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harshita singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: J2lover
omg!!! that was HOT!!!☺️☺️ but would have been more better if he woudn't haf for himself...😆😆 anywayzz...ROMANCE is IMPORTANT!!!!!😳 loved JEALOUS JALLU!!!!😳😳 do continue!!!!!!😃😃

thank u 😃...i'll keep that in mind next tym ...u r gonna see more of this jealous side of jalal in next update...

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harshita singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa
nice update, tks for the PM, continue soon & Do PM aswell

will wait for ur update

thank u...i'll pm u for sure 😳

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harshita singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: monikaberwa
Super hit hai

thank u😃

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Samanika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Really awesome update! 😃 Loved the jealous Jalal!

And the cherry on the cake was the part where he kissed her! That was so hot!!

Can't wait to know what comes out in the open soon! Please update!😃

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

part 7
nice part...
Jalal is so possessive...
he hurt beyond anything and still troubling her...
poor Jodha...
what is Surya planning?
and this Abdul what does he want?
cont soon dear...

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harshita singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: dodoneha
☺️ update...
woah jalal was so jealous😳 of surya ... loved dis wild,☺️ passionate jalal...
by d way is dis surya upto something nasty wid abdul😲... as dere was a line - dat surya walked off 2 abdul 2 update of his progress on some mission😕... wat is dis abdul planning now😡...
i hope some of d mystery gets cleared next😊 nd jalal comes 2 know abt ruku nd abdul plan😛...
so now more such passionate jealous typebrushes b/w ja-jo ??😲😉 as dey r gonna be working together😆

thanks 4 d pm😳 nd pls post d next part soon😉

glad u like this jalal...u'll soon come to know why surya is here n what he is upto😉...i promise what ever he is planing he'll not gonna succeed in it 😈...i'll clear some the mystery by the end of 8 ch😊...yes u'll see more such passion b/w jo n ja...

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Rutuja Deo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#207

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow wow just wow!!!!!!!

Superb story👏👏👏 Just read all chaps in one go now...

n i must say,it is outstanding 😳 really loved all chap 😃😃

esp Part 7 OMG!!!!! it is so Hott☺️ n amazing...😳😳

plz plz do pm me when u update ur next😉😉 n plz update soon Cant wait for further

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harshita singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: sw123
awesome update
update soon

thank you😃

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harshita singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: -aady-
This was an epic update! 😆😆I Loved it, so much passion! Itne suspense mein kyon dal rahe ho? Update it fast please! 😉😉 Overall it was awesome, I loved the part when Jalal gets all jealous!! Mujhe bahut pasand aaya! ❤️ ❤️

ady😃 ..thank you so much🤗...kyuki suspense thrill karta hai ...i'll update when u'll update 😎...i m glad ki u liked it ❤️