From the ashes the pheonix rises.A tortured soul.FF Ch24Pg.46 updated!

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#181

No no! This is not done. How can you keep us hanging like this. Loved the update. It was intense with so much riding on for each of them. And then the departure...please update ASAP. Can't wait to read what happens next. Thanks for the PM.

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ArVi-licious

@ArVi-licious

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Lovely lovely chapter... He saw the kids.. I do hope he sees the resemblance too and goes home happy..

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@rbb1

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Nice update omg poor Astha it had taken her a lot of courage to get ready to tell him but I guess it wasn't time, I hope he finds out soon

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@rbb1

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: ArVi-licious
Lovely lovely chapter... He saw the kids.. I do hope he sees the resemblance too and goes home happy..

yeah me too

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@rbb1

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: Anukalu
No no! This is not done. How can you keep us hanging like this. Loved the update. It was intense with so much riding on for each of them. And then the departure...please update ASAP. Can't wait to read what happens next. Thanks for the PM.

I know we have to wait till the next update

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latha_555

@latha_555

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

oh no, he is going to think the worst...i feel for ever single one of them...the kids, aastha, and shlock...all of them wanted to do the right thing, aastha invited him over to tell him the truth, and shlock was going to ask her upfront what his chances were...this is fate...cant wait till the next update

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niki795

@niki795

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

awesome
loved it
hope he gets to know about his kids before leaving
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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neuchari

@neuchari

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

As always a great build up of story...hope Shlok sees his image in Nav and feels happy and calls her back...Love the way Astha tries to forget her worries by playing with the kids and also the mom feeling so much for her child who has gone through so much in life...

The kids seem to be real cutie pies...Eagerly waiting for the next update...

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Aishwarya

@Aishaa3

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

K if ths ws a cliffhanger then i hv fallen of the clif already😆 plzzz let them meet in next update😭 fear that shlok wl think astha hs movd on lovely update cont. Sooon😃😳