FF: U R My Sunshine: Updt Ch 20, pg 118 - Page 92

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Posted: 18 years ago


sabby loved it, when do i not. i am tired of reapting the same stuff so will just say it was Jhakas.

loved the flirting going on b/w JB, oooooohhhhhhhh and did bani give it to Roshni, wow superb, you go girl, thats the way.

kabir and the way JW is taking care of all his needs is touching.

ye veer kahan hai, ghar nahin aya, busy hoga i guess. 😆

thanks for the lovely update pls continue soon



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Posted: 18 years ago

Loved it! I will say though I want Bani to say 'No' as her final answer and then later have Jai man up and convince her that he acutally does love her. Right now he is strong arming her to either have Kabir in her life or not... later he will be convincing her to have him in her life.

Can't wait to read what's in store for JB....

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: btkr

Sabby dear, what are you talking about "not disappoint u in future updates?" - your ffs are marvelous - KS, Jai bashing, Bani bashing, etc etc have nothing to do with a good story - u write fantastic updates and keep us glued to IF...(and the collective thank u is great, we get more sunshine then 😉 )

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bt

awwww, thanks dear, that was really sweet of you to say.

this definitely calls for more sunshine. 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

saby...I dont know what to say...😕..I mean I am lost for words...

Bani teased and tortured the guy last update...and now openly claims to be his wife...and then flat out refused that she meant a yes...I hope she does realize what she just did...lol...anyways...😆😉

I loved the update and it was awesome...as usual...no complaints...Rivs

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Posted: 18 years ago
great update.. fanatasic 👏 👏 👏

hahha.. loved bani putting roshni in her place like that!! 👏 👏

ooo.. now that kabir is going to wake up in the morning .. he's gonna be a handful for jai!! 😆 😆 😆

contiue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sabsj

This update of mine is dedicated to the bechara, pyaar ka mara Jai Walia from Kasam Se..........you earned it buddy, Jaigiri ki jai ho. Give the man a Tiger for his loving efforts...........oh sorry, he prefers whiskey. Rest in peace my dear troubled soul, may the force of whiskey be there to protect and soothe you.

arrey whiskey...nahi nahi...whiskey alone won't help... he needs begging trips too... arey yaar wo JW hai...😡😡😡... mera TV toh bas bach hi gaya uss din😡... I was all ready to smash it... To see him beg killed me... mera dil 💔

Dil ke armaan aaasuoon mai beh gayeee....😭

sheesha ho ya dil hooooo(ye mera special effect hai😉😆)...... aakhir toot jaata hai...toot jaata hai...😭

aansuu bhari hain...ye jeevan ki raahein... koiiiii unse kehde... hume bhoooooollll jaaayeee...😭

Here is a song dedicated to his Jaigiri.............I rest my case after this.

And I would do anything for Bani's love
I'd make her run right into hell and back
I would do anything for love
I'll even lie to her and that's a fact

Maybe I'm crazy
But it's crazy and it's true
I know I can save her
No one else can save her now like I can do
As long as she is in a looney bin alive and turning
As long as my rapist's love for me is still burning
As long as I make all her dreams come true, beg and kneel in front of her in order to save you

You'd better believe it
That I would do anything for Bani's love
Even if snatching her kids away and killing her emotionally and mentally is the final act

FANTASTIC... 👏... Its perfect...👏

This is true love my dear friends, love in its purest form......take a bow Jai Walia, Bani indeed is a very lucky woman to have a husband like you. Jeete jee Walia Mansion se Mental Asylum pahucha diya, woh bhi pyaar ke khaatir, waahhhhhh.👏👏👏

Ye pyaar hai yaar... now how would me n u know...aakhir ye hai sacha pyaar... its just a different kind... the begging kind...

Just wanted to share a little conversation I had with my hubby over the weekend. I made him watch KS with me 😆,U tortured him... he did it of course, because he loves me, but has never let me forget ever since that I must be a looney myself to keep watching a show like this.He watched it for u...how chweet😳...but I'm shocked he still lets u watch it... aakhir ye sanity ka sawaal hai...

Anyways I told him that if ever a time arises in our lives wherein he has to make such a choice to save me, I would rather he let me rot in jail for a crime I never committed, or kill me himself, but atleast I would be happy that he never betrayed me. That would help me live/die and that too happily. I know he would use his power, his money etc. etc. to keep fighting, even if we kept losing, but still his support would mean the world to me.

