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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey achu.. update soon dear 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its seems to be interesting
Plz cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sounds very very interesting Harika... pls update at the soonest possible.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heys guys...Thank you so much for the lovely feedback...I was not able to reply to any of ur questions ...Sorry..anyways Thank you for the feedback and comments...So finally Part 1 is here actually thought of posting teaser 2 but dropped the idea as some people gonna kill me if i did that😉😆😛...I hope it reach upto your expectations...

P.S. No Proof read...Spare me...

PART 1

Tiny hints of extravagant shades of orange and pink appeared in the sky. Shortly after, a fiery ball of enchantment came out over the horizon. The sky was no longer filled with dinky crayon colors like tickle-me-pink, but colors of unexplainable magnificence that have no known name. When the sun rose, birds chirped and nature responded wonderfully.


RANDHIR'S P.O.V

The birds chirping and the beautiful rays of sun woken me up...I got up yawning ...and went for Jogging after changing my dress ..really morning jog is awesome ...the birds,nature will be amazing at the morning..one can forget the world seeing the morning beauty..well i don't about other but I can forget...I can forget all my problems...my dreadful ____...all I feel so pleasant here...

I came back from jogging and I started to do push-ups...My daily routine it is...today it is different...Am going back to college...hmmm am not new to college...am gonna complete my incomplete dream...and I will succeed in it...Not only my dream ..apart from my dream I will complte something else too...So.now I need to have my shower...By d way..Hi..Am Randhir Singh Shekwawat...*wink*


SANYUKTA'S P.O.V

The sun rays hit my face and I got up yawning...I feel like something is gonna happen today..don't know what...cchalo...let me get ready for my college..or else he is gonna kill me for sure...Before that I need to do my Yoga...I feel so lively when I do it...Hmm my yoga is comepleted...Let me have my shower...I came back after 15-20 minutes...I got ready in blue jeans and white top...and I rushed down and I had my break fast ..so fastly that my mom shouted at me saying that food is not going anywhere...I chuckled and kissed my mom n dad and hugged my brother and wentand My guess was right !! he has been waiting for me...I said Good Morning... and he smiled at me..no actually a sarcastic smile..saying that U r late today too...I got on the bike and he started the bike..and in some time we are in the college...


RANDHIR'S P.O.V.

I came out from the shower after 20 minutes...and I got ready...In black shirt and blue jeans...I kept my watch...My watch is so special to me as it is given by someone special meri jaan...and My phone started to ring and I lifted and I talked sying that...It will be done sir... I will find her... I went down and had my breakfast prepared by Ramu Chacha..he take cares of me so well...I said Am going and while going I saw the photo in the living room and said bye and went ...I got on my bike...I love my bike...


I got on it and went to college...My first day in F.I.T.E...I started and soon I was infront of my college..Am not new to college ...I had been in college..I experienced how it will be..how the college atmosphere is...


Hahahahah...Randhir...she showed her tongue and started to running in the canteen...

Tu kahan jayegi...he run after her...

He catched her from back..literally it was hugging from back...she is jumping in his arms...

Chod randhir..ahahaha...chod mujhe...she laughed...

Kahann bhagegi ab...he took the cake and applied it on her fce..literally her face is full of cake...hahhaahha ab main hasunga...

Randhir...someone called him from back..he turned and BANG!!!!

Randhir's face is now full of cake...he losed the grip on her and she got the chance and she ran...

hahahahahah...everyone laughed...the five were known as Samurai...Unbeatables hai woh paanch...

Whole group laughed..till now they were playing food splash game...

I wiped the tear...which is going to fall..those memories are my best...the wonderful time is just amazing...I went inside and parked my bike and went to dean...

SANYUKTA'S P.O.V

We were laughing and talking with each other as our professor didnt come yet and suddenly Vardhan sir came and He said us to sit and we stopped our talking and listened to him carefully...He started saying that ...

Here guys...A new student will be joining you and he is the part of the dream team too..so I want you guys to assist him if need help in anyway...Am I Clear?So let me introduce him...A boy came inside ...He is Randhir Singh Shekawat...The new student about whom am talking about...So thats it...he went after saying it...

As soon as the boys came the girls gasped...woah !!! he is hot !! handsome hunk..must say...His black shirt is awesome on him...woah !!! nice muscles...wait !! am checking him out !!!...okay..okay..no one can resist him...his style...attitude is cool..overall he is handsome...Handsome would be an understatement..I guess so..I was snapped out from my thoughts when my friend called me...

