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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
feeling very sad for taani
really worried for her

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Chapter 10:Mujhko Awaaz dena nahi

(Last Chapter)

Karan stopped his car and looked towards Taani who was sitting silently beside him.

Karan:"Are you sure you want to do this??"He asked keeping his hand on hers and gaining her attention.

He was really shocked when she knocked his room door early morning.While having morning coffee with him silently in his room she declared that she want to meet her Bhai before leaving to London.

Karan was hell angry with her decision. He didn't supported the side of the person who has hurt his best friend so much. But he didn't opposed Taani's decision because he knew after a lot of struggle she had got the courage to face the reality. And more than that he wanted her to take her life's decisions herself. She have all the rights to take any decision regarding her life. And being a friend he just need to be beside her all the time and support her in every decision of her life.And this is what he is doing now by accompnying her to her old house.

Karan:"Don't worry I know my jungle billi can do anything in this world. And you have to just tell HIM about your decision, nothing else."

He added sensing her inner turmoil. She passed a painful smile to him and nodded her head. He hugged her to give her some courage.

They both got down the car.Taani started taking hesitant steps towards her old house but then she noticed that Karan is not with her.She turned back .

Taani:"Tu nahi aayega kya??"She asked looking straight in his eyes.

Karan:"Nahi. I can't trust myself over this.Swayam is too dramatic to handle and If he'll start his bhai drama again then I'll end up smacking his face only.So,lets be on safer side.I'll wait for you in nearby caf till you sort this out and pack your belongings"

He said with a straight face and Taani was having difficulty to control her laugh. Her friend is really an antic piece.

Karan sat in his car and drove away and Taani started moving hesitantly. She ringed the door bell of her house and waited for Swayam to open the door.

~

Swayam was sleeping in Taani's room.He didn't knew when he fell asleep.After biding bye to his friends,Sharon and Rey he was sitting in Taani's room.It was really hard for him to convience Rey to give Taani some time to think. Rey was not at all ready to stop searching for Taani. He was trying to find out Karan's address. He knew Taani would be with him only. But Press was not revealing his address as its their some rule to not reveal personal address of any star in public. Rey talked to his Uncle who have many contacts in press. His Uncle assured him that soon he'll inform Rey about Karan Kundra's address. Swayam conveinced Rey to rest for some time till his Uncle find out Karan's address. After that they both will go to Karan's place and will bring Taani back. They'll ask for her forgiveness.

He was sleeping with Taani's pic in his hand.He was missing his Baby Sis so badly,the sis whom he never gave any love and care.He was so busy in his own life that he forgot to take care of his little angel.

Last night he saw HIS and REY'S pic in Taani's room.Millions of knives stabbed his heart and he felt himself sinking more in guilt. They both were the most important men of her life and they both have hurt her the most. She loved both of them with her full heart and they both broke her that heart only. They both rewarded her with pain,hurt,ignorance,distrust only.She must have had so many expectations from them and they both broke all her dreams in million pieces. They broke her soft heart and ended up killing her and themselves only. They hurt her but today they both are suffering the same pain.

Swayam's sleep broke away with ringing of door bell. He noticed that he slept last night in Taani's room while thinking about her only.He dragged himself to open the door. He was sure that it must be Rey only to leave for Karan's place.But when he opened the door he got the shocked.

~

He hugged Taani tighly as soon as he realized that its not a dream. She is really here standing just in front of him.

Taani too returned the hug. She let herself drown in the depth of her Bhai's warmth. After so long she is feeling this warmth, care, love in his hug. The tears which were refusing till now to come out of her eyes were now making their way slowly through curves of her cheeks. She felt the like tons of weight is now uplifted from her heart.

Swayam and Taani broke the hug after crying hard in each others embrace. Swayam cupped her face in his hands and wiped her tears with his thumb.

Swayam:"Thank god Taani tu aa gayi. I was missing you so much. I am sorry for hurting you so much. I am the worst brother of this world. I m sorry for everything what I did. I promise now I'll never hurt you.Please forgive me"

He pleaded cupping her face.Taani smiled through tears.

Taani:"No Bhai you are not the worst brother, You are the best brother one could get and I know from now on you'll never hurt me. Everyone commits mistakes and that's what makes us human. "She said keeping her hands on his which were cupping her face. Swayam passed a painful smile to her.

Taani:"Bhai till today you made all the decisions of my life.But today I want to take my life's decision.Would you allow me to do so"She asked looking in his eyes.Swayam nodded and wanted to say something but she didn't let him and continued speaking.

Taani:"Bhai I have applied in London's university.I want to continue my studies from there"She said cupping his face.Swayam tried to protest but she again didn't let him.

Taani:"And I want to live with Karan and Kritika. We all are shifting there. "She noticed the shock on his face with turned into hurt and then into guilt.

Swayam:"You didn't forgive me, Did you??"

He said with that same guilt and pain in his eyes.Taani didn't replied and just turned her back towards him. The tears were uncontrollably falling from their eyes.

Swayam ran a hand through his already ruffled hair and tried to compose his self. He got all his answers when she turned her back towards him. And the painful part is that he knows that he deserve this only.But still its hurting like hell to realize it again by Taani's gestures.