U said all this to him... Saby... U need a doc... u tortured him sooo much..pehle KS dikhaaya and then this talk😡

In reply he said to me "Darling, to begin with, that is not love, that is called stupidity, so be glad we don't share that kind of love. If ever I had to make such a choice, I would rather kill myself than send a pregnant you to a rat infested looney bin. Would never give my rapist the satisfaction of winning no matter what the consequences, and going down on my knees in front of her, begging for your life, NO ways. I would never let it reach that stage only. I would rather kill her myself and join you in jail instead. Knowing what her intentions are, she can have my dead body but not me and I would never let her create any rifts between us. Am sure you wouldn't mind living the rest of your life as a widow with happy memories of a loving and caring husband who had the backbone to fight for you, rather than accept defeat and go down on his knees begging for your life, but not before betraying your trust first and all in the name of love and helplessness. Bottom line is, if this great and mighty tycoon Jai Walia had enough time to prance around in a burkha, he could definitely find time to think of other ways to save his Bani too. Rather than standing like a dumb fool in front of her eyes when she discovers he is the man behind the burkha and then running away, he should have told her what the hell was happening and come up with a better plan, knowing fully well Bani would have loved it, given her fetish for bondgiri. That's my Raging Bull....Jai Walia....... muwwaaahh.

Tell him I'm soooo proud of him 👏... kaash JW ko itni akal aati

I know this viewpoint of mine has made my fanfic lose a lot of readers, the lack of feedback/ comments posted making it very evident, but I will still continue writing it.

U better continue...coz I'm late reading it...but I am reading it in any case.... and I love the ff...so don't u even think of not writing

Now we shall all pray ki ye post ho jaaye...cross u're fingers...😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
Sabyyyy,
I totally loved it 🤗
FANTASTIC Part 👏

I loved their flirting around...challenging each other 👏 ... such good strike points 😆
Grouchy Old Man 👏
JW has spies now... ye kabhi bhi nahi sudhar sakta 😡 but boy,.... he was sooo jealous... 😆

because honestly until she accepted his proposal what she did and who she did it with were none of his business

👏 👏 👏
But Bani dear..ye baat koi JW ko kaise samjhaaye...
Ok let me make it clear... no matter how well Massi might be..but she didn't support Bani..so she's on my hate list till the time JW doesn't come back on my love list 😳

Ok fine...he had a troubled childhood...I'm sad for him... but that in no way justifies snatching a kid from his mommy 😡
He could have proposed to her pehle... and then Kabir bhi usko ho jaata...
I don't mind his objective... but so far I don't approve of his means...

Saby its very well written 👏 👏 👏
I loved it... the entire flirting around and his past... very well expressed... 👏

This is for u 🤗 🤗 🤗

I know I still have the next part to read... but phir bhi... please update sooooooooooooooooooooon

Poo
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Sabs,

Me wasn't getting time at all and the sad part me won't have a laptop after Friday since I have to return my laptop as I am leaving my current job for a new one...Me finally got a new job with Times group so me very happy, but yes till the time they don't give me a laptop or till the time I don't buy a new one, I won't be able to access one...

Finally I caught up on the last two chapters and they were absolutely amazing. I like the way Bani rescues him from the devilish claws of Roshni...way to go Bani...and Jai he better realize he's already head over heels in love with Bani...and just the three magic words will let her accept his proposal...

Btw I sooo agree with you they are showing complete crap in the serial and you are right the famous roaring tiger has changed into a little scared mouse who doesn't mind playing putty in the hands of the vamp Pia... 😡

Me can't wait to read your next chapter, do update soon...at least before Friday I hope I get to read at least one update.

garf
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Posted: 18 years ago

Phew!!........I've been busy but finally here Saby!!😃

I loved how your presented Bani's confused feelings👏.....Yes, No, Yes, No 🤔- Jai should have just asked me the question; I would have given him a faster answer😉 (P.S. From now on I'm just drooling over the Jai in FFs - JW in the show has totally annoyed me!!👎🏼)

Ranveer is such a sweetheart!!😳.......Can't get over how cute he is in your FF - and smart too, obviously knows when to leave the 'big kids' alone!😉

But Kabir is still cuterrrrrr!!😳😆

JWs offers are way to tempting - really wonder how Bani's turning them down!😉

Loved her respone to Cobra!👏......Hope she can say that again some day, only this time for real!😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
Fab part...loved the conversation between JAI,Bani & Roshni...Ur Jai & Bani are so different....love them...plz continue soon... 👏 👏

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