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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Loving the FF! And more since you have introduced new characters parallel to the story line in the show! Awesome!
Thanks for both the PMs! And now that I have caught up with the FF, I will be a regular commenter on this FF😃

Pari 😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

❤️is this love?❤️

part 9

recap:Sanyukta is on the lib arranging the books.

She gets a call. Randhir overhears the conversation and snatches her phone.

To know further about. the m.c.p and farzi tale continue reading.

...HAPPY READING...

sanyukta :randhir give my phone.

randhir :dene keliye thodi na maine tumse cheena"

then in phone "hello m.r .whomever u r

please take ur sanyu..kta back.

i think u r her fiaancee .u made a wrong decision by sending

her back to the college u r gonna feel for it badly."

sanyu snatches the phone with full force now and cuts

the call before he could continue saying anything further against

her

sanyukta : randhir don't mess with me

randhir :sanyukta whenever i said that to u u never listened

to my words and that is the reason for which these things are getting

to happen with u .." he smirks

sanyukta pushes him apart and goes from there .

randhir pulls her hand from back and she hits him.

they share a passionate eye lock..

suddenly sanyu breaks her eyelock then she tries to free

her bt then his strong arm was holding her slender pair of

hands strongly .

sanyukta :ab kya ?

randhir takes the books which he had in his other hand

and gives it to her.

randhir :u forgot it .

sanyukta snatches it from his hand and places the

books back in the bookselve.

then she gives him a angry look and moves from there..

...,...HOSTEL ROOM ...

sanyuktas anger was till now at it heights only.

she felt as if a mini volcano was errupting in her.

'how can this randhir do this. pata nahin woh kya sochega mere

baare mein ..ab main kya karoon..?

haan i'll call him now ..

she calls him and finds no one responding to it..

arre ye call kyun attend nahin kar raha hai mera .

kya aisa toh nahin ki woh ab mere se naraz hai ".

"sanyukta caught red handed .kisko call kar rahi ho? ishita asked .

sanyukta was taken aback for a second

she thought that both were asleep but this ishita she didn't

expect her to be awake till now.

sanyukta :kuch nahin bas aise mom ko try kar rahi thi.

tumne abhi tak soya nahin?

to herself 'accha hua ki woh mera call attend nahin kiya

varna pata nahin mera hal kya hoga.'

ishita :new place issilye neend nahin aa rahi hai

sanyukta :bt dont worry ek baar pkc ki class

attend karo uske baad koi bhi tumhein rok nahin

saktha hai sone se.

ishita :wah !itne acche teacher .

sanyukta :haan bahot acche hai issiliye anjaane mein

humein sone ko help kar rahe hai .

ishita ab bahot late huaa chal ab sone ki koshish karo.

ishita :haan ok aur tum bhi aao na

sanyukta :haan par then she looks at her cell and taps it ."yaa 'm coming".

then in her mind 'kal pehle usko call karke sorry kehna hoga.'

they bid gud n8 to each other and enter into a gud sleep.

morning

sanyukta surprisingly wakes up early .

she takes her bath and just thinks of walking in the lawn.

...Garden,...

she found herself enjoying the breezy morning climate.

she blamed herself for not noticing this before itself.

had she got up early before she neither would have missed

such a pleasant feeling nor vardhaan Sirs class.

sudden thought of vardhaan sirs she gotto remember abt his

lecture that they have today.

she decides to wake her best buddy oh no two best buddies .

but then suddenly a sweet ringtone played in her cell.

she takes her cell and sees a message in it.

"shayad ye usi ka no. hoga

chal padthi hoon."

she reads the message and is very happy after reading it

because 'twas from him.

"kya saari sorry wala baath katam hui "a voice taunted at her back.

she knew who 'twas .coz she was used to his mocking comment

and voice .'again woh m.c.p'

she sighed and turned back to see

his mocking face.

randhir : ur hero asked u to come back or what?

sanyukta :randhir i think it's my duty to remind

u that he's not like u . he didn't mistake me

and one more thing stop calling him my hero.

she leaves from there and goes back to her hostel room.

kaustuki :sanyukta how come u woke up so early

today ?

sanyukta :kuch nahin just for a change

i came here to wake u guys bt then lagtha hai uska koi

use nahin .

ishita :haan bt its okay sanyukta aaj pkc ki class

attend karne ke baad main kal late hi utungi.

tab tumhara madad mujge chahiye.

kaustuki :bt then sanyu does't gets up early

aaj shayad galthi se huaa ."

they both laugh at what kaistuki said .

sanyukta :lag raha hai mujhe abhi yahaan se chalna

hoga varna meri thodi bahot izzat joh hai woh bhi

gayab hoga .

anyways guys i'm leaving to lib now

kal woh saari mishaps ke kaaran i didn't

issue the book which i wanted to .so i'm gonna issue that.

bye then meet u at the class "

kaustuki :sanyu come fast we have vardhan sirs lecture first

sanyu :yaa sure i wont miss it .bye

sanyu walks out if lib fastly

she was so engrossed in searching for a book that she totally

forgot abt vardhaan sirs class.

