reply after reaching NY so now v r just left wid waiting for results..hoping dat we will get the affiliation...last few days wer just super hectic nt coz of musical bt also as u all knw ruhi has returned wid new level of pyshcogiri dis our love has won over dat v r still together..she lost dis tym also n nw she has gone far away frm over lives..bt sharon was super stressed so a holiday is much need..yes xams are coming bt still before concentrating on dat me n sharon need a relaxing holiday dats y i m taking her on holiday...wer even she is clueless about it😉so lemme go nw she must be waiting for me...n she hates waiting u all knw😆

finally i reached sharon's place n even before i cn reach the gate..gate opened n sharon was standing der in simple white top n denim.n den she said something which i never expected the moment wen i saw about to question her how she knws dat i m der she said "tumhe kya laga mujhe tumhare aane ki khabar jb tum door bell bajaoge usk baad milegi😆hum jisse chahte hai ussi khabar apne aap lag jaati hai" n after hearing dis my expressions wer😲seriously sharon said dat😲i took her bags put it in the car n completely ignored her question- swayam where we r going?tell me..where we r going..i just said one thing u trust me sharon so just sit nw n lets start the journey coz v have to travel 500kms...sharon wat?500kms..yes sharon nw sit v r getting late...v started our journey it was fun she was distributing me while i m driving..tickling me..cracking jokes n den she holds my hands n put her head on my shoulder n said - "thank u swayam..u r the best boyfrnd in the world i love u so much"...n i was just admiring her...she is the most beautiful woman in this world...n i replied "i love u too sharon..i love u too,,u are the best thing dat happened to me"

it was about 1 in the noon n both wer hungry so i stopped the car under the tree i had cooked food for us no junk food for sharon..i cnt afford dat she is getting sick again..so i take out a mat sharon helped me wid arranging stuff v sat down n she started opening the boxes n dey all have her favourite food packed...she leaned down n kissed on my cheeks..u r the best swayam...the thing dat surprised me dat she has no problm sitting n eating on the road side..bt even i didnt said a word at dat tym..v had our lunch n den v started the journey again...she was feeling sleep toh i suggested her to sit on the back sit n take rest..she agreed..i adjusted my mirror so dat i cn see her peaceful face while she was sleeping n dat made me smile "shiron sharon"😆

v reached the sea shore nw frm here v have to go by the boat..i wake her up n she was so surprised to see dat..bt before she cn say nything i pointed my finger towards the motor boat which was der n dat smile on her face it seems dat tears are about to fall frm her eyes bt i hugged her..i hugged her tight...it was a silent moment none of us said nything...v take our luggage frm the car n put it in the boat..i started the boat n v headed towards the island..



very well writteen keep writing
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
awww... thats so sweet...

