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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepthiya



Its not going to be for long...will be OK...Dont think tooo much

i can b really immature sometimes😳

but whatever happend to khushi wont change...the situation ll get better but never ok, right!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepthiya



Its not going to be for long...will be OK...Dont think tooo much

i can b really immature sometimes😳

but whatever happend to khushi wont change...the situation ll get better but never ok, right!...sigh.

ps. ur reply made me feel better😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
😭 OMG, yes I think most of us figured somehow Adi spiked her drink, but still I had to put the story down walkaway, Even though it is a story, it hurt to know she was r****, especially as it was the first time for her. Arnav, believed his eyes, Adi did so that he would. Honestly hope Adi gets punished for what he has done, apart from being beaten black and blue, strung up by his short snd curlies and left to die by Arnav, and yes Khushi. SORRY had to get it off my chest.

Your point is right, women have to be aware of their surroundings and what is happening around them. The world is not a safe place, especially when it is mothers who teach their sons they are god, fathers who themselves believe that due to their own mothers who did the same and then teach their boys, UNLESS a strong women, teaches them different. the cycle will never break. It happens everywhere, not just in India. I grew up in London and was very carefree until I was followed home by a boy, who made inappropriate advances which scared the hell out of me, and changed me forever. Fortunately I was ok, nothing happened but it changed me, Im stronger in my self belief that women should empower themselves by keeping a lookout for signals something is not right.Thats why I really like your Khushi.

As a writer write what you feel, not what you think others want, life is not all roses and hopefully if just one girl is saved from your writing, making her think differently and being able to save herself then its worth it.



I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT CHAPTERS. Yes I want them to come through it together, we all want roses, sorry, but I hope that even though this had happened, it doesnt mean the end of a beautiful relationship..


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Posted: 11 years ago
ermm...i just want to clarify something(in case u MU me)...i m not disappointed wid the story, i m just sad😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Different storyline..waiting for things to get better
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Posted: 11 years ago
This chapter is very emotional, the hurt the pain and the trust. Devasted Arnav. Khushi still under the effects of the spiked drink. That B****D Adi R****D her. so disastorous
I really wish the truth comes out.
I am so shattered reading this chapter. 😭
I just wish the twist didn't have to come so soon, I wished they would have had a bit of time to themselves.
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey deepthi

This is the first chapter i dont want to read it twice

As you said earlier it is not a love story so the twist is as expected

But inspite of knowing all this i feel suffocted while reading. This is the harsh reality of our society. You potrays it very well in this chapter

But you owe one love story full of arshi romance and fights to your fans in future
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Posted: 11 years ago
brilliantly written update. as much painful n difficult to read it was, it was equally impactful n impressionable. i shed tears going thru arnav's pain n grievance. truly, m really more worried abt khushi's condition wen the truth is revealed, rather than anything else. will she be able to forgive n trust arnav, after all the insults he's going to throw her way? m sure she'll rise above everything stronger than ever, but will she lose her trust in men forever? it will be sure difficult as hell to arnav to regain her trust.

but the million dollar question here is , what will happen to the baby?? will she keep it? there is anjali who is strongly against women keeping unwanted child frm forced pregnancies. will she lead khushi to abort the baby, who is at no fault? but again khushi told her mom that at anytime she'll support her child above anything else. so my assumption , is yes, she'll definitely keep the baby.

i just request u one thing... pls let arnav know abt the truth before khushi does, so that he can lend her his wholehearted support. and one more thing...adi shud be killed at the end, or at anytime u want during the later updates. he shud not live to see the face of his innocent child( drat! why am i even calling the baby ''his child'')..in the same way, khushi, arnav, anjali, nani , aman, payal, n everyone who have ever known him, shud never have to see his face, ever again...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey deepthi

This is the first chapter i dont want to read it twice. As you said earlier this is not a love story so the twist is as expected. But inspite of knowing all this i feel suffocated while reading. This is the harsh reality of our society. You potrays it very well in this chapter


But you owe one love story full of Arshi romance and fights to your fans
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Posted: 11 years ago

Deepthi, before I comment on today's update I want to write something about sexual abuses on women which has been happening right from the time man has walked on this planet.

In earlier times and probably even now, when wars were fought between kingdoms and countries, the losing side not only lost its soldiers but the women in that country were raped by the soldiers from the winning side and were probably kept as mistresses and were abused each and every day.

When Hitler was ruling Germany and much of Europe, how many Jewish women were raped by Germans in the name of ethnic cleansing. I have heard and read stories where in prisons just for a piece of bread Jewish women were raped so brutally and these women just tolerated everything as there was not way out except death.

Even in today's times, lets talk about India as we are all Indians. How many husbands come home (many times drunk) and physically abuse their wives and children and later in the night taking their wives for granted have sex with them whether the wife wants it or not. Is that also not kind of a rape?

Girls are scared to go out alone these days due to the fear of sexual abuse. Small girls as little as 1 and 2 get raped. Girls are pushed into prostitution. How many girls voluntarily become prostitutes. These girls are raped everyday.

The list can go on and on.

I want to dedicate this story to all those women who have undergone sexual abuses at the hands of men like Adarsh.

Atleast in this story there is a person called Arnav, who would help Khushi to come out of the trauma and be a support to her. In real life how many Arnavs are out there?

Coming to today's update, it was indeed sad. Khushi was practically raped and she did not even know about it. Arnav is totally broken which is also understandable. We can only hope that these circumstances give them more strength to come out of this and be better human beings more than anything.

Many have commented that they want to kill Adi. I have a better suggestion, by just killing him he will never know the pain what women undergo when they are raped. Instead cut off his balls and let him suffer his entire life and he will never look at any other women in that way.

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