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Posted: 12 years ago
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Happy Holi guys...this is the season of Colours, Passion and Love. It announces the arrival of Spring.😳 But this year, the date 16 of March, First Day of Holi has coinsided with a sweet person's birthday. Guess who it is??😆😆 Me😳 Royalkaterick aka Rimi.😳 So here is some small treat for my Birthday...along with a little gift from my side. (Consider it a s return gift😉 though its a treat to some special persons...)



And
special Birthday Payesh aka Kheer.😃




Edited by mmroyalkaterick - 12 years ago
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Part one

"O Rangreza...iss rang dariyan mein,

(O Colourfulman! In this stream of colour,)

Doobna hai bas tera baanke.

(I want to drown in it being all yours.)

Nahin rehna Duja baanke.

(I don't want to be separated from you.)

Ek bhi sans,

(Not a single breathe,)

Ab alag nahin leni.

(I don't want to inhale)

Khench lena pran iss tan se...nahin rehna duja baanke..."

(Don't care if my life leaves this body...I don't want to be separated from you.)

How long it has been?? She doesn't know. But she does know she hasn't seen him for a long time. How would he be looked? She doesn't know. She is longing for his one glimpse!! How would he be sounded? She doesn't know. She is dying for his heavy, deep voice!! How would he be felt on her skin? She doesn't know. She is craving for his warm yet calming touch!! How would it be with him? She doesn't know. She is yearning for him!! She is wanting him, only Him!!! Without him this festival of colours, this Holi, the Spring-Festivals nothing matters to her now. He has left her and she can't feel to breathe without him. "Why?" she asks sadly. Tears are threatening to spill. "As if you are soul in this flesh, you are the life in this body. How could you hold such an effect on me?" she asks herself rather sarcastically.

He arrives there little late but doesn't expect that he won't find her nowhere near of the festivities. A cold feeling slowly settles in his gut. "Where the hell is she?" he asks himself angrily. "Why I have to be so late? On Today?" he curses himself and searches for her everywhere and finally finds her standing beside the Thandai Stall drinking Thandai. He smiles assuredly and approaches towards her stealthily. After reaching to her, he wraps his long, strong masculine hand around her waist and drags her to him. she seems upset. So he grins crookedly at her which he always saves only for her.

"How are you doing, My Lady?" he asks. She pouts but doesn't answer. The Thandaiwala look at them with knowing grin and replies, "Bhaiya, Didi has Bhaang. Bhaang ka Rang nahin chhutega abhi. Aapko unko manane ke liye intezar karna hoga.(Brother, Sister has Bhaang. The colour of Bhaang is too strong to be faded. You have to wait to cajole her.)"

In reply he just smiles and asks him for what she has consumed. The Bhaangwala smilingly hands him a large glass of Thandai Sharwat with Bhaang. He drinks it all in one- go and returns the glass to him. Then he carefully tugs her with his side and walks away.


Thanks for this beautiful Siggy Priya.🤗

Edited by mmroyalkaterick - 12 years ago
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Part two

After entering their, own paradise, he let go of her. She is very quiet today which is not appropriate with her nature. She usually is very playful, joyful and mischievous time to time. She always celebrates every festival with equal enthusiasm and joy. Besides Holi and the Spring-festival is her favourite. He feels mad at himself because it's his doing. He was very busy from past few days and away from home, from her. And he couldn't make time to call her, too. He notices that she wears a simple white churidaar-kurta with red duppatta. No make-ups, no jewelry, nothing, not even colours are on her except her Mangalsutra around her neck and a very thin vermilion line, Sindur on her partings. He sets aside his duffel bag, briefcase and black jacket on the couch and approaches her...

"I am very sorry. I was very irresponsible earlier." He holds her shoulder and faces her to him. She stares at him indifferently. Her tiny, black eyes, who are famous for delivering so many different expressions within a minute are stilled. As if they are deep, dark seas full of mystery and mirth. He pauses for a moment, then slowly wraps his hand around her waist and with other hand cups her face and lifts towards her. "I am feeling terrible as I left you alone for days. My cowardice and ambition came between us. I forgot that I have some certain responsibility and duty towards you too." He slowly makes her sit on their bed. Then he bends on his knees before her and looks up to her, "For my negligence and indifference you always suffer. You bear my ignorance with yours great patience and wisdom. You don't complain when I become arrogant." He holds her both hands in his. Now his mirthful, serene eyes become wet. His deep voice quivered. "Thank you, for everything. Thank you for your unconditional love, endless affection, undivided attention and care towards me." He kisses them, "I am thankful to God that you come to my life."

