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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifully written.. cant wait for next part..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: radhikalaya

I read this yesterday soon after you posted it. I swear I thought I had commented on it, evidently IF ate it up.

This is so beautifully written and how I wish something like this actually plays out on the show. Do you have an index of all your writings?


Thank you for the feedback.😳

I do not have an index. So far it's just three things out here on RR, My FF Moments In Between, My OS's Smoulder and Unravelling 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
oh this is so sad please make part 2 a happy one
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Oh it has part two too please update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: gunji

where is Part 2???...i had been dreaming of such a sequence for long...

such a sequence has to come at some point in the show too...Paro had been leaving traces of her in his life..like she has his rudraksh which i suppose she will leave behind...then yesterday she placed the rose in the book..little things that will remind of her..






So true. She's leaving bits of herself behind, making mmemories and when/if she leaves he will feel the loss right down to his soul.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Niyo.. Uggh. Tell me when you are updating the second part?

You made my heart ache so badly.

The thing is, Rudra is the character I feel most connected to at times. And reading this, it felt as if it was HIM. Like seriously. You have amazing hold on him. Not one bit OOC this was.

The bold italic parts... Ufff.

Just beautifully written.


Now gimme an update soon! Pretty please?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh wow.. is only i can say... wow. Totally. gripping
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_

Niyo.. Uggh. Tell me when you are updating the second part?


You made my heart ache so badly.

The thing is, Rudra is the character I feel most connected to at times. And reading this, it felt as if it was HIM. Like seriously. You have amazing hold on him. Not one bit OOC this was.

The bold italic parts... Ufff.

Just beautifully written.


Now gimme an update soon! Pretty please?


Hey Anky!😊

Thank you so much!

@ And reading this, it felt as if it was HIM. Like seriously. You have amazing hold on him. Not one bit OOC this was: *does happy dance*

I think part 2 i might put up today or tomorrow.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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We want Part 2!

We want Part 2!!

We want Part 2!!!

We want Part 2!!!!

We want Part 2!!!!!

We want Part 2!!!!!!

We want Part 2!!!!!!!


Shamelessly spamming now... desperate for update..

Taras khalo hum pe...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: niyoti


Hey Anky!😊

Thank you so much!

@ And reading this, it felt as if it was HIM. Like seriously. You have amazing hold on him. Not one bit OOC this was: *does happy dance*

I think part 2 i might put up today or tomorrow.



Can I please request that you do it tonight? I really wanna read and I am going to Rajasthan tomorrow... So, I wont be able to comment kal!

Pweeese update tonight? Pwweeesse?

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