#3: Vanarsena's FF: Teri Meri Love Story:Part-16,Page-122 No PMs sorry - Page 14

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.1k

Views

62.4k

Users

34

Likes

2k

Frequent Posters

jeenia123 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

Part-12

So...he spoke talking to Astha as well as brushing his teeth... kya kar rhi ho aaj sara din?

Nothing special...Astha smiled...mom is calling for breakfast, then will leave with dad to office...

Itni jaldi? He was shocked...

Its nine Shlok...Astha smiled...may be les for you as you are at home...but complete world is working...

Shlok thought for a moment. ...Is it so? He got a bit confused...

Yup...ok, cut call, I have to go...dad is waiting...saying Astha cut call and left for breakfast...

So Astha, all ready for first day of office...Avdhoot smiled...

Yes dad...and thanks for allowing me... she smiled...dad ap khush to hai na?

Agar hamari beti khush hai to hum bhi...Avdhoot smiled...we have understood beta, our happiness lies with you only...he caressed her face...ok, let's go now, we are getting late...

Ji dad...she smiled and hugged her mom...bye mom...

Buy...kalindi kissed her forehead and served her dahi shaker...

Mom...ye? Astha was confused...

Jab bhi kisi naye kaam ke liye ghar se jate hain to ye kha ke jate hain, kaam acha hota hai...kalindi smiled saying her bye...

And Astha left with Avdhoot for office...

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

There Shlok was having his breakfast with family when Sojal who had already joined job, left for her office, Niranjan to his office and Anjali got involved with her house works...

Shlok being free called Swati...hey Swati...what's up...

Nothing yaar, busy in some meeting till evening...Swati spoke...

So busy that can't talk to me? Shlok was a bit sad...

Yup...Swati said...ok dear will call you in evening...saying she cut the call...

Shlok played with his PlayStation till noon then thought...what to do?

Yes...he jumped, took car's keys and called Anjali loudly...Mom, I am leaving for lunch...

Ok beta, with Swati? Ask her to come home...anjali spoke...

No mom...with Astha...its her first day to office and I want to make it special for her...he spoke...

But Swati? Anjali looked at him...

She is busy mom...saying he left...

Anjali smiled and called Niranjan..saheb, may be you are right... Their relation has changed...

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

After half an hour, Shlok was at Kirloskar industries...

Shlok...Avdhoot welcomed him...come in...

Uncle, where is Astha? He asked directly...

She is in her cabin...Avdhoot smiled...

Ok uncle, I am taking her with me...its her first day to adha din hi kafi hai...he almost pleaded...

Avdhoot smiled... As you wish...after all she is your wife yet...

Shlok got a bit confused listening wife word, but brushing the thought, he went to Astha's cabin ...while Astha as discussing some file with an employee...

Without knocking, he opened the gate and shouted...surprise...

Shlok...Astha jumped with shock...you here?

Congratulations dear...he pulled her into hug giving her a bouquet, he had taken with him...

Shlok...someone is here...she whispered in his ear indicating towards the employee...

To...biwi ho meri...official hak hai hug karne ka tumhe...he winked at her ...aur waise bhi its a big day for you today...first step to your aim...

I...I am sorry mam...I will come later...the employee said...

No need to come today mr...umm...whatever Shlok spoke to the employee... Madam is leaving with me...she will be back in office tomorrow...

But Shlok? Astha tried to intervene...but Shlok held her hand pulling her with him...we are going for celebration Astha for your first step...for lunch...

What? Astha was shocked... but Shlok Dad...Astha looked at Avdhoot coming from front side...

I have got your leave approved from uncle...Shlok smiled at Avdhoot...he too nodded in yes...

Uncle I will drop her at home...saying he took Astha with him...

Shlok, this was my first day...Astha spoke looking at him in irritation...

That' s why celebration to bnta hai sweetie... he smiled...

Yaar apni swati ke sath jaake kro na celebrate... Astha spoke irritated...aur waise bhi jab use pta chlega, she is going to kill you...

Use pta chalega tab na? Shlok winked at Astha...

Itna confidence? A naughty Smile appeared on Astha's face automatically...Mr. Shlok Agnihotri...such a big change...for the first time, you are not afraid of Swati?

Yaar she is in meeting till evening...he smiled...aur waaise bhi agar fansa bhi to tum ho na bachane ke liye? He winked at Astha..

