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Priyanka

@Prizi

Achiever

+ 31

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Awesummm os... I alwys hate shanky fr this

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.MrsNatePeters.

@.MrsNatePeters.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

THAT WAS FKING AWESOMEEE. I know it for suree that I will be reading it so many times before the next update!
Firstly ILYYY sooo much for writing this in the first place like we always casually talk abt it and you say you will.. and dude you do it super fast which makes me love you more.lol
Ankuu just can't but help but say this again and again but I LOVEEE the way you write, you write so beautifully. Honestly.
First AR moments were so cuteee! Like Typical AR. Typical Armaan. I am really glaf you decided to show a bit of AR moments before jumping to the main story. This was no way rushed well not acc to mw anyways. Coa this is exactly how I love it... explanation of scenes done fast and the full detailed convos! It's the conversation that I enjoy reading <33.
When Armaan showed her all the stuffs he got for her, I was like WOW that's the best way to hurt her. Lmaooo. Wasn't expecting him to bring that topic in such a manner. Was an awesome surprise!
Riddhima is a bitch! How dare she not tell my Armaan something big like that! So she totally deserved all that he did. That I would have got the tickets myself for you and managed everything dialogue by armaan broke me a bit :'( He is alwayss sooo loving so understanding :') And when Armaan goes " Armaan ko kisses karke night spend karke manalungi" wala bit! OUCHHH must have hurt her cos that was like spot on painful.
overall loveddd the OS.
Update asap!
P.s : Half way through writing the comment I realised that they don't have kids here. LMAOOO

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SleepingBeauty.

@SleepingBeauty.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

^I realised that half way through reading but then I realised how if there was a kid the story would have been completely different. I like it better this way 🤣

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amruta04

@amruta04

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Awesome OS Anki 😊
feeling bad for Armaan 😭
thanks for the pm..

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hosanna..

@hosanna..

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

This is actually what I wanted to see in DMG and you have written is so well. Great OS!

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Promised you a comment and when i have most of the night at my dispose, i get the opportunity to do so. 😆

Before I comment about the Fictions written on AR/DMG i would like to let you know, that I wasn't much of a DMG fan. So please bear with my views, I would loved to be corrected than understood wrong. 😆

OS 1# Dada's girl

Adorable fluffy tuffy one shot. 😳 👏 Armaan and Riddhima as parents are always a treat to read. 😊 Lovely OS. The cute loving forever loving side of Armaan with his beautiful love of his life Riddhima adds the chocolate icing to any bland cake. 😆 (I lost adjectives again 🤣)

Anyway, the later half takes you to the caring and protective side of parents which was again written in the most commendable manner. 👏

The beautiful relationship of an Adorable papa and his princess Kaira was really explained in an eloquent manner. Very realistic and very adorable.

Kaira and her antics especially when she saw her father and wanted to hug him but then restrained and then the Monster part was so so so so SO CUTE *i wish she was not fiction again and was infront of me i would have cuddled her right away *

Ahh feel good feel lovely feel happy wala OS :)

OS 2# Nothing without you

Hmm, this is what I always wanted to see in DMG. Of the little show I have seen, found Riddhima very very very confused or rather very self-centered. Written very nicely and am so very happy that Armaam finally protested, as i ALWAYS wanted to see that. Yes AR DID love each other but then R hurt A more than he ever deserved and sadly A never stood up against it. I mean everything has a limit man! 😆

I like the part it is not an unconditional love saga. As I believe unconditional love cant exist in a way, it has to be from both the sides. trusting and most importantly hiding no secrets. Loved the way that Armaan stood back and cleared his stance and most importantly LOVED the little selfish man, who finally made people realize that yes he is a human too, he has expectations just as us and feels very pained too.

Cannot really wait for the next part.

p.s. Girl, you are geniooouss! As i know u have been studying and finishing your assignments then also thinking of the update for Sunshine and you wrote this too :O I mean KAISE karing itna kuch? :O 😆

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 12 years ago