Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 24) - Page 78

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...amazing update...so finally they are one..can't wait to read more of their romances
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Posted: 12 years ago
well absolutely wonderful update...
it was 1000% worth the wait...
loved the way u described their Arnav's need, Khushi's shyness,their post love making thoughts...infact loved the update 2 bits that am at lose of words 2 describe its beauty...
waiting for the day when these 2 will confess their love for each other...
lovely update...
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!! Finally ! They became one in true sense ... so it was truly a " HAPPY " birthday for Arnav ..🄳 🄳 ... I really loved the this flirty ..teasing side Arnav a lot ... šŸ˜‰
I really hope after today this - natural progression in their relationship helps Arnav with his trust issues ... 😊


Edited by sini1234 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was mind blowing

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Posted: 12 years ago
Butifuly writen updt u describe scene of lov making butifuly nw arnav is changing lov his flirty side tanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
I have read the update thrice or more and still dont feel it's enough. I think I will be back again and some more ..
Thanks for the wonderful chap.

Only one confusion. Khushi was not naive right then why was she confused when he started taking off her sari? This part was slightly confusing for me.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update. Happy that Arnav and kushi took their relationship to next level. Loved the update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you for the update. As always, a good read...but...
Perhaps I am the only one, but I am a bit disappointed with this very important chapter and event in Arnav-Khushi's life. Maybe my expectations were unreasonable.
Well, atleast from my understanding of Khushi's character sketch, I find it a bit less convincing that she was saying all those things that Arnav had to clarify 'what do you think I am doing?'. Yes, she needs to be shy but her character so far has not been portrayed as naive. Innocent, yes, shy, yes, it was her first time, yes, but she is not nave. She is well-educated and one would hope she knew what happens when two people get intimate.And not only is she desperately, irrevocably in love with Arnav, but she has even admitted it to herself. I was waiting for her reactions to intimacy ever since I read the chapter when Arnav carried her up some steps. She was not in her senses. She is not in control anyways when Arnav is around then why was she behaving like this when he was getting intimate. She was expecting a lot more to happen when he kissed her the first time, that portrayal of the energy around them was much more convincing than this chapter. Then why did she react as if she had no clue and also she was not that affected by him?
Not sure , but in this chapter, it felt a little abrupt and even jerky at times. It felt like an act, where a lot of thinking was involved. From Arnav's viewpoint, I understand that, he is the experienced one, the mature one here and has to keep reminding himself to take it slow, keep Khushi's reactions to the fore .But from Khushi's point of view, it felt a bit silly for her to vocalise her thoughts,even if she was thinking what she was thinking. Not sure if she did it to save herself from embarrassment of coming across as too forward/ not shy? I would have expected Khushi to go with the flow, to lose herself freely to the act, to the man, to give herself, as she had been doing in this relationship.
Well, I am sure future updates will compensate. šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰
I was just being honest about how I felt about the update, hope you don't mind.
Looking forward to more of these more frequently.
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Posted: 12 years ago

AWESOME

This update remind me of song labon ko by kk

Labon ko Labon pe sajao

Kya ho tum mujhe abb batao

Tod do khud ko tum
Baanhon mein meri


Why this song it's like a plea of a person (just like arnav) who is asking or seeking permission from his lover. Not just asking why she makes him alive but also asking for physical intimacy and want to take ther relation to next level.


As it was already mention in the update that he is a very pragmatic and bitterly realistic and the thing which stuck in my head, he hardly believe in his luck and when luck finally bestow upon him he is still unable to believe that this is really happening.

Though it's raining outside but he is still thirsty for love and care which he is craving for years and no one was there for him or assure him that things will change for good drought will go eventually. And in this update he IS asking from khushi that only she would satisfy his thirst and yearning. So let go all your inhibitions be part of me in every way. Only she is his life line or in other words ONLY HOPE. Today he want to tell her that he love her the most, and the only language he know, thorough his actions (his love has no boundaries he himself not aware of his feeling and intensity).

Tere ehsaasson mein Bheege lamhato mein
Mujhko doobati tishnagi si hain
Teri adao se dilkash khatao se
In lamho mein zindagi si hai
Haya ko zara bhool jao
Mere hi tarah pesh aao

This stanza actually signifies his mental and emotional state that he was searching for peace for so long and he find that peace and solace only in khushi's company or in her embrace. And now its time for deep and peaceful slumber which he was waiting for so long. He is waiting for this moment for so long and when she reciprocated those feelings and hug him he felt completed in her embrace. He loves her so much that he himself is not aware that how much he loves her.

He might have just become a believer.

Dil ki panahon mein bekhri si aahon mein
Sone ki khwasish jagi si hai
Chehre se chehra chupao
Sene ki dhadkan suno
Dekh lo khud ko tum

Annkhon mein meri

For her he comes out of his comfort zone, he proposed her, marry her, ignore rishbh even though uncertainty still there but he tries his best to ignore that issue and believe khushi.

Though I know right now is temporary but I am sure it will be permanent soon) because his pessimistic outlook not letting him enjoying this beautiful journey.

Passion, desire, madness, reciprocation of feeling, love, her awkwardness and shyness, his helplessness and the way khushi remembering each and everything is really really well written.

Thanks for the pm

Edited by faree - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update. I am glad they crossed 'that' barrier! But we didn't get too much from Arnav's POV, I hope there is more from him in the next chapter. Khushi is so embarrassed and I am too! I hope we have an Arnav who cannot take his hands off Khushi now! Loved the insecurity in Arnav's comments and how Khushi immediately picked up on them and responded positively. Arnav is also believing her now. But somehow, the last thought of his seemed ominous. More testing times for Khushi??

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