Main to yeh sochta tha,

(I wondered,)

Ki aajkal,

(Nowadays),

Uparwale ko fursat nahin.

(Almighty is very busy, has no time.)

Phir bhi tumhe banake woh,

(Still he created You)

Meri nazar mein chad gaya.

(And he came across me.)

Rut bin aur bad gaya.

(Like,seasonal feelings without the seasons.)

Kaise mujhe tum mil gayi?

(How do I get you?)

Kismat pe ayein naa yakeen.

( I can't believe in my fortune.)

Utar ayi jheel par,

(You landed on a stilled lake,)

Jaise chand utarta hai kabhi,

(Just like the moon's reflection who sometime seems to land on there.)

Haule haule, aise.

(Very slowly and silently.)

Gunguni dhoop ki tarha se...tarannum mein tum,

(Like sweet but warm sunlight, amongst so many starlings,)

Chhuke mujhe, guzri ho yun.

(You brush me with you and pass.)

Dekhun tumhe! Ya main shunu!??

(I don't know whether I should see you or listen!!??)

"Don't ever say like that," finally the long silence is broken as well her dam of grief. Pearls like tear drops are spilling from her both eyes. He tries to wipe them but she drags him and makes him sit beside him too. "You know this very well I was not sad because of you or your any behavior. I was sad because I was worrying about you. Without you, nothing matters to me. I can't imagine my being without me." Saying this she buries herself in his embrace, her safest shelter. He presses a light feather kiss on her temple and mumbles, "That is why I am apologizing. My Ego diverts me for a little bit." She tilts her head to look at him. Looking in her eyes he says, "Forgive me, give me a chance to prove my love towards you." He kisses her eyes, her cheeks and mumbles, " Let me color you with my own.," he kisses her lips now, first softly, then deepens it with all his passion.

Ang laga de re,

( Touch me,)

Mohe rang laga de re.

(Colour me,)

Main to teri joganiya, tu jog laga de re.

( I am yours worshipper, you are my worship.)

Jog laga de re,

(Give me the worship.)

Prem ka rog laga de re...

(Give me the disease, Love...)

Main toh teri...jog laga de re.

(I am yours...my worship.)

Ram Ratan Dhan

Lagan Magan Mann,

Tann mora Chandan re...

(By the gemlike name of Ram my body and mind is merged in you.)

Ujli gori preet piya satrang laga de re.

(Colours me ,with the glowing, bright colour of Love, Love.)

"Let me make this festival of Holi, full of colours of passion and love." He says slowly in her ears. Then slowly picks her in his arm.

Raat Banjar si hai,

( The night is barren.)

Kali khanjar si hai.

(Like a sharp black knife.)

Tere sine ki lau,

(The fire of your desire,)

Mere andar bhi hai.

(Is as same as yours, in my heart)

Tu hawa de isse,

(You stoke this..)

Toh mera tann jwale.

(So my flesh can be burnt.)

Jwala de re sang jwala de re...

(Burn it with you, so that it could reach its soul, You.)

Mohe ang laga de re...jog laga de re.

(Touch me...give me my worship.)

"Let make me forget you all those time, when you felt unloved and uncared. Let me feel you cherished and wipe away all your painful and grieving memory. Let my passion and pleasure makes yours free from every barrier and boundary." He whispers and lays her on the middle of the bed.

Raas hai Raat mein,

(There is pure elation and bliss in this night,)

Teri har baat mein,

(In your each word,)

Bol main kya karoon?

(Tell me what should I do?)

Aise halat mein?

(In this situation?)

Hoon main teri malang,

( I am yours soberness, yours sanity.)

Tu hi mera nasha.

(You are my intoxication.)

Chada de re Bhaang chada de re...

(Let the addiction of Bhang flows within our veins.)

Prem ki bhang chada de re.

(Let the intoxication of love runs through our veins)

Mai toh teri joganiya...jog laga de re.

(I am yours...you are my worship)

Ram Ratan Dhan.

Lagan Magan Mann.

Tann mora chandan re...

