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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dh19

nice and cute update
loved the taayam and taarey scene
swayam bichara



thank you so much for all the replies
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: qwerty012

"poori world mein is rey ko meri behen hi mili thi..saala"😆😆🤣



😆thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi ...main na ek hi line likhnewaali hoon everytime- every update almost sab ko same line pasand aatha hain and that will most likely be the last one or so...like last update- swayams is rey ko meri behen hi mili thi line!!!😆😆😆...so main sirf last line likhdoongi...

but jokes apart thanks
thanks again for replies and likes ...and views- replied individually as well! no TR this time please adjust...actually skip if u want

PART 32


Next day rehearsal hall

Everyone in thought...no taani

"guys!! Hello!!!"rey

"makes sense rey" "zyaada kaam hoga" "college ke saath rehersel aur doosron ko classes" " uske upar exams" " aur mera kaam" "but showcase karne ke liye achha rahega" Sharon "agree" " aur kuch kamaayi bhi hojaayegi"" exciting types bhi hain kisiko sikhaana" "par kaun aayega seekhne?""aur hum kaise sikhaayenge?"

"hum sab ka timetable daaldenge tho kisi ek ko zyaada time spend nahin karna padega...lets do detailed plan but pehle what say? All of u in? VP sir se permission to use the rehearsal hall main leloonga"

Their yeah and ohhs ---everyone hug and start making plans ...

"great idea rey"sharon

"actually basic suggestion taani ka tha"

"tho tum log kal yehi discuss karrahe the?" swayam

"haan" and then grinning," kyun? tumhe kya laga kya karrahe the?"

"REY!" swayam ," tu ...darwaaze se bhi mat aa ghar..."

"good tab taani mere ghar aasakthi hain" and walked off making swayam glare at him, Sharon giggle.. swayam gave her also a look and walked away, she sighed and shook her head.

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after a while- taani walked in while the gang was busy doing some nonsense and working

"u know we should get someone else to do all this ..." simmi pointing the paper work," taani se pooche? "to Sharon" shes fast in all this"

"mujhe nahin lagtha ki wo free types hain" aashi

"but im sure she ll help" Sharon just to disagree with aashi

Both turned to swayam," i think she s busy" he replied making Sharon get irritated ," but tum log taani se ppoche dekho if you want... "

"kya poochna hain mujhse?" taani walked in and asked, looking at everyone in general..

"taani we were wondering ki tum humein is paperwork mein help karsathi ho ?" simmi and held out her papers, taani took them and looked thro..said," sorry simmi, nahin karpaaoongi. Mere bohot kaam hain"

"cmon taani...tumhaara rehersals bhi nahin hain, im sure u can "rinni

Taani s face changed slightly , rey realised she was hurt but before he could say anything , she had forced a smile on her face and said," mujhe everyday teen companies visit karna hain aur data collect karna hain ...uske baad kuch laptop mein ana;lysis kaam hoga jo mujhe college mentors ko bhejna hain...ummm maybe if you can help in my work rinni i will be free.."she replied her voice even.. rinni looked as usual confused, Sharon/simmi exchanged glances and the guys exchanging glances wondered if grisl fight would start

taani realising the sudden seriousness laughed out and continued," and agar wo time bachtha hain tho mujhe aaplogon se poochna tha ki aapke classes ka first student bansakthi hoon?" and smiled genuinely.

rey looked at her surprised - she hadn't told him..he felt his heart swell up in joy, it showed in his eyes as taani looked at him for his reaction ... he moved to her and gave her a one armed hug putting into the hug his happiness .. he was however pushed unceremoniously by the others who all started ...ooo...haan haan aajaao - everyone pulled her in happily excitedly ---

swayam patted rey- "this is why she gave you this idea in the first place? "sarcastic

"Don't think so but its a bonus" both watched as the rest of them pulled her and took her with all the forms that they had been drafting for admissions and made her sit on one of the box like chairs in the hall, all sitting standing and moving around her

Taani yahaan aao pehle...yeh sab forms fill karo..we shud inaguarate in style(Sharon)...sab forms kyun yaar?(nil) Sirf yeh...nahin nahin yeh nahin ...fees hain kya? ...of course hain rinni(Sharon) ...warna main kisiko teach nahin karnawaala...taani yahaan ..nahin yahaan sign karo..main baad mein aajoo(taani)...waise kitne din ka courses karenge? (rinni) Din ka? Mahine bolo- din main kya seekh sakthe ho?(nil)------everyone spoke up together except rey and swayam who stood and stared

main baad mein aajao(taani) ..nahin apshakun hoga-first customer ko waapas nahin bhejna chahiye(amar holding her down ) ...customer, yeh garage hain kya?(bharat)...ya canteen?(Vicky), student customer nahin hota...taani aap kya types seekhogi? Yahaan liko(aashi)..yeh dhakkan wo likegi kaise? Usko karna hain- likhna nahin(bharat)...Guys..guys ...guys stop ..kya hain yeh sab- Sharon screaming ...back off everyone...everyone went quiet for a second and then

maine bola tha -yeh sab nahin chahiye...bas dance hi dance karo...and Vicky held taani s hand pulling her up twirling her, everyone watched grinning and as he stopped, they all clapped happily. Vicky bowed and told taani- agar tumhe special instructor chahiye tho extra charge lagega...looking at rey...and as u r our first student ,you can choose ki tum kisse seekhogi

"obviously rey se" rinni punched rey playfully

"nahin" " nahin" both swayam and taani said it at the same time. Swayam looked relieved.

