OS :- Thread of LOVE on Holi (DARK OS-NEW) - Page 3

Originally posted by: suumi

Wowww
it amazing awesome didn't hav enough wrds to describ 😳

Originally posted by: harikarocks

hey!!!

awesome os i simply loved it

u penned it beautifully

loved the bro-sis love and their talks

sandhir am completely blushing😳

loved sandhir talk also

sanyukta's suprise not only for her but for me also

overall it was fantastic

will u pm me if u write more

love,harika

Originally posted by: KAJU10

Belated Happy Holi to you dear...!!
This long and lovely OS was the best Holi Gift...😊

This OS is just amazing and wonderful...
Its so damn fantastic. A tempting and alluring OS, I must say...
The way you personified Randhir and Sanyukta through the character-sketch in the beginning was awesome. It completely suits their personality...
The importance and sighificance of the festival HOLI in their life was very well depicted by the two events, friendship and love...
The entire song and dances sequence was superb. The song was brilliantly incorporated in the OS.
OMG!! The romantic moment was so passionate and intense. You have portrayed the entire scene so very beautifully that I couldn't help imagining it...😳
I loved the entire plot of the story.
The story is just flawless and you have penned dowh the entire story perfectly...
I enjoyed reading the entire story...
I would be glad to read more of your stories...
Do write more...😃

Originally posted by: sunshine04

OMG am blushing to see your comments 😳 thank you so much that you liked it 😆 aww not only liked it but you described almost every part of my OS 😉 what can i say!! am damn happy 🤣

Originally posted by: KAJU10

I made u blush, ne? 😆I didn't describe much dear... don't wanna make u sleep by my long comments.🤣
Wuld u mind sending me PMs for ur other work, eh?

Originally posted by: swarontruelove

OMG!!!!

This was superb dearie. 👏(sorry i havent got your name yet. 😳)

Starting with the title!!! awww... you linked it so well with the story. thread of love on holi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so romantic.

The concept too was amazing as always. i think i have told you before you write really good romance, with such cute concepts which are way tooo romantic.

I so loved sanyu and her bros bond. it was so cool. its how i always imagine brothers as, sweet, mature, understanding.

and her bro bonding with randhir too? 😆 i dont know how many brothers will allow a guy to come to his sis room alone. but still exceptions r always there arent they? it just proves how much her bro loved sanyu that he was willing to do anything for her happiness.

coming to the song!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i so LOOOVE that song!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊 it was so apt for the situation and the way you potrayed the whole dancing to the love making scene, man you r tooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I so love this romantic sandhir that you always give us. and i so love you too for writing like this for sandhir although still keeping their edge alive and not making them just a mushy mushy couple.😊

Is there something remaining that i shud say? although i can continue tlkng about this alll night, i am short of time.

but really you r a real SRk fan. and i looove him way too much. so hi-5?😃

And last but not the least, keep writing and giving us these awesome stories on our dear sandhir.

P.S. : thanks for the pm. otherwise i wud have missed such an lovely os.😊

Love
Shreya😊