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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -LECHU-

i know am commenting after a long time

and finally completed reading everything
truly roshani this story can be called as your masterpiece
earlier i thought it was beintaah...it was awsome
but this is the best 👏 👏 👏
and i trust you to give totally unexpected twists...
at unexpected time
truly loved it...⭐️


thanks dear for this limitless love😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

wow kya update tha

the whole game only change
ok so dat person mr adheer was astha step father
nd he was such a cruel person
nd dadi is nice nd clever to
romila toh phas gayi
do update soon

😆 romila ki tai tai fis
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: roshanii

yeah sweety next update will be only for you and few others who continuously gave me the ardent love😛



Wow!! reallly? 😛
tab toh i m very much anxious to read the upcoming chapter😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pwenCezz_symrun



Wow!! reallly? 😛
tab toh i m very much anxious to read the upcoming chapter😆

yup 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saima4744

superb update,

beautiful written.
tf pm.

thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey guys so sorry for last night
i could not update as i promised due to my internet prob
😊
now i update second last part enjoy

Part 21

He took her hospital in time. Doctor said that if he didn't take her in time then it could be dangerous because she was drugged with chloroform. He was anxious and walking terrified in the corridor. Later some time, Amma baba or Aayushmaan also came to hospital. They were waiting outside for the doctor. Shlok saw Aastha across the glass wall. He felt that his heart squeezed to see her in this state. He could not bear to see her pale face.

He hit the wall in compulsion. After a long wait, doctor came and gave them the news that she was absolutely fine now.

"She will be back in her senses so soon, there is no risk now...you can see her." he said and went. Shlok ran inside hurriedly. He saw her unconscious and held her hand

"Please wake up my love... I cannot see you like this..." he murmured and kissed her forehead. Suddenly he felt movement in her hand. He patted her cheek slowly and called her

"Aastha are you hearing me... wake up" he called her when she opened her eyes with some difficulty. She saw the blurred shadow near to her. She murmured in weak tone

"Shlok..." she was trying to open her eyes, he held her hand and kissed "I am here with you my love..."

She finally won over her unconsciousness and opened her eyes fully. She saw Shlok and tried to get up when Shlok stopped her "no love you need rest... I am here with you don't worry." He kissed her forehead. She tried to say something

"Shlok I remember nothing what happened in your absence... how did..." she tried to remember

"Sashhh" Shlok put his finger on her lips and said "don't think much about that, you are with me now and everything is fine now...you don't need to scared anymore..." he cupped her face.

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"Mr. Shlok she is fine now... you can take her home... I will inform you when her test reports will come" Doctor inform him and they relieved.

"You take her back until I am going to home so that we can welcome her" Amma said and left.

"Ok Shlok I also have to leave because I have to catch the flight in this evening... I am happy for her... you are the true soul mate of her..." Aayushmaan said and left.

"Soul mate..." Shlok repeated the word in his mind and smiled.

He completed the hospital formalities and took her back to the home. She was fit and fine now but he didn't allow her to walk. He lifted her in his arms. Amma was waiting for them. Aastha saw her on the door and murmured in Shlok's ear

"Please Shlok get me down... I can walk" She whispered when Shlok clinched her with more pressure

"Don't speak so much you are not well" he took her inside after the Aarti. He took her in room and put her down on the bed. She saw him lovingly on his concern towards her. He covered her half with the blanket and left the room.

After some moment he came up with the tray of fruits and glass of juice.

"Ok dear now time to eat something... after this you have to take your medicine..." he set near to her and feed her. After that he gave her medicine, her eyes became wet on his love. She held his hand and kissed

"I love you Shlok..."she whispered emotionally when he pulled her in tight hug. She could feel his heart beats in the warm embrace. She sobbed when he cupped her face and wiped her tears with kisses. He kissed her eyes. He kissed her cheeks and slowly went to her earlobe.

"now I don't want to see you cry anymore... these tears... these eyes... your happiness... your sadness is mine now" he whispered in her ear and kissed her earlobe. She felt the warmness of his arms and closed her eyes in heavenly joy. He kissed her rose petals and made her moaned in zeal of love.

They felt that everything was smiling with them in happiness. He became mad in her love and also made her insane of his love.

