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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

That was awesome Jenny!!! Loved it 😊 Arnav has a wife that was a twist please no separation 😃

Edited by anu1017 - 12 years ago

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-Shilpaa-

@-Shilpaa-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Waiting...
Gonna read it first thing in the morning 😊

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

The attraction between them was palpable and the build up towards that kiss was exciting to say the least. It was matter of time and each time you switched, it made me think, "now it comes..there is it is...they are gonna kiss now.." And they did and it was one one that would paralyse the week-kneed.

Now, I'm going to step back and start all over again.

I want to talk about Khushi first. The way she tried to break up with Aman, hinting to him that there could be someone in her life before she went forward with Arnav speaks of the person she is. Clearly, ethics rank very high in her value system.

When one is falling in love, the emotions cloud you and it is natural for those feelings to cloud ethics. But Khushi isn't one of those. I admire her.

Arnav tries talking to her, maybe to tell her that he is married but estranged. Married but going through a divorce . Married but his wife cheated. Married in name only...The scenario could be anyone of these or one I haven't figured out yet.

He wanted to tell her but the fact is he didn't tell her before he kissed her. This to me tells me that ethics do not rank as high in Arnav's values as in Khushi's case.

I definitely do not mean that Arnav is bad. or he is a cheater. or he means to cause harm. It just means he is very human.

I say this because, a kiss changes the dimension of a relationship. Whether or not Khushi wants to be involved with a man who is married and in a complicated situation ...has been taken out of her hands.

What is with men? He couldn't blurt out the three words? I am married...but not in love or going through a divorce...nope. Then life would be simple and this love story will not take place.

So, take it away Jenny 😆

Edited by AquaSandhya - 12 years ago

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Now that was unexpected Jen.

I waited to read the update before going to bed and you broke mine and Khushi's heart.

And there was no song at the end of the update. Why?

I missed it.

I thought Arnav's wife or girlfriend must have died or something.

Never thought he was still married.

The title is very apt!

What more will we find in this box?

By the way, when are you updating next?

Will read again in the morning.

Too tired now to get my thoughts together!

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Meena

@chotidesi

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Holy what?! Okay, I will admit- I had some inkling that there was someone, but I wasn't expecting it to come right then. Nevertheless, I sense that all is not what it seems with Lavanya. Arnav seems to have too much honor to cheat on his wife without a legitimate reason.

You weave such passion in your words. It's amazing- Especially this line: Finding it inexplicably and excruciatingly unbearable to be bereft of his warm touch, Khushi felt a powerful wave of tenderness, want and uncharacteristic recklessness wash over every single fibre of her being.

It's not even the scene of them kissing. It's the intensity they feel at being separated. I'm glad Khushi put an end to things with Aman- might there be something more between him and her sister?

I loved it, Jenny. Every bit. Wonderful job!

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Mallika

@malkasub

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

What an update. The way you built up the attraction and then its release was so right. We could feel the restlessness and the need. You write so well, im addicted to your stories. But now, he's married? You've got me really curious. Waiting for the next update.

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Arilip

@Arilip

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Wooohhh mind blowing kiss😳 Then big blow😲

Lavanya ...hummm interesting

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faree

@faree

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

while reading this update i have a huge grin on my face but last line broke my heart

whole update is mesmerizing and beautiful but later unexpected turn of events jenny ji what is this wife ouch

thanks for the pm

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Gim

@SansShyam

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#159

What wass that bomb!!! OH my God.. Poor Kushi... She could have waited untill Arnav speaks...

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#160

God I am speechless after reading.

The chapter begin so beautifully and ended so painfully.

I was not imagining this at all. Arnav is married! This is too deep.

I can understand whatever happens between them because of the attraction so strong that they can't stop themselves. Even if Khushi started first arnav supported her and come this far that it is impossible to go back.

I can understand that he must be feeling awful right now for losing himself. And now must be thinking how to approach her.

I don't know how Khushi going to react to this new information about him. She might be angry on herself for losing like this in front of him. But right now every thing has fallen apart and all her dreams has shattered as soon as they begin. God she must be broken right now. Will she understand him and support him? Will she even listen to him now? It's really very heart breaking news.

Don't know what are you going to give us now after this shocking news.

There are lots of question. Why he is like this? How is his relation with his wife? Why he is so sad?

And most important what made him respond to Khushi if he was already married?

What his mother thinking about them?

I have to wait till next update. I know this is stupid but when are you going to update ?

You were mind blowing today. Loved the update.