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Sruthi

@dauntless.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

This HAS to be THE BEST OS I've read till date. I won't elaborate because right now I'm so lost in it, it's probably going to take me time I get out.
So good. So bloody good. Oh my god.

Please. Please write more. And DO NOT FORGET TO PM ME.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Awsumm Raz..Though dun follow Beintehaa or ZaYa but it was Cute nd Romantic! Thanxx fr pm..

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-DarkSlayer-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Fantastic one shot. 👏

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: KaranShilpa:)
Oh wow, as i was reading, was hoping to find an index of your work in the end but amazed to realise its your first OS on this couple! please do write more, you really made the couple sizzle with their chemistry! and if you have an index, do lemme know!
thanks :)

Whoopsies. Lol. No this is the first one I've ever written on ZaYa. I have an Index and the link is in the signature. It consists of everything that I have written on so far. Feel free to pop in some time if you wish.

I'm glad you liked it!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9
its really beautiful and romantic.i love the way zain confess his love.zaya last part was damn hot.keep writing more on zaya.love to read more of u'r awesome writing.

Thanks. I had to make him confess in some way that kept him in character. Glad you liked it. Will for sure continue to write more. Thanks once again.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: -ExceptioalMe-
OMGGG loved every word of it but i think it was a hurry steps from our zain lolzzz ,,,

well written will be waiting for more from u , fab OS

It's Zain. Everything is bound to be a spur of the moment thing. Lol, but I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: preity_d
it was just so romantic...

Thanks 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: SabrinaMalik
***Big Tight Hug for you 🤗***

Reserved.
Abhi aati hoon 😉

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Unreserved.

Okay..so lemme breath first.

You are like seriously getting better and better at this ^^
Mera Beintehaa intezaar khatm hua...the OS is here.

It was Perfection,man! 👍🏼

Loved it. ❤️

I don't know what you've done, but I can't quote the dialogues from the story.

So I guess I'll have to type my favourite lines from the story.

Double work karwa rahi ho aap. 😆

"I really loved them too" he said as he stood in front of the mirror and held the earrings to his ear. *ROFL ROFL* 🤣 🤣Trust Zain to come up with something like this. 😆

"I think they look really nice on me." Anything && Everything looks nice on you baby, but this...I'm not sure. 😆

Nervous Zain is cho chweet. My chunnu munnu. "Thodi tho sharam karo." 😆

And then the intense jealous-wala-Zain. 😳

"I hate it when people stare at what's mine."

"Yours."

Smiriking-wala-Zain. 😉 "Ab dobaraa nikaah aise hi thodi kar liya tha, Mamu Ki Bhaanji"

And naughty Zain. "Let's enjoy a private party." ☺️ Ohoo...Kya iraade hain aapke Zain Miyaan?

He said to her as his hands reached at her waist and pulled her back flush against him...he silenced her and placed his chin on her shoulder. This was so...Ahhh... ☺️*Sometimes you leave me Speechless, Raz*

"Here's your hug, and here's your husband." Mast dialogues. 👍🏼

Zain's confession && Aaliya's confusion.

And she ripped his shirt off?!?! 😲😲

Aaj kal Aaliya mein bahot taqat aa gayi hai...kabhi dhakka mar kar bed par girati hai aur kabhi shirt phaad deti hai. 😆

And Zain leaves no chance of chedofying her. "I didn't know you were so impatient to sleep with me." 😆

Aaliya's:

"I"

"Love"

"You"

One word: Beautiful.

And then the completion of the unfinished business. 😳
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Aur uske baad I fell in Love with your works all over again. 👏

AWriterAtHeart wrote an OS on my insistence! 😲 That's like a dream come true. I'm not even kidding.

And I liked your 'plotbunny' (God. How do you come up with such cute words? 😆).

You don't need to be 'nervous as hell'. Your works are meant to be appreciated. And if someone doesn't like them, he's lying.

Looking forward for more of ZaYa.

Ek Realm Of Mystery is forum per bhi banana hai aapko.

Keep writing.

You're beautiful. :)

Sorry for this longish comment.

You were not bored, I hope?

It's 3:30 AM here. 🥱

Gotta sleep.

And I have to catch up with Silk Ribbons too.

P.S.-- Itna bada review kabhi nahin likha meine. 😆 This is a record-breaker. And ThankYou for the PM. ❤️

Lololololol. Thanks so much for the hug! 🤗

Am I? I thought I was losing my touch. 😆

Wow, nice pun. The OS is indeed here. Perfection, huh? Is that supposed to be a hint towards the other OS I wrote called "Perfection"? Lol. Intentional or not, that was a good one.

Fanks

Not done on purpose. You probably can't quote it because I've written the no copy command. Sorry for the double work but curse those who plagiarised my work.

Lol, I love the naughty Zain so I was like there's no way I'm turning Zain into Romeo cuz he ain't one. He's got his own persona.

Lol, the image of Zain wearing earrings...

Chunnu munnu? LOL! Meri Mom ki best friend ki yaad dila di. Lol.

Yeah, like I said, I wasn't going to change Zain. Just make him more naughtier than he usually is.

Haw, ab iraade bhi main bataoon?

Speechless huh? You've said quite a lot already to remain speechless. Lol. No worries, I'm enjoying it though.

That has to be my favourite dialogue. I loved it when I was writing it as well. "I didn't know you were so impatient to sleep with me" was a dialogue that was screaming "Zain" for me so I was like I am so putting this in, no matter what.

Yes well you know how things can't remain unfinished. That is against the law.

I am so sorry to inform you that your love is unrequited. I don't think my man will be pleased with that knowledge. Lol, jokes. All I said was true. A nudge was needed and I got it from you so voila, here is the end product.

Dream come true? You're making me sound like some sort of celebrity. *shakes head*

Ah, "plotbunny" is not my own word. It is fanfiction terminology. A plotbunny is basically an idea that appears in front of the writer out of nowhere and is so adorable that we have to adopt it (hence write the OS). I tend to use a lot of fanfiction terminology.

I've moved my index to the FanFiction forum so that I can have one index for all my work. Links in the signature if you haven't seen it already.

You're a darling.

Bored? Of course I was bored. Was wondering when you'd stop writing. Lol, no just kidding. I loved reading your comment. It was truly fun to read.

Congrats for staying up until 3. Between 3-5 is when eventually everyone falls asleep. Lol.

Catch up whenever you have time. It's not going anywhere.

Chalo, main record break karne ke liye kaam toh aayi. Lol. No problem!