He replaced the pain with smile and turned her towards him by holding her shoulders.

Swayam:"So kab jaane ka plan hai?? Apne Bhai ko bhool to nahi jayegi na vaha jakar"

He asked smiling and that gesture of his brought a wide smile on Taani's face too.She shook her head in denial and hugged him again.He too hugged her back and tried to close the pain of losing her in himself.

Taani:"We are leaving tomorrow afternoon. I have to show up in university in 3 days for some formailities. Karan and Kritika are also planning to get marry in London only."

She said breaking the hug. Swayam nodded and then dragged her inside with him.

~

Rey was driving his car n full speed towards Shekhawat house.His eyes puffy red deprived with sleep.His hands clutching the steering wheel hard which was resulting his knuckles to turn white.His eyes settled on road ahead but mind roaming some elsewhere.

He was sitting in his living room waiting for his Uncle's call about Karan's address. When Swayam asked him to rest for sometime he offered to leave for his place only.He knew if he'll stay anymore there then Swayam will defianetly try to ease up his pain and guilt and that's what he doesn't wanted. He wanted to feel the pain and hurt which he gave to her,to his love,his life,his Taani.

After leaving Swayam's place he again checked Kritika's place to get some information about Taani. As VP sir told them that Taani left the college ,he was afraid that she might plan to leave City also.That's why he wanted to find her soonest. He can't afford to lose her again.

And In morning his suspicions came true when Swayam informed him that Taani is leaving for London. He told him that Taani is now at their home to pack her stuff and spend some time with him. Swayam was so guilty for informing Rey aout Taani's whereabouts. He knew he is betraying her again but still he had some hopes in deep of his heart that Rey is the one who can stop his Baby sis from leaving . And this selfish side of his forced him to try just one last time to stop her . And on the other hand he wanted to help his friend also. He wanted Rey-Taani to sort out their problems. That's why he asked Rey to meet taani.

Rey got down from car in disheveled state.His hands clenched in fist.His heart heavy.Only Swayam's voice rininging in his ears.

"She is leaving Us for forever"

The way she was behaving with him from some last days he had no doubt on Swayam's words. She didn't even acknowledged his presence in College that day so why would she think about him before leaving.This thought was scaring him to the core and a fear gripped his heart. Fear of losing her.

What will he do without her? Will she really leave him? How could she? Didn't she know that he will be restless without her? Didn't she know that he can't live without her?

He know he have done so many mistakes.But couldn't she give him a chance to mend his all wrong doings? He is not asking for forgiveness.He is just asking for a chance.He will earn forgiveness with time.

He can't let her go.Call him selfish or caward for that but he cant let her go just like that because she has become his life now. And He definitely cant live without her.

~

Taani was placing her belongings in her bag when he dashed inside room without any notice.

She looked up at him.Her heart cried for him seeing him in this state.He looked like as if...as if he has lost something very precious. She couldn't help but feel a constricted feeling at the pit of her stomach.She wanted to hug him and soothe him.But she knew she couldn't. She didn't want to give him false hopes as she knew she couldn't forgive him for what he did to her.Not that she didn't want to forgive him.She wanted to forgive him but she couldn't do that as she is so much hurt by his actions and his lack of trust on her.How can he think so low of her.

She looked away when he started approaching her.But he continued looking at her with a broken face.

She zipped her bag and was about to walk away when he stopped her gripping her wrist in his hand.

Rey:"Is this true that you are leaving?"

He asked reducing the distance between them.She jerked his hand and again tried to walk away.

Rey:"This is not the answer of my question."

He asked coming closer to her till their faces were just inches apart from each other.

Her hand again in his grip.

She looked away to hide the moisture in her eyes.

Taani:"Yes I m leaving tomorrow. With Karan and his family"

She said looking straight in his eyes.She wanted to see distrust again on his face but she saw hurt only. He didn't even gave any importance that she is leaving with Karan. He is hurt because she is leaving him back, all alone.

He lifted her chin to his face. Rey:"Mat Jao na"He said with moist eyes touching his forhead her."Please"He added closing his eyes.

They both stayed like that for minutes close to each other not having energy to say anything at this moment.Their forheads touching,her hand in his grip and their breaths fanning on each others face.

Rey:"Please"he pleaded again swallowing a lump that was choking his throat.

His voice brought her back and opening her eyes she turned her face away from him causing him to open his eyes too.

She took her hand from his grip looking straight in his eyes. Her eyes were having a finalty in them. He was scared to see that finalty in her eyes.

Taani:"Its late now. I've made my decision."

She said grabbing her bag.

That was enough for him.He snatched the bag away from her hands and threw it aside and held her shoulders tightly.

Rey:"Why are you so adamant to leave.? Why the hell you are not understanding that I can't live without you damn it"

He barked looking straight in her eyes.She turned her face away from his.

Rey:" I am sorry.I really am.Why cant you just listen to me.I am not asking you to gorgive me.I m just asking you to forgive me.I am just asking you to stay.Just stay with me.Just give me a chance to mend my mistakes"

She shoved his hands away angrily.

