Four Shot: SAY GOOD-BYE--Part 3, Pg 26 (updated--June 17th)

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Radhika

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Like everything that you ever write, this was brilliant too. This is such a wonderful exploration of all the beautiful relationships that she has forged and a family she had acquired. Beautiful, just so very beautiful.

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Chamkeeli22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Beautiful... Brought tears to my eyes... And you've not even started speaking about her goodbye to HIM... Part 2 can't come soon enough!

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piccola1

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Sob sob ..you've made me cry ! You've dived right into Paro's misery and brought it out so evocatively here - her desperation, her misery, her fear and her utter desolate sense of impending loss...

Find us a solution ..do ! A way out that doesn't leave her with a sense of being a betrayer - because where she is today, it's either a betrayal to her family or a betrayal of God himself...

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kirti98

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I am feeling so sad. Crying buckets. 😭 u r truly agifted writer. Take my bow9 👏

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sslmay11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Beautifully written. But heart wrenching to read ...Paro's good-bye..

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zanayaforever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Am at a loss for words..
The future track beautifully laid out..our paro,s ' too- gud- for- this- world' innocence expertly portrayed 👏 👏 👏
Why why why d major is snarling at her????
Luved d bonding of rudr- aman..seemed quite natural wen u say it..
Also d practical qns paro had bout delhi trip..very convincing 👏
uff am spent now 😛

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Anushka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Wow , that was heartbreaking .

u write so well

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Sunara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Can I say I love you damnnit after watching the episode today and reading some reactions? 🤗
I am recommending this story to every skeptic out there!

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Exprimere

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

This was heart warming. You do perspectives brilliantly. The moments, the words, the days that pile up, and one just becomes a pattern on the fabric of the family. There is no need for appreciation, nor any acknowledgement. But when you look back, it won't just be a void, it will be a crater, that can never be filled. I do hope Paro reaches these crossroads in the show, too.

Part 2 would feature Rudra I'm assuming? Waiting...

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Navin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: princessunara
Can I say I love you damnnit after watching the episode today and reading some reactions? 🤗
I am recommending this story to every skeptic out there!

Mein bhi "I love you dammit!" 😆 There is a lot of possibilities in this track, Sunara--there is absolutely no reason to huff and puff and act frenzied. This has the potential to fix and re-calibrate RUDRA'S senses, more than Paro's.

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