~Ashlok FF: Written in stars: Ch 50 on pg 138

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mayabharathi

@mayabharathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

love both updates finally shlok comes to know

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logambika

@Lekhalogs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

read both the updates... so nice... now what is going to happen...

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Optimist_d

@Optimist_d

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

omg!! how come i missed your update??😲😕

never too late!😊

this swati!!!😡 how could she stoop so low????

no worries as all her plans will backfire her so soon😃

waiting for shlok's reaction

poor astha😭

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Suri

@BlackJack.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

thank you swati... now get lost!

i wonder what happens to ashlok now... ahmexing ahmexing ahmexing!

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niki795

@niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

now what will shlok do
plz update soon
can't wait now

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Bobbie

@bobbiedhillon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Just can't wait for the next part... Please update soon.

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Aishwarya

@Aishaa3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Updateee lalalalala update update tra lalalala updateee😃

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svg15

@svg15

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Can't wait for the next part. Read all chapters in one go...nice story and awesome writing..

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ish123

@ish123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Hey, just started reading this story of urs n now almost done. Very interesting concept..

In start I got little confuse thinking how ashlok going to meet. As astha was sooo little n shlok going college. Their bonding sooo close n slowly slowly u started to reveal aastha's feeling. But that was only one sided as shlok never thought of astha as the way she had feeling for him

Then loved how u introduce karan, there I thought ab kaise ashlok together ho skate hai. One is getting married n other engaged...then here comes chapter 15. M happy at least now shlok knows the truth which everyone have been hiding, aastha's feeling for shlok. Swati did one thing good...Plzz continue soon with another update. Really want to know what happens next...

I read in one chapter u don't do pm anymore, hoping when u update next part m able to find out quickly

Lookin forward...