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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vinnas

hiii sis 😳 wow season 2 Congo 👏
the promo looks damm intresting 😉 ..
waiting for its progression 😳 ..hw u takes it in ur veiw ...will be waiting more ..

Thank you sis😉 As much as you wait to read it I am waiting to read your comments sis.

p.s- change pg no in title plzz 😳 ..ur express speed u mentioned it as 133 😉 ..
if u want we shift ccc some time here to reach tht page 😆 .. 😉 ...
Oops sorry. don't worry. You know I'm an express.😆😆
No need to bring CCC here. I don't want to see anyone spamming here😡😆

See blue answers sis😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ishita's entry -- twists of FATE 😃
Promo - interesting.
Hope to get from you soon.

Congo 👏 Season 2..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chitsri65

Ishita's entry -- twists of FATE 😃
Promo - interesting.
Hope to get from you soon.

Congo 👏 Season 2..

Thanks Chirtha! Yes there will be a twists of FATE😉
yh I'm hoping to update this next.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks a lot Sharlene.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg !! so ishi is planning something😡😡
waiting
romantic aarya
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh nooo 💔 ishita nagun is again coming into arya's life 😭

i am waiting for your super duper SEASON 2 sweety
lets start another new journey with this snake 🤪
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: roserosey

omg !! so ishi is planning something😡😡

waiting
romantic aarya

let's see what is Ishitha upto?
Ok will update soon.😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: maha9

oh nooo 💔 ishita nagun is again coming into arya's life 😭

i am waiting for your super duper SEASON 2 sweety
lets start another new journey with this snake 🤪

Ok Season 2 is on the way Maha.
ok let's see how would be there journey with this snake,😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Season 2

Chapter 1
"Mama ! Papa See who has come!! Come soon mama and papa" Shouted Mansi in top of her voice.

"What is it beta? Why are you shouting like this?" Asked SP.

""Beta who is it? "Asked G3 coming to the hall but stop mid way seeing Aarya on the doorstep. She smiled seeing her beta and bahu. She felt that she seeing them after a long time. She wiped a tear that dropped from her eye.
"Yash , Aarthi wait there." She ran inside to bring the thali to do Aarthi to this couple.
They worshiped SP and G3 and came in. Mansi ran and hugged both Yash and Aarthi. She was so happy. She really missed them a lot.

"Yash and Aarthi you both go and change. I'll make something to eat. You'll must be so tired. But beta why didn't inform us earlier?"

"Ma, We thought to surprise you. We wanted to see this happiness in your eyes."

"Beta I'll let Dubey know that you'll came. They will be happy."

"No bauji. We hope to go there in the evening to surprise them also."

"Ok good good. Go and change then eat something and rest. You both must be so tired after the journey."

So they went in but Aarthi's glow on her face didn't go unnoticed by G3.
She held back Yash.
"Yash I can see Aarthi's face glowing.( Yash looked at Aarthi who is going inside with Mansi.) Is this means she accepted you as her husband?"

"Yes ma."Said Yash. He blushed saying this.

"Oh God has fulfilled my wish. I'm so happy that you both started a new life.. Fill her life with love Yash which she didn't get. May God bless you both with full of happiness."

While Mansi with Aarthi
"So Aarthi bhabhi tell me about my naughty bhai? Did he trouble you at nights?"
Aarthi blushed.

"Hmmm... that means I'm right. I knew it. He's always naughty. I'll ask him why did he trouble my bhabhi."

"MANSI!!!!"

"Oh so you don't like me scolding my Yash bhai. that means you are in love with him. Aarthi bhabhi( almost in a whisper) tell him what magic he did to change you? I might need that in future?"

"He doesn't have to do any magic Mansi. He's different. His love was never a compromise. He was willing to do anything for love he was ready to wait for me.. I don't have words to utter. Everything of him made me fall for him. Yes Mansi I love your brother a lot. He broke the love in my heart. He broke the eyes in it. At last I found my love hidden inside my heart .. just for him..."

"I knew he will change you bhabhi. I'm so happy for you."

"Thank you Mansi. You were a good friend of mine.."

"And now I"m your sister."

"Of course. The day Yash introduced me at the party , I still can remember from that day you became my friend. I know you and Yash had a great relationship as siblings and Yash told me everything."

"Seems bhai has split everything.."

"What did I split Mansi"

"OH!! NO!! bhai!! I heard you said I LOVE YOU to bhabhi.."Saying this she ran away from there before Yash catch her.

Yash looked at Aarthi who was shocked and at the same time blushing.

"Did you say that to her Aarthi?"

"No. I thought it's you."

"Oh no!How does she always guess correctly. She knows things more than her age. " Said Yash.

Aarthi go and change. I'm starving... Aarthi went and change and Yash too. Yash started to stare at Aarthi who was combing her hair near the mirror. He got lost in hair and came and hugged her from behind.

"Yash!What are you up to? You said that you are starving."

" I was!!" Aarthi turned back to him. He pinned her to the wall.

Then he got so close to him.
"My lovely wife making me loose on her and my hunger just vanish in front of her eyes"

Saying this he got so close to her and he could feel er heart beat her breathing..

They were about to loose themseleves on each other a loud voice made them come back.

"Bhai did you bring Mumbai here? It seems your honey moon is not over yet. Ok I'll tell mama to wait till you finish your honeymoon and come."

Yash got starlet.
"Masnsi!! Mansi!!'

Saying this he ran after Mansi.

"Mama bhai.." She couldn't finish it Yash covered her mouth.

"Mama see she says she wants to marry soon."
Mansi got shocked she bit her hand and Yash cried in pain.

"OW!!"

"She's like a cat. See she bit me."

"Yes I bit you. Why did you tell a lie?"

"I didn't tell a lie..."

"If you didn't tell a lie why did you cover up my mouth. Ok ma I'll tell the whole truth...Yash bhai needs.."

Then yash saw Aarthi coming smiling. Yahs got lost on her. Mansi punched him.

"See ma bhai is in love. He doesn't want anything but love love love... Thank bhabhi coming to his life. Now I don't have fight for laddo. It's all mine. So bhai you keep on loving till I finish this.."

Aarthi, SP and G3 laughed hearing this.
Yash went to her.

"Oh mansi my dear sis.. Remember now you have your chance and I will get a chance soon too. Then I won't leave you."

"Bhai till I give you a chance you won't get a chance and don't worry I won't give you that chance."

"Ok will see. I have a witness your bhabhi."

"So I have too my bauji and my loving ma."
Saying this she hugged SP and G3.

"aarthi these two always like this. just fight for silly things. Don't get disturbed."

"No ma! I like it. I never had a brother or sister so I have never experienced it in my life but truly I'm loving it."

"Don't worry bhabhi! I'll tell you I'll call you di. From now on you are my sister. " Saying this she hugged Aarthi.




Edited by caller123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Promo:
After honeymoon first day at the office and meeting Ishitha.

I know I gave you less Aarya scenes but as I told you every character is important for me in any of my story. Sorry if you didn't enjoy it.This chapter was much needed to go forward..

Important notice.
This is for all silent readers. I feel discourage when I see less comments and likes. We need lot of time and thinking to write a chapter. After writing when we see less comments and likes we really feel discouraged.Sometimes I do not feel to update also. I know most of the readers have moved out.
So the remaining readers please just press the like button and leave a comment. If you didn't like it say it. Ok ... We writers need this pushing to continue in writing...
Edited by caller123 - 11 years ago

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