Loving You | ArHi SS Part 4 + Thank You Note COMPLETED (13/05) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
very well written...nice...update soon..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Amazing..
Quite an emotional one...
Waiting to know what happens next!
update soon..
Pm me pla..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: PixieFlame

Interesting concept, can't wait to read more! :)


Thank You! Glad you liked it! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Hina69

Really Interesting!👏


Amazingly written⭐️

Please do continue, would love to read more😳



Awww! The quote is sweet!

Thank You! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Interesting start.

She is getting married and that killing them both.
Looking forward to read next part


Thank You! Glad you liked it! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: -Farwa_Ibrahim-

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Rae its just sooo beautiful by the time I reached the ending of part one I was already dying to read more. Khushi the typical loving girl always doing the job both needed to do. Arnav dare he congratulate her when she never did it happily can't read da next parts pls update soon... Again as usual beautiful poetic it was!

👏 👏 👏


Awww! Thank You so much!

Glad you liked it!! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Arshi67

I desperately wanted to scroll down to see what was tearing them apart. Don't know how I controlled myself.

Really want to see how he reacts when he realises she has truly reached the end of her tether.
He's so used to just taking it for granted that she just knows 'hamesha'.


I didnt get the last part with the 'hamesha'...but Thank You so much for the comment! :)

Keep reading to know what happens next!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: gata

hope Khushi being her true self makes Arnav realize his feelings and does not give up,on him


Well thats a lot to expect but lets see... ;) :D

Thank You for your comment! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: mehak06

Khushi is getting married and its hurting both of them?!
Den y is she doing it
y arnav isn't stopping her
eagerly waiting to read more!


Keep reading to know the answers to all your questions! :)

Thank You for commenting! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: curledup

Ressserved

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Sorry for taking so long.

I've grown to really like one shots or any writing for that matter from the females point of view, I liked this because we saw a rational and fair headed khushi! She knows him and it's amazing as an author to convey that to the audience so they know it too (I hope you're following me on this 😆)

It was a beautiful and very eloquent beginning, I look forward to more.


Thank You for the comment :)

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