she had only 2min left with her for the class to start .

she started moving fast bt then she hits somebody

and she closes her eyes in fear that shes gonna fall down

bt then she felt like floating in the air and then she realises

a strong arm holding her waist and opens her eyes to see

who it is ..

precap :ishita is hell angry on someone .

she curses that person with bad words

TODAYS Q:any guesses abt the person whom ishita is angry
with?

srry guys for this late update.

i'm going to complete my next part .

so i hope to upload the next one soon.

please bare with me for late uploads
Edited by niranjanastar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
are wa...aaj bhi guessing wala game

ok let me guess

i think the person who save sanyu is her fiance


and ishita is fighting with him, may be mistakenly he did something with her...
Edited by kaveriw2008 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Lovely update dear!
Lool, I think Ishita is shouting on Randhir, for some weird reason😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
suprb...😊
Ye Randhir Sanyu ke peecha kabhi nahi chodega...😆😆
n pehle se hi Sanyu ki fiance ke baare mey doubt hey...
upar se ab Ishitha ki gussa...
uff ur ff is soo twisty..i luvd it...
thnx for da PM..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
cute and wonderful update😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Awesome update
Ishita will be angry on the person with whom Sanyo collided
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
first of all a hi to all!
after long since i'm replying here for ur comments!
actually i love to reply for it bt. then this exams etc. i didn't have time and think i won't have much in future too coz board class woh sarri pressure and exams !
anyways just gotto get time now so i thought chal teek kuch reply kar lethi hoon.
and guys please bare with me for my late post and then the storyline is quite different from the
telly one.
anyways i hope not to let anyone down and here i'll add a quiet few surprises in coming episodes!
and thanks for dear ones who tried to ans for my question below the ff.
and sure ur name will be announced once when it is revealed in the story!
yup hope u r loving my ff and criticism welcome with open hand!

always with love
#niru❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89

Is this love?

part 10


recap:randhir snatches sanyukta's phone and speaks

with her fiancee and asks him to take sanyukta back.

sanyukta unusually gets up early and goes for a walk

in the garden where she encounters randhir again

with a mocking comment.

sanyu then reaches lib and gets late for vardhaan sirs classs .

while reaching the class she hits someone and the person

holds her by waist.

to know further continue reading.

happy reading.

she opened her eyes to see her saviour.

bt she was shocked to see that it was nt her usual saviour.

he smiled looking at her and waved his hand before her.

her face was red in embarrasment.

she stood up properly and looked at him waiting

for his introduction.

he realised she was waiting for his reply and gave a bright

flash of smile and showed his hand

"hi i'm ar..i'm veer .

sanyukta shooks hand with him .

"hii i'm sanyukta ."

veer :woh toh main jaantha hoon.

sanyukta :what?tumein kaisa pata mere naam ko?

veer :simple itne beautiful ladki ka naam bhi beautiful hi hoga."

sanyukta slowly understood his joke. she sees him smiling at her.

sanyukta :huch ! sanyukta sneezes .

veer :u r not well? cold ?

sanyukta :no yaar kya karoon itni garam bahar hote bhi koi

mera itna ice dal raha hai issiliye i have got cold."

veer realises she was making fun of him in turn.

"ok i accept my defeat "said veer.

they both laugh.

suddenly sanyu gets panicked and says

"oh no!i gotto go now."

she rushed to the class .

sanyukta :sir can i get in?

vardhaan :no u can't ."said he without even looking at her.

he continued his class without paying attention to her.

randhir gave a mocking look once again to her.

sanyukta :sir but i ...

before she could complete a voice interrupted.

"sir may i get in?"

all the attention turned towards the new guy .

standing tall with a cool yet pleasant look.

sanyukta too turned back to see who it is.

her face became red in embarrasmebt once again

before him for she felt bad for running away in the middle of their conversation.

but he looked at her as if he didn't mistake her for it.

sanyu felt quiet relieved about it.

vardhaan looked at him expecting him to say who he is ?and why he is here?

"sir i'm veer. new admission here."

vardhaan's sharp eyes looked at him

keenly .he then said "ya u can " then he looked at sanyukta.

before he could say anything sanyukta intetrupted

"sir actually woh i helped him in finding the class

so i was late."

it was hard for veer to control his

surprised expression .

then he sees everyone looking at him and waiting

to know whether it is true .

"hmm yes sir "he stammered "actually sir

it was because of me that sanyu..kta

got late. sorry sir. "

vardhaan looked at both of them for more than a couple of seconds.

"interesting very interesting today u got a good execuse

sanyukta ."

sanyukta :bt sir..

"no sanyukta don't waste my time .get in u both."ordered vardhaan.

sanyukta sat near kaustuki and veer sat in an empty desk.

kaustuki :sanyukta why were u late ?"

sanyukta:i'll say u later.bt pehle tu ye batha ye ishita kyun yahaan

nahin hai?"

kaustuki:actually she has gone to deans cabin.

some admission procedure. i guess."

they then stop speaking as sanyukta felt vardhaan sirs eye

at them.so she was sure if she continues further he would definitely

send her out of the class.

