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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

I dnt knw how to tell.

But im a bit confused with this update.

Can u please write the full name of characters please

And I think in some places arnav and riddhima are crossing,making me utterly confused.

Birthday party was nice.

Pm me whenever u update

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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
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VIRMANVIAN
niki795

THANKU SOOO MUCH GUYS FOR UR LOVELY COMENTS..
THESE MEAN ALOT TO ME...
N ENOURGE ME WRITE MORE...!!!

guys these days my work load is a bit high i miss to replace ridhima with manvi at some places.. im really sorry for the inconviance caused..
for the next update i have tried to write it corectly..
n also for the previous parts a have rectified many...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
started reading it.. Will soon finish reading it and comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
part 4


Jevi twits the girls hand in wich she holding the knife.. N the knife fals diwn from her hand..

Jevi : maya maya maya uff tu itni bevakuf niklo gi mujhe nahi pta tha...
Itni asani si tumhe lga tum manvi tk pahunch jao gi..

( maya i didnt knew u are such a dumb that u will fal in our trap so easily..)

** flash back..

Tanya : di ye ap kya krne wali hai..
( di wat are u going to do..?? )

Jevi : tanya ab time agya hai.. Ye pendent manvi ko dene ka..
Ye pendent hum beatainas ke lie kya importance rakhta hai tumhe shayad abhi nahi pta..
Brunik ke acording ab time agya hai manvi ko ye pendent dene ka..

(now its time to give this pendent to manvi..
I gues u dont know the exact importance of this penfent to us yet..
According to brunik its the rite time to give her the pendent..)

( brunik eldest member of thier clan.. No major decion is tqken with out his consent..)

Tanya : di vo toh thik hai bt aise sabke samne..
( thats ok di bt infront of every one..??)

Jevi : sabke samne dena is a trap to catch our prey..!!

Tqnya : prey mtlb..??

Jevi : mujhe kafi time se doubt hai ki manvi ke fnds main se hi hai koi..
( i have doubt that one of manvi's frnd is the one..)

Tanya : di are u sure..??

Jevi : is doubt to clear krne ke lie hi he plan kia hai maine n brunik ne...
( only to clear this doubt we have planed this..!!)

Tanya : bt di it can be harmful even..

Jevi : i know tanya bt it is the only option hume use pkda hi pfega asap.. Hm manvi ko is unknow danger main.nahi chod sakte...
( i know tanya it can be dangerous . Bt its the only option v have.. We cant manvi be in unknown danger...)

Tanya : i think u are rite di.. Ao bs btao kya krna hai...
( i think u are rite di.. U just tel me wat i need to do..)

** flash back end..

Jevi : kya hua maya itni confuse kyu ho..?? Yahi soch rahi ho party main shilpa ko kyu mara..
Its simple dumbo just to distarct uh .!! Or tum ho bhi gyi..

( wat haoen maya y are so confused... Oh ya must bw thinking y i slaped tanyq rite... ?? It was just to diatract u.. N see jm again sucesful..)

jevi :Kl raat ko tanya bday party se jldi se tabit kharab ka bahan krke ander rum main nahi balki us insan ka pta lgane gyi thi jiske lie ye trap bichaya..
N gues wat we got sucsessful..

( yesterday nite tanya left early from bday oarty just to know who is the one..)

Maya puches jevi n goes near manvi n tries to kill her by presing her neck.. Bt before she could pres.. Jevi puls n twist her hands to which maya screams in pain..

Maya hits jevi's foot with hers.. N by doung so.she comes out of jevi's grip..

N tries to escape though front door..
Bt tanya is more fast than maya.. She block her way by standing infront of the door.. N puches her .. Due to which maya loses her balance n fals down with a thud sound...

Mean while manvi gains counsios...
Jevi n tanya did not about manvi bt maya observrs manvi's movement .!!

Maya again gets up n tries ti hit jevi with the vase kept on side table..
Jevi grabs her hand n puches due to which she again falls down..
Tanya : maya aise hi mar khaogi ya kuch bakogi bhi..
(will u speek up ir else ill beat u uo more..)

Maya : finaly tumhe pta chal hi gya.. Aisa acha bne rehne ka natak krte krte main tang agyi thi...

( with an evil smile..)
Doubt toh tum dono behno pr shuru se hi tha.. Pr tumhari ye power to kep urself hiden ne nahut papad bilvaye...
5 sal lge mujhe.. Humare clan ko mili us sharap ki vja se bahut fayda uthaya tum logon ne bar bar hume confuse kia.. Bt im also maya.. Humare clan ki princes.. Itni asani se har nahi man sakti thi...!!!

(finaly u came to who am i... i was fed up pretending gud infront of u..i doubted u two sisters from a long time bt ur powers kept u hidden..it took me 5 long years to find u.. u took ful advange of the curse that our clan got... bt im also maya.. the princes i never lose hopes..)

N tries to hit jevi..
Bt all her eforts went in vain..
jevi puts her thumb on maya's forehead n says some mantra.. Due to which maya faints..

M : diii... Taniii.. Ye sab kya ho raha hai.. Or apne aisa kya kia ki maya faint hogi.. Btao di..
(di tani wats all hapening here.. Wat did u do just know due to wich maya fainted..)

Jevi tried to explain manvi..

Bt Now manvi was getting out if control
N jevi was left with just one last option to calm her down.. She holds manvi 's hand n says some kind of mantra to which manvi again gets unconscious...

Jevi : ise thikane lga do.. Ajke bad iska chapter end in manvi life...!! Manvi ko main handel krti hn...
( i take maya with u.. Her chapters ends today in manvi life.. Ill handle manvi..)

Tanya : sure di...

N tanya leaves from there with maya


i hope u will like it..

plz leave ur coments n hit like..


all those who want pm..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: niki795

started reading it.. Will soon finish reading it and comment



ill be waitning for ur coments...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Nic wala update bt where iz virat? Happy tanya n jivi save manu
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
dil wat an update
i loved it
so i doubted on poor tanya
but maya is the real one who is harmful to manvi
ha ha ha ha
loved it dil
when virat will come dil
waiting...
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
nice update so its maya who trying to kill
manvi and jeev and tanya make plan
update soon and u r other story
also
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Awesome update...
Loved it..
Soo Maya was harmfull for Manvi not Tanya...
When will Virat come???
Update soon...
Thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Oh my god
Full of mystery
Bt interesting...

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