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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Lovely update the bext part soin

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Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Beautifulll <3

Aliyas accpetance n Zains confusion👏

Special mention to Mommy dearest getting a reality check😆 kya karu sadist hu.. in sab me mazaa ata hai😈

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Nivriti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Beautiful :) Loved It.. Try to continue please!

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preity_d

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Jyo read the two parts in one go. U r a very good writer. You have some awesome sense of humour when writing dialogues...

In the first part, u wrote Zain saying, "tumhare pair{leg) pakad ke bula ne to raha" ha ha so quirky. loved it...

In the second part "the tap's broken" OMG hilarious... 😆

loved how Zain was being serious, he stood up in front of Suraiya for Aliya, appreciate it. So in one sentence loved it... Do come up with many write ups soon and plz PM me

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Kaay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Wow! That was so cute! Just loved it! 😊

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Jyo.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf
Wow! That was so cute! Just loved it! 😊

HOLY SHIT DID YOU JUST COMMENT ON MY WORK? OMGG! I love your work on Zaya SOOO much. Thanks a bunch. Means so much to me 😳

Sorry I just had a fangirling moment 😆

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Amina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

the second part yesss!🤪

ahaha, i actually read it last night but i was dozing off so i decided to come back and comment! *so that my comment could make a little sense*🤣

anyhow coming to the update! It was F L A W L E S S!

so cute! you have written it down so well!

the best thing about it is that its so subtle, like i can totally imagine this on Zaya!

This has been a truly enjoyable read Jyo, i'm looking forward to more from you my love 🤗

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Sruthi

@dauntless.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

No how is this so perfect. How. 😭

Right from the kitchen scene, to both of them snuggling under the covers. Oh good heavens, I would like to see this right now.

Cuteness was just oozing from every bit.

And the way Zain acted towards the end, awww you little cutiepatootie. ☺️

I LOVE YOUUU JYOOO 😆

Please write more for me okay? 😳

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Lady_Impala

@Lady_Impala

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

this was in the words of Shilpa shetty "super se upar " really enjoyed reading it hope you write some more on ZaYa

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Mariaa.SG

@Mariaa.SG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

And this was again one BRILLIANT SHOT BB 🤗you're gonna get me addicted :P !

Part 3 Please 😳 😎 You're such a BEAUTIFULL WRITER ohh & That needs to happen :DDD !

ZAYA DREAMLAND ❤️ LY INFINITYYY <3

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