NEW AASHLOK SS WINNING U BACK updtd pt 3 pg 14 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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the prologue seems to be intresting please update soon its just fab
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .SajnaVe.

Awesomeee staart :) add me in your pm list



u r already there hav pmed u...thnk u
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet cherry

Looking forward to reading it
Plzz update soon



will update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anukalu

Sounds very interesting! Very intrigued to know what happens next...so please do continue...



thnk u will update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aishaa3

Awsm title😃 looks like shlok is gona win astha bk or is it astha?? Waitng 4 next😳



keep guessing who gonna win back whom...
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Originally posted by: logambika

awesome start yaar... do continue... cn u pm me?

thnk u dear...will pm u
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welcome dear😳
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loving this very much waiting for next
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guyzz thank u so much for ur likes and comments...here is the first part enjoy...

WINNING U BACK...

PART 1

It was just 1 month left now for their divorce proceedings to be claimed...she sighed as she marked a red cross on the calendar.. she was thinking to reconsider her decision...probably only because she loved him way too much..she was determined to bring the old Shlok back like he was before marriage in this 1 month left...she was looking at the calendar when Shlok entered...he saw her staring at something and got angry seeing the red marks all over the dates he crumbled the calendar and tore it into pieces...

Aastha just mocked him saying that finally I will be free from your clutches and smirked at him...he shook her shoulders and told her that "I m ur fate remember that, not even God can separate u from me I have told u this earlier too" She freed herself from his grip and snapped her finger at him only 30 days...Mr Shlok Agnihotri and then we will part our ways forever...saying so she left leaving him panicked and restless at the same time...He banged his fist on the wall in anger and left from there...

Ten days are already over and still all her efforts were in vain instead whatever she did only angered him and so she thought to give it up on him and decided to have fun with Kavya, serve her mother in law and father in law, spend time with Kaka and Varad...Sojal not at all she was a witch...and Shlok not at all... well he had already found a friend in Aditi...it squeezed her heart in pain as she recalled the moments when she had found them together be it stitching his button or accepting gift from her or saving her and accepting her friendship or eating the food which her so called friend has prepared...

Here Shlok was carefree..strangely he forgot about the whole divorce thing...coz he inside even he didn't know how complete he felt with her..everyday he used to watch her sleep a content smile would form on his lips...well he lacked when it came to emotions especially when it is for Aastha...he couldn't let a girl overpower him again and therefore night was the only time when he can see her taking his own sweet time...in these days he missed her reaction on whatever comments he made on her she just smiled at him and ignored him...sighing he went to sleep...

Next day, he came from office late at night was highly drunk because of Aastha's ignorance towards him...and in tipsiness he entered Aditi's room...she had just come out of the shower...and was drying her hair when he came and hugged her from behind

"y r u ignoring me do u know how much it pains...it pains here...in the heart...plzz I cant bear u silence anymore...plzz talk with me...plzz" he pleaded her like a child...Aditi stiffened due to his touch..."

Aastha went to Aditi's room to give her soup and the scene there shocked the wits out of her..her hold on the tray tightened and she saw anger creep inside her rather jealousy...she just left from there without even sparing them a second look at the so called friends with benefits...

She walked on the empty roads with tears flowing from her eyes... "he never loved u Aastha it was just a bloody revenge from him..." firstly he faked love with me broke her trust, during their honeymoon she thought that he was not that bad but he broke her trust by arresting her father, he had told her that no girl can make into his heart ever and what she saw today made her lose the tiny mini trust she had on him...She wiped her tears roughly and said "that man doesn't deserve u Aastha...see what u have done to urself in his love...u have lost ur identity...u were an independent girl and now u r a freaking desperate lover behind a bas***d...but not anymore Aastha u have to regain ur old self...that creature was just a nightmare in ur life...just forget him and behave as if he doesn't exist in your life...its just a matter of 20 days and then u r free from him"...

She entered the house and passed through Aditi's the mere thought of what she saw came flooding in her mind...she felt like puking over their relationship...friends with benefits is a right phrase from them...she came to their correction his room she straight went to her side...closed the curtains and slept without even giving a single glance to him...next morning he woke up with a heavy head...he was clueless as to what happened yesterday...he just remembered that he drank way too much coz of Aastha's ignorance and after that all his memories went blank...how much hard he tried but he couldn't recall it...sighing he turned to look at her but she was not there...he glanced at the watch it was 9...shit he had a meeting in an hour...his mobile was in repair so he had told Aastha to wake him up on time but she didn't wake him...he saw anger creeping inside him but he controlled and thought to deal with her later...she was there on the dining table but didn't even look at him but saw Aditi giving him a strange smile...he found it weird but gave her an uncomfortable smile in return which Aastha saw..she gave a disgusting look to both of them ...he took a seat and Aastha served him the breakfast...when Shlok tapped his fingers on the plate but Aastha didn't hear it...instead of her Aditi served him...he gave her an angry and a smile to Aditi...she suddenly felt Kabab mei haddi between these two creatures...she just banged the bowl she held on dining table and left from there...all of them gave a questioning look to Shlok but he assured them saying that she was not feeling well...

While he returned from office he saw Aditi waiting for him to have dinner...he asked about Aastha's whereabouts and whether she had the dinner...

Aditi - Aastha already had her dinner Shlok...there was no one to serve u so I thought to have dinner with u...

He felt a pang hearing that as till yesterday she would wait for him...he chided Aditi saying that shez not well so she should not be late in taking her meals...Aditi smiled at his concern for her...

He went to his room and saw that there were some changes in it...there he saw that the line that partitioned them now had a door...he panicked thinking that was the only way he could satisfy himself by seeing her at night but now even that was not possible...suddenly he remembered all the day's events he losing the clients, her behaviour during breakfast, she being already eaten the dinner and now this door made him lose the last ounce of control he had...


so how was it
plz hit likes and comment
Loads of love
Nazia😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow yaar... awesome update... wanna know shlok's reaction...

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