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Posted: 11 years ago
😭😭...so sad...
that basta*d adi...
updte soon...
thankx for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
i am totally numb after reading this and the previous update...totally shattered and sweating hard...

dont know what to write anymore...this ADI...omg what has he done...never ever thought it wud this horrendous deed by him...

its not about Arnav being Khushi's first...i always accept that they both will have a past...just like a normal being...even a story where Khushi conciously moves away due to any reason...and has a life of her own with someone else, is still not so hurting...but this...i am still reeling under the shock...

and beyond that, now she wants to become a hooker...just to destroy Arnav...oh god..no...please...

will all this truth ever come out...seems like no chance...
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Posted: 11 years ago
mindblowing parts
liked them
feeling terrible for
them
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such an emotional update. Arnav destroyed her business just to take revenge on her for her betrayal.

Let me make it easy for you...THIS is the beginning...Anything that ties you to me will be destroyed. Every thought of yours will be shackled. Every decision of yours will be screwed. Every action of yours will be curbed. So, officially, your business just suffered a scrape.
30 mins..30 mins is all you got to pack and leave my house and my premises.

Finally Khushi got the point what he meant by her destruction when he first came to meet her at her shop in Hyderabad. It all made sense to her. So now you are throwing me out because you are done with me? You faked all these just to possess me? this care, concern, your sorrys, everything is just a pretense to use me?

What an irony? I cant believe YOU are saying all these after what you did...Just for the record, I am throwing you out because my house, my bedroom is not a br*thel and I hav...

What the hell did you just mean? Tell me you didnt call me pr*stitute now...Tell me NOW..She barked over the phone...

He is hurt after seeing Khushi with someone else, and is not in senses and trying to destroy her, what will be his condition when he comes to know that Khushi was raped and not that she submitted herself to someone... I'm sure he will regret and will be in more pain than Khushi for having hurt her and destroying her business and also hurling such words to her.. He will not be able to forgive nor forget all the things he did to hurt her.
He was not with her when she need him badly and had broken his promise he made to her - My shoulder is big enough to comfort you. This will really kill him from inside for not being around with Khushi and save her from being raped and he becoming the reason for her being raped..I'm feeling really sad for Arnav, and looking forward to see how you are going to unfold his reactions on knowing the truth.. The big questions is who is going to find the truth and how?

The man for whom her heart beats, who once said he admired the woman in her today gave a name she never imagined in her life. The man for whom she used to wait all day, who once said his house is her palace today called it as br*thel after taking away her pride. To think of it, its all meticulously pre-planned to destroy her with a simple drink, to make sure she doesnt remember so that he could assault her so brutally...As she thought more about it, the night was special to him, his ultimate success and he made sure he added another achievement to the day which he will probably relish for his life. What a repugnant character! She thought.

Khushi is right in thinking that Arnav had spiked her and marked her as his, circumstances are making her to think in that way and all the words Arnav said before getting married to her that he will ensure that he will make her fail as the fight between them had become too personal, and Arnav Singh Raizada was not backing out, and was thinking of destroying everything of hers...What will be Khushi's reaction, when she gets to know the truth that it was Adi who had spiked her drink and was raped by him.. Its very sad that she doesn't even know she is raped and is thinking that her husband had assaulted her, will she be able to forgive herself for even thinking that Arnav had faked everything, destroyed her once he used her and satisfied his revenge, and for not trusting him.



You want to ruin me..Be my guest...My every destruction will burn you into ashes...I have nothing to lose and but you do have quiet a lot. The game begins NOW..
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She quickly thanked the lady and rushed to the PCO, she called NK...

NK remember how you always wanted to do me favor..Now is the time...Tell me who are your richest clients in Mumbai...

Because I need to sleep with them...Hook me up & Count me in...


His cellphone flickered with several missed calls from NK & Aman and then followed by text from his source that didnt grab his attention...

She moved into the Women's Hostel, very close to AR...She is safe..Checked the area...

Both of them are hurt very badly, and they are planning to destroy/hurt themselves so that the other person gets hurts and suffers. Does Khushi really means to sleep around with the rich clients just to hurt and tarnish Arnav's name. I'm sure Arnav will not let such a think happen... and probably both Arnav and NK would try to safegaurd Khushi. I'm sure NK wouldn't want her to get into this, now that he is aware that she is married and he would probably try to bring the couple together.
Arnav burnt the bed into ashes on which he saw his wife with someone else, which clearly shows how much he is hurt, any man wouldn't like to see what he saw on his bed. He pull out the mangalsutra and toe rings from the flames...which now became his memories of her..his dreams and heart shattered thinking of her betrayal... Even though he told her to leave his house, he is still caring about her and has sent out his men to ensure she is safe...