"nahin ..." taani walked to rey," rey, Main.." her look conveying to him that he would never be her teacher , he would distract her as much as she would get distracted by him

"of course ,no problem, go on" he smiled knowing that her wanting to re learn was in itself a big step for her

"okay, settled then...taani tumhe main sikhaaonngi" Sharon replied happily

"nahin..sharon bh..sharon...main aashi se seekhsakthi hoon?" she asked her voice low , tentatively - aashi looked surprised but happy

Everyone exchanged glances waiting for Sharon to respond,rather erupt .. rey raised his eyebrows at taani.."okay whatever! " Sharon tried to hide her hurt and snapped at Vicky," yeh special offers dene se pehle sabse discuss karna padega. Don't do this to anyone else again. No other student gets these choices" and walked to the end where her bag was kept...swayam looked at taani with a blamewaala look.

"bhai muje unse darr lagtha hain...main seekh nahin paaoongi" she replied his unasked Q softly her tone hoping he would understand.Everyone looked at each other like thats true.."phir bhi, itna bluntly kehne ki kya zaroorat thi?"

taani looked at rey," its ok taani , speak to her baad mein, wo samaj jaayegi!"he whispered and smiled," ab chalo everyone back to work..." everyone moved here and there

Aashi came running to taani and jumpimg said," taani kab se start types karein?"

"aap mere trainer ho, aap bolo"

"shaam ko...okay? main itna khush types hoon.. waise taani yeh suddenly dance seekhne ka mood kahaan se aaya?" aashi asked

"wo..." she looked around," mujhe rey ko surprise dena tha" whispered blush spreading over her face.

"OOO.." aashi said loudly making everyone turn to them, taani shhh ed her , she giggled , taani giggled ..aashi jumped up/down and hugged her.taani hugged her back feeling equally happy and excited.

"taani..." simmi called waving the forms, taani moved to her catching sight of a hurt Sharon and felt guilty.

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Girls locker room

Taani in front of sharons locker nervous , Sharon came in, saw her and gave her a formal smile

"sorry Sharon bhabhi"

"its fine taani..its ur choice "she looked away

"Sharon bhabhi main jaanthi hoon aap sabse best ho par ...mujhe...matlab problem meri hain"Sharon looked Q," main ek baar dance seekhne se peeche hat chuki hoon aur main phir se koi chance nahin lena chahthi. aap perfect ho...aur ...main..mujhe...meri problem hain ki main aapki daant sun nahin paaoongi bas..."she blurted, Sharon s hurt disappeared at her earnestness,"sorry "

"its fine taani" she replied more genuinely ," as long as you can learn, its okay. And aashi is good as well" and turned to the locker while taani s eyebrows went up at aashi s good as well...," but taani why now? U are already so occupied"

"wo...ummm...mujhe rey ko surprise dena tha"

"ohhh..."Sharon got into her teasing mode," tum rey ke liye dance karne waali ho? " she laughed imagining it..closed the locker

"nahin " taani shook her head," rey ke saath dance karna hain " Sharon s face changed, she understood what taani meant..where taani was comimg from.she smiled and placed her hand on taani s arm.

"and im sure you can...just don't give it up "and adjusted her bag," so im leaving..and all the best for the dance" she moved away smiling

"Sharon bhabhi, " taani called," wo aashi mera choice hain par sirf dance seekhne ke liye"

It took a second for Sharon to register what taani said, when it did her face changed and she left making the smile on taani face disappear into a frown wondering what had happened.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update
Loved it
Taani wants to learn how to dance wow
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Love the whole update
Ashi and Taani scene was cute
OMG, Taani learning dance to dance with Rey love it
Please update soon and pm me

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update :)
Loved it :)
Update soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome updt...
oh god sab kitna confusing baatein karte hai...
thanks to sharon sab quite ho jate hai...
taani wants to learn dance for rey...lovely...
love shaani's convo...
ab tum best line last mein likhte ho to sab kya karenge...
best line best hi hoti hai na...
lyk this updt ...love taani's last line...

" wo aashi mera choice hain par sirf dance seekhne ke liye"
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update.
Taani going to learn dance
And perform wid reyy

Wow its going to b awesome.

Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Taani learning dance to dance with Rey love it
Please update soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
both the chapters were amazing
loved taarey meeting nd the way they understand each other
gang scenes were just rocking nd hilarious just loved them!!!
not to forget sharon's equation with taani nd her gussa!!
liked the way swayam luked at taani was reallt cute nd then her answer
the last line nd sharon's reaction was a lil shocking nd confusing but i m sure i'll get that
in short both the updates were awesome!! nd i m waiting for the next update eagerly!!
thxx for the pm nd the wonderful on time updates!!
😛

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