what swayam is doing for sharon is so special... 😃

its lovely 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I woke up wid a big smile on my face,excited about whole day...excited about how Sharon gonna react...I saw she is still sleeping bt curtains r open so its disturbing her...I went closed the curtains n den I sat near her...admiring her..bt I didn't woke her up coz I have to prepare breakfast for her..wen I stood up she held my hand..I turned around n she was smiling..good morning swayam.she said in sleepy voice...I bend down kissed her forehead n wished her good morning :) I asked her to freshen up till den I will prepare breakfast bt she refused she said dey will cook it together bt nt in kitchen bt near sea..I smiled n followed her command..v both got ready n went outside..perfect weather..sun was shinning bt it was bearable. Wen I was setuping Sharon called my name...swayam I wanna do fishing..I turned around n she was all set..sitting on a rock wid fishing rod...I smiled coz she was so happy...I said I m preparing breakfast she should carry on wid fishing n she agreed..every tym she screams anything I just smile...she was behaving like a small kid..excited n insane xD I was ready wid our breakfast instead of calling her der I took the stuff near her bt she completely ignored me n was busy fishing...I went slowly n held her from behind..she was nt expecting dat...at first she was shocked bt den she bend backward resting her head on my shoulder..I never knew dis was coming on me...next moment she just threw water on me wid her legs n started laughing...she just spoiled one amazing perfect moment bt I just cnt get angry on her so I started laughing wid her..den v did breakfast n wen inside as its started getting hotter nw...she was sitting on the couch n instead of watching TV I asked her whether she will play luddo wid me? N she agreed n I swear she is such a kiddo.clapping wen she get a lead from me...I just cnt concentrate on game n unfortunately or fortunately I lost n she started dancing I was just staring at her...moment was dat perfect..for a second I thought time must froze den n der...bt den sound distrub my thought..sound was coming from my stomach n wen I saw my watch it was 1 n shot v haven't prepared lunch yet..she finally get back into her sense n set on the couch..I stood up n started walking towards kitchen...wen she opened her eyes she came to help me...v prepared lunch..Sharon made rotis Dats the only different thing about lunch..v had our lunch n I have to made her sleep so dat I cn prepare for perfect evening coz tomorrow v have to go back bt before dat I had to make that evening memorable for both of us.I forced her n made her sleep...den I did whole set up n I did it before she woke up..it was around 5.30 wen she woke up..I had decorated her room also..balloons on the ground..she has to make her way from dem...wen she stood up one more surprise for her...my gift for her which she has to wore for evening..it was a Saree coz she look most beautiful in Saree..it was a baby pink color Saree wid shade of white wid white designer blouse.n yes I knew it dat she knew how to wear a Saree .I knw smart choice...bt before she came down I was all set to escort her from stairs.hmmm I was wearing black shirt n blue demin...I was waiting for her n den her door opens n she came out...she was looking breathe taking...I was completely awestruck by her beauty...her hairs wen falling down on her shoulders pearl ear rings...she stood in front of me bt I was just staring at her..she was blushing n den she pushed me coz I was ny even listening to her voice.I made fool of myself der bt den she was looking angelic I just couldnt controlled myself...I gave her hands she hold it n wen made our way outside were I arranged things n whole path was filled wid balloons..wen I opened the door she was completely shocked..der was table for two wid a perfect set up...pink white curtains..pink white light everything matching her I was the only odd thing out der.. LOL v continued walking n she held my hands even tighter from der..I made her sat n den I went to sit in front of her.. She was silent...I took her hands in mine n said I love u Sharon n dis love will grow more n more wid each passing day n I kissed her hands...she held my hands tight ...swayam dis is a dream come true moment for me...I know u love me n I love u too bt dis is just perfect...most perfect moment for my life...I love u swayam u r the best..u r world's best boy friend..I stood up n went near her.I hugged her from her left n den I sat on my knees..Sharon was super shocked wat I m doing...sharon I said n den I took out one box which has a ring.. I know Sharon's heart must had been stop beating dis is a huge moment for us..swayam..she said...I take out ring from her n said Sharon dis is nt a engagement ring bt a promise me...n I continued...I promise u Sharon dat I will try to keep u happy always,I will do everything to make u smile n will make sure dat ur smile never leave u coz ur smile is my biggest strength..I promise u dat I will never leave u..I promise u dat I will love u more n more each day bt before I cn say anything further something fell on my hands..it was her tears...she slides down to hug me..she hugged me..swayam I m speechless I don't knw wat to say bt I will nt spoil dis moment n she wiped her tears...v both stood up...n she was standing in a diva atiitide wid one hand on her waist..typical Siren Sharon pose.. So swayam promise me dat u will follow my every order n started laughing..I smiled n said I promise...promise me swayam u will take me out of shopping,dinner n dates giving me death glares n I said I promise smiling...promise me swayam u will never lie to me of hid things from me like u always do n she was serious...bt I said wen I lied to u?u r a liar swayam ...swayam is a liar n she started laughing n running n screaming swayam is a liar swayam is a liar u r a liar..i started running behind her...n a caught her...hold her from behind swirl her in the air v both got silent at dat moment n moment was hitting her..I made her stand n went on my knees again took her hand in my head n slides the ring in her finger...I stood up looking into her eyes..she was all silent...n started moving towards her to close the gap between us n she shut her eyes...our faces were just inches apart I held her waist n pulled her towards me our lips touches..her lips were so soft..kiss was slow yet it was full of passion n love...the words which v had never spoken all those things n feelings were conveyed through dat kiss...I was the perfect n best moment of our life..v both were ready for dis...v both hoped dat may dis moment stays like dis forever..slowly v break the kiss n she hides her face in my arms I just held her tight n take her back for dinner..v had our dinners v we're holding each others hand through out the dinner..after dinner got over she took out her heals,hold dem in hands n v started walking neat sea...cold waves touching our feets...she rested her head my shoulder n intervened our fingers...it fits so well...like perfect...v had a long walk in silence den I held her in bridal style took her to the room..made her sleep.wished her good nite gave a kiss on forehead n left her room...went in my room n was just thinking about the evening..it was just perfect..more beautiful den a dream..I slept on my couch only...
In morning Sharon woke me up... V packed our bags had our breakfast...packed lunch for journey back to Mumbai...n around 12pm v left for Mumbai v lots of memories...around 6 v reached Mumbai..she was sleeping wen I stopped car as v reached her home...I woke her up...I kissed her forehead hugged her opened door for her..n hugged her again...thank u Sharon..bt she interrupted n said thank u swayam..thank u for a perfect holiday..best days of my life ever..thank u for coming in my life n making it a better place..I love u...n she gave a peck on my cheek,ruffled my hairs n ran inside...left me all shocked after 2 mins wen I came back in my senses I realized n recalled wat just happened n big smile spread over my face..I love Sharon n she loves me too...the thought itself was beautiful n drove car to my place n went straight in my room n slept thinking about Sharon n promise ^_^

P.S. sorry for grammatical n spelling errors typed it from cell coz errors cn b der coz my auto correct sucks -_-
P.S.S Shreya if u gonna read dis...swaron kiss was only for u...I knw I sucks in writing such scenes bt I wrote it coz of u...so guys if u didn't liked it feel free to marofy Shreya xD

Happy reading guys coz I loved writing it :) <3
Edited by -dark.horse- - 11 years ago

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