Deeptiya, you brought out clearly the emotions/pain both of them are going through thinking that they were betrayed by the other person.. but little did they know that fate played a cruel game in their life by bringing in Adi.. I hope once the misunderstandings are cleared and both of them know that they are not at fault and be a support system for each other. Eagerly waiting for the next updates to see how you are going to unravel the truth and take this forward. Please update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update!!! That was so emotional Deepthi!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
let see what is coming in their lives
hope she not doing any scary thing
but he will egret later with his words

its a sad n emotional update
waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful Updates Dear!!! Eagerly Waiting to read the next updates...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I guess being speechless is the only emotion you can come to associate with after reading the updates, especially from the past 2 chapters.

My decision keeps vacillating when it comes to supporting either of them because both their pains and sufferings manage to prick my heart everytime I read about it. I loved the little part where you have written about his past. It helps one understand more about him in person. He definitely had all his pride and everything in Khushi and that is exactly what Adi snatched away from him and this is the only reason why it becomes difficult to digest this sudden twist because poor girl has to suffer for no mistake of hers except for loving the man who has worked hard all through his life.

Khushi is a very strong woman and I love the fact that she wants to stay back and fight for her pride though it has been brutally crumbled. Honestly if you ask me, I would want her to be equally involved in Adi's destruction. I wonder if there will be a face-off in the next chapter since their families will soon come to know about it. Also, I am not very sure of the decision that she has taken since at the moment she is acting more on her impulse and not thinking about it cynically. And I again hope you update the next few parts soon so as to tame down out erratic heartbeats.

Waiting for the next part.
Update soon. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please... Anything but dont let her sleep around as she is planning.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update! arnav's condition was so heartrending..the way he desperately clutches her mangalsutra n toe rings from the flames, as those were the things which first made him feel close her, was just too overwhelming n sad. i just can't describe the pain i felt while reading thru that scene. according to me, that was the most effective n heartrending scene in this ff, after the MU. i cud imagine arnav sitting at a corner in the room n watching all the flames with blank painful eyes...

khushi received a severe blow when arnav said all that on phone. all her dreams shattered in a single minute. deepthi i must tell u this even if some people may not support this..i am really not in favour of the idea of khushi treading on the path of prostitution. i was guessing this may happen when u told in the last update that she will take a decision which will be against her morals. but i never wanted this to really happen. if it really happens, if she really does sleep around with men, it'll be severe butchering of her character. i know that they are hell bound on destroying each other, not caring that they are abt to ruin their own selves. but this is just not the way!!

i must make this clear. i don't hate prostitutes. but i dont like the idea of prostitution when u really have a choice. some of them come to this field out of force n pressure, some due to injustice done by the society, some due to the fact that they have no choice as the entire society have shunned them frm choosing any othr means of livelihood. but i believe if there's really the remotest choice of choosing something else(excepting the cases of coercion n pressure)even if the girl is not that educated, she should never do anything like that.. ...she can go someplace else far away, where the society no longer knows her...when a girl can take such a drastic step as selling herself, why can't she take the step of moving away frm her city, her society. there are so many menial jobs in our nation for girls n boys to learn n do which dont require them to be educated. sure they wont earn much, have to work very hard, but then could live a much respected life, nowhere near prostitution, which is the easiest way out to get out of a situation. the thing is that khushi is a character which is very inspiring, at least to me. whatever she has done or achieved in life she has done it all on her own. her never say die attitute, come what may quality and courage to face society in spite of any situation, inspires girls to draw out courage frm her. but her latest decision of avenge, has disappointed me too much. deepthi, just tell me she wont hook around with men. she is going to just roam around with the rich men in parties, just to create the impression to the society that she's sleeping around, but in reality she's won't. and arnav will think she does. isn't it?? just assure me this much that her pregnancy is a result of that night, n not as a result of sleeping around.. adi raping her was a heartbreak to me, though i know our khushi is strong enough to overcome the trauma. it took me some time to accept all that, however overwhelming it was. i really do hope u don't take the story to that level...i may sound a bit harsh. but spoke whatever was son my mind.
Edited by poojasidd123 - 11 years ago

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