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Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Hey Saima,
Okay, I know I am too late in commenting to these chapters but you know I was away otherwise you would have had a big share of my long comments per chapter.Lets begin with a Huge Hearty CONGRATULATIONS for the start of this new thread.Now coming to the updates, I couldn't reply to them doesn't mean I didn't read them. I read dem all as you posted because I checked the thread something 6-7 times daily.You know when you started this story & posted the 1st chap when we asked for a prologue? I had cried so much dat day. This story had touched my heart that very day & I had been looking forward to it eagerly. As you started posting it, like always it became more beautiful with time. It's really unique, & so so innocent.The way things were going on in Uni I had started to think that they'll take ages to recognize each other as everything was going on a slow pace. And these two weren't leaving any chance to run away from the other. What I loved was the unspoken, unrealized yet a strong bond between them. They had felt the pull between them but still stayed apart just for the sake of innocent love residing in their hearts from their childhood. I had thought that when Humaira had told about Leo to Zoe & then asked her to be with him, that zoe would get some sort of hint that he was her Asad but nothing of that sort happened.I really can't tell you how I had been waiting for the part where they get to know each other with their true identities, honestly it was the first thing I read as I woke up dat day. & my wait was worth it all. I so loved it. It was unexpected. I never thought Dilshad would recognize Zoya but it was beautiful. That moment when Asad & Zoya stood in front of each other after ten long years was so emotional. But truly what touched my heart was when Zoe told her story from the past & Asad held himself responsible for it & she stepped towards him saying that she doesn't hold him responsible for any of it & that he can start making up for it.You know na how relations are these days? You never get what you deserve from them but here without being tied down with each other they were ready to give up on anything to protect their hearts & love from getting impure.These recent chaps where Asad & Zoe have come together & he wants to keep her near him always are really sweet. The way he's being caring, responsible & loving towards her. This proposal again took me by surprise but thinking of it I think this suited them more than a proposal in a party, because this is what they are, innocent & simple but true just like their love. I can't wait for them to get together, I hope Rashid doesn't act as a villain here.Okay, I guess this is enough for now. I'll eat your head later with the next update.Lots of love...
Hey
Thank you so so much, it is so good to hear from you. Have really missed reading your comments
I am really glad you have liked the story so far
There are no two villains in this one...yet anyway Farhan and Tanveer
Have not really thought how to further the storyline will just go with the flow.
Lots of love to you
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