IshRa SS- 'Tera Hone Laga Hoon' Final Part(s) updated Pg 8 - Page 10

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

very well written..nice...👏

Originally posted by: niki795

part 2

awesome part
loved it
Raman and ishita followed ruhi
the whole basket ball game is funny

Originally posted by: Ram-an-tic.Moi

Lovely Updates Namy!

I had just typed out this really long reply but it somehow got deleted :(
Aww.. still you manged to re-write lovely long reply.. I am really touched.. Thanks!!

Anyway, back to your updates! Was such a treat to read them! And no they were not long at all.

I could so imagine RKB getting that "sudden" attack of acidity on seeing his wife talk to some random man. Hota hai Raman. Actually such incidents concerning one's lovely wife often leads to acidity only! 🤣
And then the western attire scenes! I was grinning crazy! The 1st thing that came to mind was "never underestimate the power of any woman Mr.Bhalla, especially if she is your wife!" :P Kya possessiveness hai abhi se!
And the basketball match was a superb scene! I really want to see it on the show! The mother in Ishu could only see the faults of the other children while daddy Bhalla knew his angel of a daughter only too well! And their banter "aapke bhi school mein basketball compulsory hona chahiye tha" Hahahahaha! Epic that was!
Doordarshan family was too good too!
Glad you liked all these scenes.. And you mentioned most of my favorite parts too.. I'd a great time writing these scenes.. I am really happy you enjoyed reading it..
Coming to Shagun, i feel bad for her & her choices sometimes! But i never cease to thank her for leaving Raman. Warna humare IshRa kaise milte?! :D
Well said about Shagun.. And about Ishra- woh kehte hai na "Kuchh paane k liye k liye kuchh khona padta hai.. " :D
Loved IshRa's face off! After all, jahan gussa wahi'n pyaar!
And the conclusion was really sweet. After all what better way to make up than to apologize, forgive, forget & hug it out!
Really glad you found ending sweet..
And once again, the length is never issue! We are laalchi Ishra fans, the more IshRa you give us, the more we want! ;) Hope you write again soon! :)
Tell you truth, i really had a tough time posting these long updates due to its length.. I didnt want to split it in more than 2 parts.. So your positive comment means a lot.. I really thank to all of you for reading these exceptionally long parts & commenting.. Glad I was able to entertain you.. :D