Virman - LoVeRs.. or RiVaLs.. last part 25 updated 18-05-2015 - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome updates
loved it
read both parts together
nice
continu soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

AMazing dear

Loved it
Thanks for the Pm
Continue soon 😊



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Originally posted by: Syed695

Amazin update!!!

Liked rivalry love..n now maanvi would make him realize.nice n thanks for the PM!!



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Awesome update..
Loved itt...
Virat still loves Manvi hope he will not go to the court...
Aww Manvi papa is out of the coma..
Hope Manvi will solve all the problems between her and Virat..
Aww love the kids they are soo sweet..
Update soon..
Thanks for the PM...



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im glad u loved my atempt..
keep reading n comenting..😃

Originally posted by: komalvirman

Very nice update finally she going to

Confess her love wow ...
Update soon and thanks for the pm



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Finally I completed it..
Awsm story dear. ..
Different and enjoyable. ..
Feel sad for virman. ...
They suffer alot bcz of their misunderstanding n bcz of their blind revenge. ..
In this revenge they forget their sweet mannu n viru...
Outstanding wrk deat...
Love vini and mani 's character. ..
Love these cuties pies...
And abt latest update ...
Again feel sad for vivirman. ...
But wf each update story become more interesting. ..
Finally manvi ' s father was out of comma..
Egrly waiting for next update. ..
Want to know et stored in future ????
Thanks alot for pm dear n also for ur courage t...
Keep rocking



thank you soo much dear...
finally u read it..
im glad u liked it...😊
keep reading n commenting...

thanks dear...

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

awesome updates

loved it
read both parts together
nice
continu soon
thankx for pm



thanks dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank u sooo much guys for ur lovely coments..
and to all those who hited like button..
all urs coments encourage me alot...



PART ~ 17

Virats place
V ' mom : virat what happened son.. From lst 5 yrs v have done wat u said.. Never askef u anything.. Bt not any more ... Plz tell me virat..

Virat hugs his mom n tears started falling down his cheeks...
V'mom : wgat happen virat tell me...

Virat narates the whole story to his mom from manvi dad heart atrack..court case.. Party..his encounter with kids.. The case hr wants to file... Everything realred to manvi n kids..

V'mom : talk to manvi once virat... N sort out every thing... i have seen u virat from past 5 yrs nt even a single day went when u didnt miss manvi...

V : i asked dad about that tendor bt dad refused... whom to trust i was congused... Bt i trusted manvi n even compensated the loss... Bt she left me..!! She left me alone mom without even listening to me.. I tried hard to cobtact her bt no use..!!

V ' dad was listen everyting.. Standing on the door...
: in soorryy son..
V : dad soorry bt y .??
V dad : coz of u remaind away from ur love from ur kids..
V : dad what are u saying..
V dad : virat i lied to u about that tendor 5 yrs back..
V : ( shocked ) dad wat are u saying..??
V dad.. : virat losten to me first..i wanted to launch u with this project.. I wanted this project at any cost... For that i offered promotion to the staff.. N mr gupta for the promotion intentional stole those tender qutaion... After i came back from busness trip..i enquired about it.. Bt i thought u have already compensated.. There is no pnt taking out the mater again... I wish i would have done that.. Atleast problems b/w u n manvi would have been sorted..

Maid : virat sir a lady wants to meet me.. Here names manvi ...

Hearing the name manvi virat runs from their..

V : manu..( n hugs her) im sorry manu plz forgive me...
Manvi comes out of hug n holds virats face in his palms...
M : no viru it was my fault.. I left u.. Without even listening to u.. U sufered coz of me..
U did every thing for me.. For my happiness... N i even did not inform u about vini n mani ... Im sory viru plz... I love u.. I dont wanna live without u any longer.. Dont leave me viru plz.. I will not be able ro live without u..

V : shhh... No manu ... It was a random employee how did al this just for promotion...

M : no viru.. Dont be sorry...
N both hugged each other...
V : I love u too manu n kised her 4 head..
Vini n mani : v love u 3.. N came running towards them n hugged them...
Virat n manvi picked vini n mani in their arms..
N shared a family hug..

Voice : what the hell is happening here...


Edited by little_angle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update now all mu sort out
btw them but whose came know
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow dear..
awesome update..
just loved it..
do continue soon..
and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
NYC UPDATE. WOW EVERYTHING IS SOLVED BETWEEN VIRMANS NOW. NOW WHO HAS COME. WAITING 4THE NEXT.THANKS 4PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice ...
Finally they confessed their feelings
Bt nw who is new trouble
Is it manvi mom
Waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey what's that voice
don't make any more difference between virman dil
loved the update

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