...after 1 hour ,...

"ok students class over "said vardhaan sir and left

the class.

sanyukta first went to veer who was getting out of the class.

"hey veer stop!

veer turned to look at her with again a smile.

"woh actually i .."she stammered.."woh main.. she paused and

surprisingly found herself with loss of words.

"srry abt that lie...actually u know that class was imp. for me .

i know mujhe aisa nahin karna chahiye that .bt srry."

she said and looked at him.

veer looked at the girl standing in front of him biting her lower

lips and innocently looking at him for his approval to

her apology.

he nodded his head and then said.

"ya i can understand. bt sad u made me to lie for the third

time in my life bt anyways leave it."

sanyuktha :what ?ye tumhara thisra jhoot tha.

i can't believe. meri ek din bhi jhoot ke bina nahin ho saktha hai.

hard for me to believe u.

veer :tum maano ya nahin par yahi sach hai .

sanyukta :weird for me.and what r the 2 other lies u have said before?

veer: secrets are not to be revealed .

sanyukta :accha then have ur secret with yourself.

par ek din zaroor pata lagakar hi lagungi.

veer : hmm all the best for it.

and woh din zaroor humare liye special hi hoga.

sanyukta :itna bhi kya baat hai?anyways jald pata lagungi..

ok come lets go to the canteen now. they continued their chat.

they failed to notice a pair of ears hearing their conversation.

" ye farzi aise kyun baat kar rahi hai isse jaise woh dono

ek dusre ko kayi saal se jaanthe hai.then he loked at the place

were they both for standing before some time.

for more than a couple of seconds his eyes never turned from seeing the

pair moving happily .then he found it unsual to himself.

"anyway why should i care about her."said randhir and left from there.

,...canteen...

sanyuktha introduces veer to JiStuki.

ishita is not there so sanyukta didn't introduce her

to him.

the trio started liking veer a lot.

especially sanyukta was very impressed by him .

she liked the way he was friendly with all and not like randhir.

veer then says he has to go to the deams cabin to complete his

admission process.

aftet sometime...

ishita comes to canteen and takes a place near

sanyukta .

sanyukta .:hii ishita

ishita :haan bas yeh hii bacha hai!

sanyukta :hey ishita whats wrong koi problem?

kaustuki:is everything fine?

ishita :no yaar kuch bhi fine nahin hai.

pata nahin woh stupid apne baare mein kya samajhtha hai .

aisse kaise mere se keh saktha hai woh?

"arre mujhe kuch samaj mein nahin aa raha hai.

kaustuki tumein kuch samaj mein aa raha hai?

asked jiggy.

kaustuki:wait jiggy .let ishita tell us about her problem.

sanyukta :haan ishita pehle batao ki tum kiski baat kar rahi ho?

ishita :woh and before she could continue to say anything

further she sees him standing near the pole and speaking with a guy

probably saahil she gussed and his ( the guy on whom ishita was angry about )

back was faced towards her.

she rushes near him and turns him in anger.

but she's shocked to see him.

"tum? "she asks her mouth half opened.

precap: mujhe pyaar aur ye love iss par koi vishwas nahin hai

ican't love u ok..." says Ishita to ...someone.

veer :tumhein puraani baat yaad hai na ?

TODAYS Q: ANY GUESS ABOUT MYSTERY BEHIND ISHITA AND VEER?

DO THEY KNOW EACH OTHER BEFORE?

WHAT DO THEY MEAN TO EACH OTHER?

OR DO THEY MEAN SOMETHING FOR EACH OTHER?

JUST GIVE A TRY!



HEY GUYS SRRY FOR THE LATE UPDATE!

ALL GAALIYAAN ,TAMATARS ,AND CHAPPALS MORE WELCOME.

AND SORRY GUYS I'LL NOT BE ABLE TO PM TO ALL

AS I DON'T HAVE TIME MUCH.

SO JUST THOUGHT OF SENDING PM TO THOSE WHO COMMENT .

A HUGE SORRY WITH A BOUQUET OF ROSES.

AND THEN I DIDN'T PROOF CHECK SO SORRY FOR THE MISTAKE.

ANS SINCE I HAVE INTRODUCED NEW CHARACTERES HOPE U WOULD LOVE READING THIS .

AND SURE I'LL TRY MY BEST NOT TO LET U DOWN.

AND ONE MORE INFO. U WOULD GET TO SEE THE OTHER LEADS ALSO WITH AN IMPORTANT ROLE.

BUT DON'T WORRY SANDHIR WILL ROCK FIRST!!!!!!!!!


WITH A LOADS OF THANKS TO THOSE WHO READ THIS.


ALWAYS WITH LOVE
#NIRU

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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
what yaar ye ho kya raha hai

sanyu ke mangetar ka suspense kam tha jo ek aur supens add kar diya


i think the guy veer is not actually what we see...his name is different which sanyu may identify him id she come to know...



awesome update dear

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