Loving You | ArHi SS Part 4 + Thank You Note COMPLETED (13/05)

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Its a wonder you managed to write duch a lovely story and led your readers through a gamut of emotions in just a four chapter long story.

Kudos to you for writing this.

Loved the read.

I really admired Shashi here.

He had to play the role of father and benefactor to both Khushi and Arnav.

Loved the fact that you gave him an important role here.

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prpk525

@prpk525

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#272

There is nothing bad about thi simple story.. Loved it..

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Rae you talk of simple and cliched, but as the well known saying goes 'there are no new stories'.

Its how you express your thoughts that make it special...and how!

All the main protagonists strength of character shouts out to the reader.

Shashi looked after his friend's family for all the right reasons and did a commendable job of it, but I can understand Arnav's vulnerability and the sense of gratefulness he feels.

Really liked the way Arnav and Khushi gave strength to each other silently. Their strong belief in each other will stand them in good stead.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#274

That was a nice end to an amazing story.. Their parents wanted this but were only angry that they kept away from them... Shashiji telling Savitaji that she shud have with power asked for Khushi... It made me emotional at the bond the two families share... Perfect ending to an amazing story...

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rvas

@rvas

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#275

that was a super awesome story and the last updat was just beautiful...loved it all

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zeedia

@zeedia

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Wow it's such a beautiful and emotional short story
Totally loved it
U really are an amazing writer

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jg12

@jg12

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#277

Wonderful story . Short and sweet

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Anita

@neet2407

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Lovely SS! Thank you for the PMit's a wonderful story full of hurt and confusion and misunderstandings and I was so happy when Arnav pulled Khushi back and decided to stand up for their relationship

beautifully written - as I said before you have an amazing way with words - os that i really feel all the emotions as you write them!

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#279

Lovely SS... beautifully written 👏

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#280

It is perfect in every sense - the words, the unsaid words, the emotions, the silence, the honesty, the apprehensions, the love, the devotion!!

In such a short span you made us experience a billion different emotions with great finesse and simplicity!!

Absolutely superb!!