Kisha ff *loving u is hard* pt5 pg10 & pt6 pg13 - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
Loved this update stavan
Awee kd is soo sad yet soo witty...loved his exchange with Panchi
Bechara beech mein stuck RV...😆
So it was sad yet not a bore...loved it
Thanks Stavan
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: tinaswea

Awww... the update was awesome!

Ummm... feeling sad for kd 😭 he loves her sooo damn much !
Kiya will sooon realise her love for kd I guess!
I really loved the way uh wrote kd's and panchi's dialogues!
It was amazing!
WOW! WOW! WOW!
You write so beautifully!
Uh are a wonderful writer!
Keep writing Brotha!

Lots of love
Tina

thanks a lot sis
I am glad u like it
thanks for appreciating
means a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: KDlover

Stavan bro,dis was awsm👏

hope kiya will soon realise her love 4 KD!

thanks a lot Naina
I am glad u like it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: sneha02

Loved this update stavan

Awee kd is soo sad yet soo witty...loved his exchange with Panchi
Bechara beech mein stuck RV...😆
So it was sad yet not a bore...loved it
Thanks Stavan

Thanks a lot Neha
I am glad u like it
yup poor Rv pansh ke beech phas gaya 😆
thanks for appreciating
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
PART-6
KIYA'S POV
I am feeling so empty . Tomorrow I am leaving for Paris to fulfill my dream but I am not happy .. I love Kd but dont have courage to trust him. Or u can say I dont have courage for a relationship .
As I was thinking all this Sheeba said : Kiya u love Kd . Accept kar le . Mere samne nahi toh atleast Kd ko bata de . He deserves to know right...
I said : Sheeba plzz i told u i dont want to talk about it . I am going for a walk ..
Sheeba: yahi toh kar rahi ho apni feelings ke sath . Just running away ...
i know Sheeba is right but i cant . I was on beach lost in my thoughts . I saw Kd . I think i should atleast say goodbye to him . I was about to go near him when i saw some girl hugging him .. What the hell , i mean i dont expect Kd to wait for me forever but he moved on in no time. I dont care yes i dont care . No i care coz i love him .. My eyes became moist ...
KD'S POV
Oh god this irritating Ruby .. Subah se mujhe chipak rahi hain . And all thanks to mom ." Kd my son plz show Ruby whole mumbai she is my friend's daughter . I am in Paris so u have to help her out" . Mom is too much . I mean am i some tour guide or what ?? And this Miss. Feviquick eating my brain with her stupid talks and flirting . "Kd u r so handsome" "Kd u know we are so compatible" "Kd u look hot" and blah blah blah . And now she just hugged me . God this stupid girl . I than saw Kiya . . Oh god she is about to go . I untangled myself from this feviquick and went near her . I caught her hand
i said : Paris jaa rahi hon na kal. Atleast good bye toh keh deti for sake of our friendship...
She jerked my hand away and said : i thaught u were busy with that girl . See she is waiting ..
wait a sec is Kiya jealous or something . But she doent love me so why is she jealous . May be she loves me . Cool time to play ..
i said : actually she proposed me . She is cute. So Kiya wat should i say . Yes keh dun . See her she is amazing na..
i looked at Ruby and waved my hand . She gave me flying kiss. Yucks she is so irritating . Than i turned and saw fire in Kiya's eyes ..
Kiya : why r u asking me ?? U find her cute than say yes go ..
Kiya looks so cute when she is jealous .. I than noticed a tear fell from her eye. Kd u moron enough of your jokes now..
i said : Kiya i am sorry i was just kidding . She is irritating and my mom's friend's daughter thats it. U know Kiya i can never love anyone coz for me love happens just once and it happened to me .. Yes Kiya i love u and just u . Kiya i know u dont trust me but its okay ...
Kiya started crying and i hugged her ..
She said while sobbing : i am sorry Kd . I love u too .its just that i am coward that i dont trust u . I am sorry ...
KIYA'S POV
Kd loves me so much . I love him yes I love him . Now I cant run more from my feelings. I trust Kd . I cant go away without telling my feelings to Kd
KD'S POV
Kiya murmured: I love u Kd and now I trust u too . Plzz never ever break my trust or my heart..
I said : kiya I promise . So now u are my gf right ??
Kiya: hmmm
I said : hmm kya ?? Pakka gf ho na tum ..
Kiya: Kd ab kya is keliye legal documents banvau .
I said : wow u are my gf ...
We both remained in same position . I was caressing her head and she was just hugging me tightly . But our moment was broken by that Ruby ..
Ruby: Kd who is this cry baby ??
we broke our hug and i replied angrily : Kiya her name is Kiya and u plzz take a taxi and go to your hotel . I will send some nice tour guide tom . So bye bye ..
Ruby went away angrily . Kiya was chukling . I cupped her face and we kissed ..
i said : hey Kiya i will miss u ...
kiya: kd u sure about this long distance relationship i mean ...
i said : yes kiya ..
Saying this i kissed her forehead ...
we both spent remaining time at beach . Holding eachothers hands ...
NEXT DAY AT AIRPORT
Kiya ,me and kiya's friend Sheeba went to airport . Sheeba higged kiya and left giving us privacy ... We both were sitting at cafe holding eachothers hand and feeding chocolate pastry to eachother .. Announcement of Kiya's flight was made .
Kiya gave a peck on my lips and said I love u and went away . Now I cant control my tears ...
AFTER 2 YEARS
Kiya returned from Paris and next day itself Kd proposed her for mairrage and she agreed ..
--the end--
so guys here is last part . So plzz tell me hows dis ??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
Yay 1st to comment in this ff as well
The beech scene was super adorable⭐️
Ye FF bhi katham ho gaya! 😭😭😭
All your Kisha FFs except for the haunted house 1 got over 😭
Loved the update!! 😃😃 Keep writing 😳😳
Edited by SweetAndSpice - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
Wow ...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kiya finally accepted.xpressed her lov...
Kd n his humour...my fav par of dis ff...
Kisha forever n ever ...
Loved it stavan...
Another ff ended...
Bt really thnx alot for writing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Loved it loved it ji
Awww kiya jealous huh serves her right
And finally confession
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
Beautiful update Stavan 😊
Feeling nostalgic... khatam ho gaya... 😭
Bt really amazing
Loved it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SweetAndSpice

Yay 1st to comment in this ff as well

The beech scene was super adorable⭐️
Ye FF bhi katham ho gaya! 😭😭😭
All your Kisha FFs except for the haunted house 1 got over 😭
Loved the update!! 😃😃 Keep writing 😳😳

thanks a lot
I am glad u like it
no actually 2 ffs remaining
thanks for appreciating

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