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Posted: 12 years ago
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it is really very very interesting...

please pm me whenever u update it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj


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just like me..
don't very i hate sad ending..

baki sab if u wanna read then u can..

i'm not gud writer don't expect anything..

no sad ending i can ensure u..😊


THANKS FOR THE GOOD NEWS
BUT MAAN AND GEET REMAINED AWAY FOR 25 YEARS, SO SAD
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Happy happy birthday Sweetheart!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sad start .
but is ff me maan ki age kya he agar already wo 25 years pehle hi geet ko kho chuka he to
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Maggie.




Happy happy birthday Sweetheart!🤗



THANK U SHIKA 😊 🤗

It was really a very very happy wala bday.. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: preeti.1

sad start .

but is ff me maan ki age kya he agar already wo 25 years pehle hi geet ko kho chuka he to



Story will be in past and future both. But yes saparation is long...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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anybody interested in this??? i'll be starting it soon..

just waiting for my net connection at home..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 1

Breakfast table:


It was Saturday. Khuranas and Maliks were having breakfast. Yesterday KT lost an important project to a new rival Indiana tech (IT) whose MD is a young woman of 26 years. Maan's mood was terrible. He was still in his room. Geetesh has gone to bring him down for breakfast.

G: good morning, Dad.

Maan just nodded. No smile. Well that was not a good sign for everyone.

But he tried to cheer him up a little bit.

G: Dad come down soon. It's parathey in breakfast, ur favourite. And of course all breakfast is cooked by ridhima aunty.

Maan nodded and got up. Geetesh went down for breakfast.

"how is the temperature, today", Dev asked Geetesh.

"not normal", he answered. Dev sighed but didn't say anything.

Yesterday was the worst day. It was bad but that Singh girl made it worse. Ansh Singh. Dev gritted his teeth while remembering her name.

All were waiting for Maan. Few minutes later maan joined them with silence.

Ridimaa, NT, Meera and Jia started serving them. Maan left soon. All were relieved.

Anjili : thank god hitler left so early otherwise to ho gaya tha breakfast.

Ridima scolded her while other smiled and kids laughed.

Anji: come on mom. i had never seen him smiling. And even the real hitler wud have smiled someday.

Gitu : o really how do u know?

Anji: i know more than u, u monkey.

"Shut up u chipkali, kha kha kar bhains ho gayi hai" Gitu retorted back, "why don't you do some yoga to lose some weight? Our engagement is drawing nearer but u r same moti bhains. Loose some weight."

Anji : ha, u called me bhains.

Suyesh: and moti also.

Anji : bhai u also.

All other rolled their eyes here they go again. It's a daily scene on the dining table now. But all love their bickering as it gives them some relief from the stress which Maan leaves behind every day.

Handa House

"Geet, kaha ho tum beta? Come down for breakfast. Papa ia waiting.",Sameera called her 10 years daughter.

Sameera still remember her marriage. She was forced to marry Brij Handa by her parents. She used to work in KT as MSK's secretary. She was in love with her boss. But he never cared for anyone. She has heard some rumours about his wife's horrible death. Many used to say that he never found her body and still waiting for her, searching her thus funding and indirectly running 2-3 investigation agency to find her. He still loves her.

But after her marriage, she found out brij's real intention to marry her. He just wanted to use her as a spy in KT. That's why he just asked her to be his friend on their wedding night no real married relationship. She went back to her parents house but her in laws came to take her back. She respected her mother in law and father in law. She went back but started hating Brij.

But one such day, she got to know that it's not only brij who hates Khuranas but all handas hate them. Then she got to know what Khuranas did to their daughter geet.

She resigned from KT. She started respecting Brij. It was rare to find such brother who loves his sister this much. But Brij never liked Sameera because of her love for Maan. But slowly their relationship built up and now they are irrevocably in love with each other. They named their daughter after Brij's sister's name.

Brij was very happy today as a new rivalry is building up in the market between KT and IT. He so wanted to meet this girl and help her to destroy khuranas. But he has to be very careful as it can go against him. He was concentrating only on friendship first.

Anand villa

She was having her breakfast silently. She was thinking about brij. This brij guy is little weird. She has felt both negative and positive vibes around him. Her secretary informed yesterday that he wanted an appointment to meet her and she has asked her to fix the meeting on monday. He is not that big businessman but he is Khuranas traditional enemy no doubt. Everybody knows that. Whoever is plotting against Khuranas will surely get help from Brij. And whoever work with Brij is usually considered working against Khuranas. That's why Brij's Business has been a very low profit affair.

Well she is comparatively new in Business. She doesn't want any perception about her in market right now. She is focussed. She is competing with Khuranas but Brij will not be included in her scheme.

She left the table. She is going to hell busy today. First she is expecting a visit from her doctor then she has to go to visit orphanage run by her mother's friend. And after that she has to work on this new project.

Note:- A little background. and please do not ignore mistake and point out them. it will help me alot. and one more thing tell whether u want whole flashback story in one go or present with past.


and please press like u like it.😊


and also please tell me how to put hyperlink in signature and on the index.

i m so handicapped with IF tech.



Edited by mannu_minnie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Supposed to be dead... Lol... That makes it interesting...
Waiting for next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice starting.. waiting fr more..

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