Thread 4 - Fifty Shades of Shlok Agnihotri - Part 46-[DT Note-Pg-112]

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desikahani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#461

take good care ... the least we can give along with all our appreciation is our patience too :) know u will come back with a bang & look forward to it :)

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lechu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#462

Originally posted by: DJakaDesiJames

😳 😳my pleasure to serve the queen...

u are our dear queen🤗

yes always innocent nirma angel

yes where is she ? missing her badly😔

Bwahahahaha innocent nirmal angel? Who you? Oh my gawd!!!

aparna di!!!!!!!!!! 😈😳

u will be promoted to the corrosive bleach level beware😈

dont worry you said na ur next work is on medication and spirituality right?🤣

then you will be a strong nirma white angel like me😃😎🤣

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lechu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#463

Originally posted by: DJakaDesiJames
Dear readers, I am completely washed out today n don't think will be able to write in this form. Sorry i will def make it up tomorrow. My hugs to all my readers and once again a big big sorry 🤗

no worries we will wait😊

take care🤗

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Dee James

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Posted: 12 years ago

#464

Part 44

Readers, thank you so much for being so patient, understanding, loving, and overall being so so amazing 🤗. The marriage track is finally here and I wanted to make it short and sweet since both Shlok and Astha here are not ritualistic. So here we go...and banner??? Who else but meerab 😳.

The two weeks seemed to pass in a blur. Astha was busy coordinating with her designer for her wedding clothes and the architect regarding the house. She was forever online too, looking at designs for improving the decor of the new house. When Astha visited the house once again she fell in love with the place all over again.

It was a beautiful house built in the traditional style. Obviously the interior had been renovated recently with every modern amenity one could think of. Yet it was the traditional allure that Astha was attached too. She was determined to make this a happy home for Shlok, who had not had a normal home in his entire life.

Astha also met Anjali a couple of times in the week. They had long and deep conversations about Shlok. Anjali shared so many details about his childhood, the little boy who had been stripped of his trusting nature. Astha came to know that Shlok was extremely protective and deeply fearful about the ones he loved, namely his mother and now Astha. She understood his obsessive nature about her security now.

Anjali also said how at three, when he saw his father's deeds for the first time, Shlok withdrew into a shell. He didn't speak for a whole year with anyone, until he started going to a proper school and met children of his age. Astha was astounded by the extent to which his scars ran. Tears prickled when she thought about that small, lone boy.

Anjali also said Varad and herself protected Shlok whenever they could but they could not always help him completely. "I was scared Astha. My husband was a very powerful man in the society and I was a helpless woman with two kids. He threatened me that if I walked out and tarnished his image, he will take away my sons from me. I couldn't take that chance nor could I tell this to Shlok and anger him even more."

"And now I just don't care. The day Shlok hit him back, Sahib stopped abusing to a great extent. And now he knows I only have to tell my son, that has made him stay in line. Now a days I simply don't care anymore. It is not worth moving out now, when I am at the fag end of my life." Anjali had finished with some tears in her eyes. Astha hugged her mother in law and offered her comfort.

Astha was still thinking about Shlok that night. He had gone to Atlanta to meet some business partners and was coming back in two days. The phone rang as if it had telepathy. She was delighted to see Shlok's name flashing in her phone. "Hello" her voice was breathless.

"Hello yourself. What are you up to?"

"I'm in bed. It's almost eleven Shlok."

"Hmm. I am just out of a meeting. Have another one in half an hour." he did sound like the busy business magnate that he was. Yet he had taken the time to call her in between. Astha's smile grew wider at his thoughtfulness.

"Love you Shlok."

"Thank you. Me too, and what brought this on suddenly?" She could picture his face, grave, his eyebrows raised.

"Just like that. I met your mom today. We got talking about you."

"What?" Shlok was suddenly all attentive. "What did you talk about me?"

"About your childhood, some stuff..." Astha trailed away, unsure how much he would want to know.

"What the! Why rake it all up now?" Shlok almost whined at her over the phone.

"It's okay. I am going to be your wife. You almost never talk about your feelings, your past. It is such a difficult task getting anything out of you." Astha's exasperation came out in her reply. "I am sorry you had to go through what you did. I wish I had been there for you then too."

Shlok inhaled an audible breath. "Astha, I have a meeting in another twenty minutes. It is important. Let's not do this now." He sounded almost weary and scared. Astha didn't want to disturb him, especially not when he was so far away.

"Okay." Astha's soft voice accepted his boundaries instantly. "I just want to know I love you and I miss you. Lots."