RANDHIR'S P.O.V.

As soon as I entered I listened a gasp..arhh !! if she is here...till now she would eat my ears saying that see they are looking at you...arhh !! am not new..I know handsome...cool..and I went and sat ...whole class is observing me like am a ghost...when suddenly some girl approached me and introduced herself Hi...Am Sanyukta Agarwal...I lloked at her for seconds and thought girls are aalways same...I replied back saying that Did I ask you?...her smile vanished and her mouth turned to perfect O ..well must say she is cute ...like that..I supressed my smile..and she went away muttering something ...

NO ONE'S P.O.V.

The class got silent as soon as the professor entered..aand he started teaching them something...everyone is keenly listening to him...

Precap : Agar bataungi toh...suspense kya hoga...😛

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Phew !!! am done with the first part... leave ur valuable feedback...It encourages me a lot...People who RES...UNRES soon...nahin toh janta maaf nahin karegi..😆😉😛

Love,
Harika...Keep smiling...It costs only two lips...

P.S. For PM'S... Hit the like button in first page...Teaser post..
Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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resss
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I am enjoying this to come first on ur FF for commenting!
Now u give me a patent for my first comment!😛


Pehle toh AWESOME BANNER👏👏👏

Second thing
Tu mujhe kitna mera sir khujaane lagaigi
Mujhe laga tha mere kuch questions ke answers toh milenge
But yaha toh kuch aur hi hua Now I have left with more questions!😡
Whose phone call it was???
What was Randhir talking about???
With whom Sanyu sat on the bike??? PARTH kya?
And that precapwaala was not good
For a second, I thought I am getting a precap and then u say
Agar bataungi toh...suspense kya hoga..
Aur teaser tu dena math 😡varna mere questions ki bhandaar mein aur add hojayenge
So now u better give 2 chapter very jaldi


OVERALL CHAPTER WAS VERY VERY MYSTERIOUS and VERY FAB


-In Hope Of Loads Of Updates😉
and Love
-Prachi😊


PS:Jaldi se update dena warna...

Edited by Prachijainn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Resss

Unressed:

Hehehhe really suspense ke badal garaj rhe hain i think there is a thunderstorm tonight aur rahi baat tere update ki it was full of pov but which i really loved was the last randhir pov she is cute that one 🥱
Edited by Sheron13rokerz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Res!!
Will unres at night *_*
Dont wry i will !
Stry unreveal hone ka wait karing kal se 😕

Unress---
Huh! Mujhe laga aaj pata chal jayega mera pachka 😭
Tune toh aur b suspense bada diya😡
Precap b nai
Anyways!!

Awesome update! 👏
Pov style huh 😉, love it 😃

Loved the way u described,the staring para
Beautifully written 😃. 👏

Imagining RD on dat bike
Cake wala memory was damn gud 🤣

Rd cute lagi,lekin fir b attitude 🤣. 🤣

Again i would say awesome update 👏
Beautifully written,loved it 😃

U knw that gun mission accomplished kill them
Ye sab in ur teaser is making me crazy agey kya hone wala h
🤣

Ab itna suspense kr diya h 😭
Toh kripa kr k jaldi update karo 🤣

Waiting for story to move on 😃
Update asap ⭐️

Edited by Awesome-blossom - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Sweetie...
will unres soon.

Unressed...
Sweetie... after reading d update am a little bit confused... 😉but no probs.😃. the story seems very interesting..😊
Beautifully written sweetie... POV was very nice..👍🏼
Waiting d story to unfold... update karna... jaldi.. 😊
Nd banner was superb sweetie...😳
Waiting 4 d nxt update... thanks 4 d pm...😃
Nd once again congratz... 👏

with love❤️
karthika

Edited by DEVU46 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Ress :-D
...
Unressngg for the teaser
🤣

i know m late. Actualy very very late. Bt u c the day u updated na, that day itself i was in train.
Was shifting to uk.
M sry harika.
Cming to ur teaser.
I wil nt lie.
Bt ur teaser left me flabbergasted.
I mean wat was that.
Pakka kuch toh intresting h.
Bt i loved the teaser.
P.s
maine unres kr dia h. Ab janta maaf kr degi.
🤣
vaise bhaad me gyi janta. Bs harika tu maaf kr dena.
🤣

love ya
😳
*priyanka*
Edited by angelpriyu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
love the first part
simply amazing
beautifully written
it got a bit confusing with the different points of view but by the end of it ... i was completely fine and figure it out
can't wait to see what happens next
please update soon

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