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She was learning his favorite dish from Amma. She was so lost when he came and picked her up in his arms. His face was shining with indefinite pleasure. She became embarrassed when she saw Amma was smiling to see his madness

"Get me down Shlok..." she muttered when he said in cheerful tone "from now you will not do anything except the rest..." he ordered her when she stared him

"First put me down..." she said. He looked insane in happiness. He made her sit on the chair and turned to Amma

"Amma bring sweet because this is the sweetest news of my life... you are going to be grand maa very soon." He shouted in joy and Aastha looked him blankly.

"Really..." Amma asked in unbelievable tone, when Shlok told them

"Yes Doctor called me and informed me about the same, I am going to be father..."he kissed Aastha forehead when she came back in senses and hidden her face shyly in her hands.

Amma hugged her and gave her blessings. She informed to Baba and Dadi about the same. Baba became very happy and prayed for their happiness. Dadi looked them and went silently from there. She didn't mingle with them after the incident. She became silent.

"from now you will not do anything and if you want something then tell me, I will take care of you" Shlok ordered her while she blink her eyes.

He took her in room and said in hasty tone " now I am your 24x 7 servant mam and if you need anything then you will say only to me" he kissed her while she simmered in joy of his love

*******...**************

He became crazy after her. He cared her like flower. Sometimes she became scared to see her madness

"Aastha finish this..." he fed her forcefully while she made her face to him

"Shlok I don't want to drink juice please..." she murmured when he ordered with false anger

"Aastha please drink it... I don't want to hear anything... you are so weak dear and you need to eat properly..." he scolded her lovingly when she took the glass helplessly.

She put her back on the bad crown in relax mode when he put his head in her lap and hugged her. He kissed her belly and tried to feel some movement. She laughed on his tactics.

"You know you are so crazy for baby I think you will forget me when he will come" she mocked him when he got up and held her

"No one can make me forget you even our baby... you are my everything and our baby will be the most beautiful symbol of our love... she will make our love divine." He huskily said and hugged her while she looked him surprisingly

"How can you say it will be a girl" she asked when he smiled

"I know it will be a girl... I want a baby girl just like you my angel..."he gave a peck on her forehead while she fumed

"No dear husband it will be my junior Shlok" they argued like children on this topic.

**********...************

Nine months passed hopefully. She went in labor when Shlok became anxious to see her unbearable pain. He wanted to vanish all her pain and tears but he was helpless. Amma smiled to see his misery and consoled him

"Don't worry beta, it is natural... she will be fine and will give us a priceless gift. You will forget all her pain when you will pick your little baby in your hands" he heard and clinched his fist.

After some time doctor came out with news "congrats Mr. Shlok you become a father of a baby boy..."he paused when Shlok looked confused bit

"Baby boy but I wished for girl anyways how my wife is now..." he asked when Doctor gave a smile

"Your wife is absolutely fine and also you become a father of girl... your wife delivered twins, congrats again" he wished him while he stood like statue for seconds to hear the news.

When Aastha sifted to the room he went to see her. She looked pale but looked eternal after the baby birth.

He set on the bed next to her and kissed her. "Thank you so much my love to give me the pearls of my life... I love you so much..." he looked the babies. Amma came in the room to look her and gave them blessings.

Suddenly Dadi came and Aastha became little uncomfortable as usually to see her. Dadi looked the babies and smiled

"My children are back in form of your babies to me... I want to gift you something and I thought that I will arrange a traditional wedding for you with all rituals in our village..." she gave them blessings and left while they remained confused and shocked to hear this

*********...*********

"Shlok I want to make a trust for child welfare, I want to donate my all property for that..." she told him and he looked her surprisingly

"as you wish but this is such a big decision" he said in composed tone

"I have lost enough due to this property but now I don't want to lose you or my children so I will give all the money for a good cause so that my children will be blissful..." she said and put her head on his shoulder.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hiii
Sorry could not pm u abt the updates... 🥱 was not in station...ll read n pm u
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
loved the way shlok is taking care of astha
so they had twins
cute
continue soon
thanks for the pm
Edited by niki795 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome dear.. Love it.. Superb.. Thanks for pm..

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