"Really? So do I come from the airport to Preethi's apartment?" He smirked at the other end.

"And then I might just ravish you." She told him in no uncertain terms. Shlok chuckled at her response.

"That will be something. You ravishing me. And with that thought I am going to go into the boring meeting now. After your enlightening reply I doubt if my business partner is going to interest me. But let me try." He finished in a dry voice and bade her good bye.

Astha had a constant grin for ten minutes after the phone call. She missed him and hearing his voice had reduced her worry about him considerably. Astha too was impatient for the wedding to get over so that she could be with her Shlok once more.

Shlok arrived two days later to Pune in the midnight flight. He was exhausted and jet lagged when he landed. Yet he took time to message Astha and his brother that he had arrived safe. He didn't want to disturb Astha in case she was sleeping. Yet she replied back. Glad you're back and safe. Sleep tight. Meet you tomorrow. And my friends have organized a dinner for us. So be here on time.

He was surprised to see the dinner invitation. Shlok messaged back saying he will be there on time and he did arrive by six. By then Astha's friends had gathered along with some of her college mates. They had all donned mehendi on Astha and were generally having fun with some music, dance, and drinks.

Shlok came on time. He raised his brow at Astha, seeing all the noise and all these people. Astha was sitting with her hands and legs done with mehendi. She grinned at him and gave a good natured shrug. Shlok assumed she was also taken by surprise. The next day was the wedding and he was anxious for the ceremony to go smooth.

Two of Astha's friends pulled him to Astha's side and made him sit next to her. They continued enjoying while he had some time to catch up with her. "You're looking beautiful though a shade too young in this skirt and t shirt."

"Oh well, I had to get the mehendi done in my legs too. Aren't they pretty?" She smiled at him as she asked the question.

"Not more than you. You look charming." He tucked a hair strand that had escaped and looked sheepish when some of her friends started teasing them. Within half an hour Shlok left to take care of business again. He was apologetic but he wanted to get all his work done so that he could take two weeks off after the wedding.

The next day Astha and her four friends went to her new home where the wedding was to take place. Only very close friends and a few relatives had been invited. Astha wore a purple and gold sari. Her hair was neatly cased in a bun with flowers around it. She also wore some hair jewellery, matching bangles, and the same antique gold set that Shlok had given her.

Anjali took her arthi and led her inside when they all came. Shlok was nowhere in sight. Astha spotted Varad and he smiled at her. He came to her side and gave her a warm welcome. She noticed a pretty woman standing a little away from Varad. Varad introduced that girl as Sojal, his fiance. Astha hugged Sojal, almost instantly liking her shy smile.

Anjali led her inside to perform some lakshmi puja and other rituals. She was given the new green nine yards sari they had got. Astha draped that sari with the help of her friends and her foster mother. Her foster parents had taken the trouble to come and Astha had been overjoyed at that.

Her father was the one who was going to give her away today. She bent and touched their feet before joining her handsome husband to be, who was looking breathtaking in a maroon kurta. His desire filled eyes slowly ran through her sari clad, curvaceous body. His heated eyes undressed her mentally. Astha's cheeks turned scarlet. She lowered her gaze and quickly took her place next to him.

They didn't speak to each other till the ceremony got over. After the elders had given the blessings, and the other rituals had been completed, Shlok finally caught Astha's arms to give her a tight hug.

"Shlok! someone might come." They were in a secluded corner in the new house. Astha had been simply been flabbergasted at how their new house had been transformed with decorations all around. She was now wriggling away from her husband and his roving hands.

"So what? You are my wife now Mrs Agnihotri. No one can say a thing to me now." He pecked her lightly on the lips before saying "You look so beautiful today."

Astha gave him a shy smile and replied "You too look breath taking."

"Then get the damn crowd out fast so that we can get on with us." The old Shlok came back with that remark. Astha giggled at his impatience and frustration. She shook her head in a mock stern fashion and proceeded to go to her family and friends.

Part 45

Edited by DJakaDesiJames - 12 years ago

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HarshaMawra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#465

Oh wow..

Finally they got married

That's cool

Loved it

But missed the hot moment

Hope the next part will me full of hot hot things😉

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Shahela

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Posted: 12 years ago

#466

Awesome update... The wedding description was sweet simple yet kept me captivated

Finally they are married ..eager to see how their marriage life goes on

Thanks for the pm

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Anupama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#467

Hallelujah! Finally they're married. I don't know how your gonna top everything else...but I'm sure you have something up your sleev. All the best. Thanks for the PM.