Astha punched him hard...you stupid...opportunist...

Shlok held her hands...no Astha, I am not... I agree she is my girlfriend...but now I can say, you are my best friend too... if she is an important part of my life, you are also an integral part of my life...

If I need to spend time with her for our relationship, I also love to be with you...

So no worries now...

Astha smiled on listening him...(Its easy for you to explain everything Shlok, but my life becomes tough , just one more day and our relation will be over)

Meanwhile, they had reached restaurant,

Astha, please order...Shlok spoke seeing menu, I never understand what to order...

Astha held menu and stated to order...while Shlok was looking at her surprisingly...

As the waiter went away...Astha , how did you know? I mean all you ordered, is my favorite...

Ya, I know...Astha smiled, that's why I ordered...

But how? Shlok was surprised...

Astha scratched her head.. are budhu...we have been together for one complete month...

Yaar itna to swati bhi nahi janti meri likes and dislikes...Shlok murmured...

Said something? Astha asked...

n...no... he smiled...and they had good time for the whole evening talking and sitting in park...

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Two days passed like this and the day of their divorce was today...

Judge checked their documents and called them...

So Mrs. Astha and Mr. Shlok Agnihotri...you want mutual divorce? He asked...

Yes sir...both spoke in unison with full confidence while Shlok a bit confuse and Atsha hiding her sadness...

May I know the reason? Judge looked at their faces...

Actually sir...i love someone else... Shlok spoke directly...

And you didn't know at the time of wedding? He asked to Astha...

I knew sir...but I had some other reasons... she spoke...but now we can't stay together...please allow our divorce...

The judge was asking those few more questions, when suddenly three persons (goons) came inside with knifes and one gun...

What is all this? Judge shouted...security...

The men were afraid as if they were running from any other trial...

Astha held shlok's hand in fear... But a man pulled Astha towards him and placed knife on her neck...agar koi aga aya to I will kill this girl...

Astha...shok shouted worriedly...

Shlok...Astha too shouted...

When suddenly Shlok picked the chair and threw it on the man keeping knife on Astha... another man tried to attack with knife on Shlok, but shlok's hand got a cut , in the meantime, security had come to cat the goons...

Astha...Shlok ran to her...Astha tum thik ho na? He took her face into his palms...

Hummm...she nodded while he pulled her into a tight hug...thank god...mujhe to lga tha...

But your hand...Astha immediately held his hand...took his handkerchief form his pocket and tied it where it was bleeding...

Soon doctor had also arrived and he gave first aid to Shlok...

After one hour proceeding started again...

So you two want divorce? But I can see how much you care for each other ...judge spoke...

They looked at each other in question...finally Astha spoke...sir, we are not just husband and wife, we are friends too...or agar meri jgah koi aur bhi hota to bhi Shlok yahi karta...

But... judge spoke...i think, one month is too early to decide anything about divorce, so this court give you time of six months to stay together, to know each other more...then we will decide...

No...they both shouted...no sir... We need divorce...

That's final ...judge smiled while leaving...

Shlok...Astha almost cried...no...

Shlok too lowered his face irritatingly...no way...

Outside the court room, judge shook hand with Avdhoot and Niranjan... Mr. Agnihotri, Mr. Kirloskar...you were right... Your plan was right...you said na there is little hope in their relation? But I am sure, there is complete hope in their relation...they just need time together...

Saying he left from there while Astha and Shlok came outside with almost crying faces thinking what to do next?

niki795 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123

you know i copied twice and again got busy in naamkaran...😆

Ok updating now...



hehe😆
naina.. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update dear...m dancing n singing... thankyou soo much...😳

So...he spoke talking to Astha as well as brushing his teeth... kya kar rhi ho aaj sara din?

ha..ha.. ha... brush krne k liye to break le leta...🤣

Its nine Shlok...Astha smiled...may be les for you as you are at home...but complete world is working...

Shlok thought for a moment. ...Is it so? He got a bit confused...

😆 just like me free all day,when everyone is busy...

so astha off to office...good👍🏼

Shlok played with his PlayStation till noon then thought...what to do?

Yes...he jumped, took car's keys and called Anjali loudly...Mom, I am leaving for lunch...

Ok beta, with Swati? Ask her to come home...anjali spoke...