(By the gemlike name of Ram our body, mind and soul are merged in one.)

"Let me love you...let me make us one, whole once again." He urges to her. She smiles and holds him near to her heart and utters, "Then love me, make me whole, give me our gift of love."

She opens her eyes slowly with the sense of contentment and whole. She finds herself laying on him, entwining their limbs together. She smiles and stares at her with a fixed glance. He stirs a little and whispers, "Good afternoon. How are you feeling?" She blushes and says, "With you, I am always great. By the way congratulations, you did fade away the colour of Bhaang with yours." Her eyes are finally twinkling again but with pure joy. Saying this she tries to disengage herself from him. But he tightens his grip onto her and replies, "Anytime wifey dear. But right now we need to hurry. Let's go to the shower, together." He says this with mischievous eyes and before she voices any protest he once again picks her up in his arm and rushes for the bathroom.

Hours later, they both are adjusting their hair before the mirror. Suddenly she notices her cell phone is blinking. She cautiously picks it up and finds numerous missed calls. She panics, "Mohit, what have you done?" Mohit startles a little but then realizing grins wide and asks, "What I have done, Mouni? Please explain." Then he whispers in her ears, "With details," while wraps his arms around her.

"I am not talking about that."her ears are red hot with embarrassment and she says rolling her eyes, "I am talking about this. Could you see?" she asks flashing her phone in front of his eyes.

He grins, "Yeah, Salman Khan's another Deewani gives you...uhh..1,2,3...WHAT?120 MISSED CALLS." He gets a shock and his jaws drops open.

"Now what?" she asks timidly. "We first need to reach your Institution...Hurry up." He barks at her and prepares for the leave.

Edited by mmroyalkaterick - 12 years ago
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Thanks everyone for joining my birthday party here.🤗love you all .
Edited by mmroyalkaterick - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first of all.
happy birthday. Abhi ke lie chotusa wish will wash you tomorrow achese.
now coming back to your update.
first few lines made me sad thinking about mouni..but then the way story moved I was blushing like hell.
the best update from you till date.
he knows how to make her happy . awww my mohit.
and wow both consumes bhaang awesome.
and the song you added in between suits them.perfectly.
now who is this another deewani of my salman
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first of all.
happy birthday. Abhi ke lie chotusa wish will wish you tomorrow achese.
now coming back to your update.
first few lines made me sad thinking about mouni..but then the way story moved I was blushing like hell.
the best update from you till date.
he knows how to make her happy . awww my mohit.
and wow both consumes bhaang awesome.
and the song you added in between suits them.perfectly.
now who is this another deewani of my salman
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OH MY GODDD!!! OH MY GODDD!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rimi di


LOVE YOU so so sooo much!!

Oh...I was veryy sad when i saw her sad...!!!

BUT...but...But..Oh my Mohit!!! he really can't see her in this condition!!

Ufff...bhaang ka nasha!! And he carried her to the bed...and after that...😳😳😳OMG I was died blushing😳😳😳

Awww...my mohit is sooo sweet n loving n caring na! He's sooo irresistible!! Their sweet convo...LOVED IT!!!😳😳

120 missed calls!!!???!!!! And who's this salman ki deewani??? suspense haan i like it!


Rimi di can't thank you enough for this update...!!! This is the best BEST birthday treat i can ever get!! Loved it soooXinfinity much!!

You're the best writer i've ever seen!! And please don't laugh at this coz i am quite serious!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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DI and Priya...thanks very much.😳I was writing this stealthily from my sister, and hadn't blush that much what I am blushing now after reading your comments. I don't know how it is...but guess it's MoMolicious!!☺️
My Best update seriously guys...😭☺️I am so happy that I am considering this my Best Birthday gift eevr. And thanks for your wishes Di, Priya.🤗Love you guys.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mmroyalkaterick





Happy Holi guys...this is the season of Colours, Passion and Love. It announces the arrival of Spring.😳 But this year, the date 16 of March, First Day of Holi has coinsided with a sweet person's birthday. Guess who it is??😆😆 Me😳 Royalkaterick aka Rimi.😳 So here is some small treat for my Birthday...along with a little gift from my side. (Consider it a s return gift😉 though its a treat to some special persons...)



And
special Birthday Payesh aka Kheer.😃




Happy Holi
are U Bangali

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