Taani:"A chance.Really! Did you give me a chance to explain myself.Forget about the chance u didn't even tell me before taking break up decision. You didn't think that I would be heartbroken. That I won't survive without you. You left me all alone. Actually you were never with me. For me you were the only one and for you I was on last.You didn't thought before breaking up, you were not beside me when your friends were taunting me, you were not there when everyone was laughing on me. From the first day of our relationship you were never there. You were ready to break off your relationship when Bhai was against this. You didn't thought about me once and today you are expecting me to think about you. "

She poured her heart in front of him. The intensity of her words scared him more. He was drowing in his own guilt.

Taani:" It was always You. You were suffering from heartbreak so you hurt me when I expressed my love for you. You were jealous with Shivam so you taunted me everytime.You were having a difficulty to understand your feelings so you mocked me when I became GS.Suddenly You wanted to express your love so you almost kissed me in RH. You realized your love so proposed me and Like a fool I was so happy.Your friend was against our relation so You were ready to break it off just like that.You left me all alone and went Goa with your friends.You were the one who was having problem with my way of thinking so You planned to break my heart.You distrusted me just on the basis of an artile. It was always YOU.We were never US in this relation.It was your pain,your happiness,your needs,your friends,your passion, your decisions. SO tell where I am in all this. "

She said gripping his shoulders.

Taani:"But now I will think about myself only. And I don't want to live with you and you can't stop me."

Taani said her final words and left taking her small treasure of memories with her.Leaving a broken heart behind.

~THE END~



This is it.Its the end of this story.I started this story by keeping Taani's pain in my mind and this was the only way for me to show what I felt when Taani got betrayed by her love,bhai and friends.So,this was plainly a Taani's story.

I didn't wanted her to forgive everyone so easily.

I am not against KAS,Taanu,Vrushi,VD, or other cast and writers.Its just my views and my way of showing what I felt when Taani's character was killed brutually by I dnt knw who.

You know I started writting just like that.I was kind of attracted to this Fiction thing when I first came on IF.But I dnt knw when writting became an important part of my life.

Now I use this to show my emotions.Whatever I feel I write it down.

That's why I update stories as per my mood.My every story is set with my every kind of mood.

So,I just want to ask your forgiveness.I m sorry for ending INCONNU like this but I didnt wanted to kill its base,which is definately the betrayal which Taani faced.

But Now I want to welcome you all In Sequel of INCONNU.In this I'll show what I wanted to happen after Taani's departure.So, I request you all to support me in this also.


~TaaRey FF:: INCONNU Season 2~

I want to thank all my readers for their love and support.Thanks a lot friends for showering your love on me and my works.

LOVE YOU ALL

Note:Guys I m having my second pre-boards from 15th jan.I don't think I'll be able to update .And after pre-boards I have Boards and I can't take any risk with it.So I'll be able to update after March only.I know Its a long span but I can't help it.So see you guys in April only.I'll be less active during this span.I'll try my best to give updates atleast once during this span.

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Edited by butterfly-ravee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
awesum update .. 👏
luvd karan n taani's bond ..! 👍🏼

taayam n taarey .. 😭 em feeling bad 4 dem ..! 😭

luvd d way u expressed taani's emotions ..! 👍🏼

taani's damn hurt ..! 😭

luvly update .. 👍🏼

thank u 4 d pm .. 😊

i luvd dis story ..! 👏 😃

u r an amzing writer .. 👍🏼

sequel .. excytd 4 it ..! 😃

keep writing .. 😃

PS - me 1st ..! 🥳

Edited by aditipandey.adi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
it was awesome amazing
& just perfect
i love the way u showed
taani's emotions it was fab
its not easy to forgive
when the most closet persons
hurt u the most
again it was mind blowing update
& last part of this update when taani says it
was you
it was too good

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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Beautifully written chapter
It's heartbreaking that it ended this way
But I like it, because Taani for once is putting herself first before anyone else
She deserve to be happy...
I love when she pure her heart out to Rey, it shows how much he hurt her
Maybe she will forgive him in the near future, but I love that right now she is doing and giving her personal dreams a chance
Ravee you're an amazing writer
The way u wrote Taani emotions was impeccable
I can't wait to read season 2
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
awesomely written superb work
taayam scene were so nice
taani's emotions were beautifully written

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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
This was fantastic!
I mean the way you have shown Taani's character!
It's amazing! ^_^
Kinda feeling sad for Rey... :(
But I agree with you...the way that Taani's character was ended...even I didnt like it at all...
Thanks so much for this update!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
I am not at all upset from the ending as I am positive about season 2😃 waise bhi taani's pain is shown clearly. I loved how you expressed it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
soo emotional chapter ..
this chapter make me cry soo much...
taani decided to meet swayam ...swayam taani scene ...soo emotional
swayam want forgive to taani ...taani turn her face ..show how much pain her inside
now swayam informed rey ...taani leaving news
rey come directly goes taani room ...
taarey scene soo heart breaking
finally taani say to rey ...taani each wors show how much she angry with rey
...
update soon ...i want new taani and new rey ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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its too emotional.bt luvd it

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