No mom...with Astha...its her first day to office and I want to make it special for her...he spoke...

loved this...😃

n as i continued reading my smile got bigger n bigger n bigger...😃😃

n they hugged😆 n official huk se...😃😉


Yaar apni swati ke sath jaake kro na celebrate... Astha spoke irritated...aur waise bhi jab use pta chlega, she is going to kill you...

Use pta chalega tab na? Shlok winked at Astha...

Itna confidence? A naughty Smile appeared on Astha's face automatically...Mr. Shlok Agnihotri...such a big change...for the first time, you are not afraid of Swati?

😲😲😲

loving this change...😆

Shlok held her hands...no Astha, I am not... I agree she is my girlfriend...but now I can say, you are my best friend too... if she is an important part of my life, you are also an integral part of my life...

thankgod atleast he understood a bit,hope dimag ki bati jaldi jale...😉 dat she is his life now...😊

Astha smiled on listening him...(Its easy for you to explain everything Shlok, but my life becomes tough , just one more day and our relation will be over)

😭😭 dont worry astha jeenia will make him understand soon...😛

But... judge spoke...i think, one month is too early to decide anything about divorce, so this court give you time of six months to stay together, to know each other more...then we will decide...

🥳🥳 jeenia i will kill youuu... yesterday u said divorce to hoke he rhega...u liar... thank God no divorce...thanx to avdhoot n niranjan...😃

so now hugs.😳😃.. it was 11 last time so adding

Congratulations dear...he pulled her into hug giving her a bouquet, he had taken with him...

"Shlok...someone is here...she whispered in his ear indicating towards the employee...

To...biwi ho meri...official hak hai hug karne ka tumhe...he winked at her ...aur waise bhi its a big day for you today...first step to your aim..."

"Astha...Shlok ran to her...Astha tum thik ho na? He took her face into his palms...

Hummm...she nodded while he pulled her into a tight hug...thank god...mujhe to lga tha..."

its "13" now...😃 "teranh in hindi"... "its like ab main tera"😉


nice update jeenia.👍🏼.. loved it my "RICO"😆❤️


Edited by naina.. - 12 years ago
niki795 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
res

unres

Awesome update
loved it
shlok started early in the morning itself.. Talking to astha
liked the small part of astha ,, avdhoot ,,, and kalindi
shlok ko samaj nahi aara kya ?
sab work pe jaarahe hai
you to need to work
but then he again thought to spend time with astha
soo much of missing her
lo NAINA tumhara hug aagaya
lo count kar le 😆😳
and astha knows his likes and dislikes more than swathi
the day of divorce also came
I thought their divorce is happening
you too said the same
but all of a sudden the goons entry 😆
and their divorce got 6months time😃
that means you tricked us by saying divorce is going to happen 😡
poor ashlok don't know its the trick played by their parents😆
now waiting for the next
want little or more romance now😳
Edited by niki795 - 12 years ago
jeenia123 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
Niki, in vanarsena's reserve, add that pic...
niki795 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Niki, in vanarsena's reserve, add that pic...



ok will add it😆
Aishaa3 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
Enjoyd the update totaly😛 both r sad nw that they hv to stay fr 6mths..bet they wl b glad aftr few days abt ths decisn😃 continue soon!
Anunilmini thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Good plan by the papa bears. Lovely update as usual.
naina.. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795

res

unres

Awesome update
loved it
shlok started early in the morning itself.. Talking to astha
liked the small part of astha ,, avdhoot ,,, and kalindi
shlok ko samaj nahi aara kya ?
sab work pe jaarahe hai
you to need to work
but then he again thought to spend time with astha
soo much of missing her
lo NAINA tumhara hug aagaya
lo count kar le 😆😳
and astha knows his likes and dislikes more than swathi
the day of divorce also came
I thought their divorce is happening
you too said the same
but all of a sudden the goons entry 😆
and their divorce got 6months time😃
that means you tricked us by saying divorce is going to happen 😡
poor ashlok don't know its the trick played by their parents😆
now waiting for the next
want little or more romance now😳

ya they hugged...tight wala...😳😃
n yes jeenia u tricked us😡... i will forgive u coz m very happy after reading this update...😆😃
xayeshax thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
haha im heree😆😆 whos the youngest animal😃

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".