Liquorice Burning#3 [ArHi] Part 29 Updated 091316 - Page 38

Part 24 is up guys.

Originally posted by: Sheetalmjk

Very nice redumption plot with good story recalling but...increasing gap between every updates now ... Sorry I lost interest

Originally posted by: sarahjac

**new reader**

How to put this into words, am no writer. All I can say is... I simply love what you have created here. It's probably the best redemption story on Arhi. I admire your skill as a writer and love how you have tenderly built this story on emotions. I hope you continue soon and I promise to be with you through each update from hereon.

Keep writing...you are an awesome writer.

Originally posted by: montyk

Just found this FF

It was brilliant !!

Just finished on one sitting

Loved it

Very strong charectors and emotions!!

I really loved Payal and Akashi in it!!

Where can I find the rest of the story?

Please give me the link!!

Originally posted by: ocean28

Welcome back. I am sure that you will give a fitting ending to this fantastic story. As you are such a phenomenal writer we will wait patiently until your creativity gets manifested and brings this awesome ff to its conclusion. Thanks for writing so well and writing for us.

Waiting ...patiently for more...

HA! At last!! Finally the reward for all that stalking 😡 I'd been meaning to pm you begging for an update, didn't get round to it. Seems you knew

Am so glad to see the update, tells me you are coming back to the story, seems the hold of RR has loosened a bit! 😆

Will comment after reading.

Originally posted by: malinim

hello,

This story was suggested by somebody on the IF...and boy I am so thankful for being suggested this.

I am sure you have heard it a hundred times and will hear it many folds over in the future,

you are an amazing writer who brings all the characters to life,induce them in our lives and literally make us live with the story and its characters.Simply beautiful,heartfelt work of writing.

Plz do continue churning beauties out of your creative and wondrous mind and i

am very sure your heart is fully involved too.

Not only waiting for your updates but more such ARHI wonders .

best wishes always ..

Originally posted by: Japonica

HA! At last!! Finally the reward for all that stalking 😡 I'd been meaning to pm you begging for an update, didn't get round to it. Seems you knew

Am so glad to see the update, tells me you are coming back to the story, seems the hold of RR has loosened a bit! 😆

Will comment after reading.

Originally posted by: crazy4ArnavSR

Heya!

I just read this sstory...and its beautiful. :)

I really loved it. I m liking the way u hv oven the characters here.And i m hoping u r still planning to show a Khushi who stands upto Arnav with her round of questions and her rounds of No's this time...not tht i don't want to see her going bk with Arnav...offcourse who doesn't wan to see tht pat...bt wat m hoping for is with right amt o justifications to her giving in this time.

U may be thinking why i m saying so...then let me tll u..as i read the story i really liked it the way u hd made khushi totally independent and stronger thn before...and the way u hv shown crumbling down of THE Arnav Singh Raizada...its beautiful really..but the last chapter made me think otherise.and hence, hopes! but, then agn...i know it may be too early for me to judge changing directions with just one update...so i'll patiently wait...and hope to prove my wayward thoughts wrong. 😉

Anyways...there's thing i really loved...and thts how u had brought the fact...tht for last three years...Arnav in him was missing Khushi and yearning her bk in his life like before...and trying to visualize the certainities of how he had wronged her...but more than tht...i enjoyed the fact of how u hv smartly brought out the ASR as well in him where he defies to acknowledge the rights of Khushi...so as to keep his gnawing guilt bk...atleast as long as he can make himself believ tht.

Beautiful story! Really!

Please come bk to it and continue..i really want to see an end to it...rightfully!

Love, Meg

P.S. i cudn't quite figure out ur method of PM's ...so still sending out a buddy request. U can ignore it if u don't add ur readers just like tht. Thanks for story anyways! 😃

Welcome back and that too with a bang... God I was scared when Arnav kissed her suddenly bcz I was afraid knowing how bad with words he is but he surprised me with that heartfelt confession, he said all the right things and that too with utmost conviction and sincerity which Khushi always wanted from him, Khushi on the other hand made me cry with her loneliness, that she never knew what a home is was such a heart wrenching acceptance of her misfortune and complete helplessness but Arnav gave her that sense of ownership when he fls her that his home is wherever she is, that was the sweetest thing he could say to her... Hopefully Khushi will give him a chance to prove his words and love for her.

PS: posted this on the blog as well, and welcome back again.