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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
reyam and gang never deserved taani in D3 (thats what i feel)
well... the update was super awesome
its good ki ab taani london jaayegi... and karnika too
get well soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
read all chp
the stry is fab
really loved it
loved taani n karan bonding
reyam n gang can think about taani like this never excepted
well wanna read further
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
😛 😛 😛 amazing updates
Loved everything from yr ff 😛
Taani karan bond 😉
Taani n aunty bond
Taani n kritika bond fantastic
Loved the way she is facing everything
Per rey or swayam iss fff mein 😲
Why they r like this
Plz update soonn
I want 2 kno tumhare paas itne
Saare ff likhne ke itne innovative ideas kaise aate hai 😉
U should try yr hand in script writing
M not saying it aise hi
M seriously believe it do think about it dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
awesum FF .. 👏
em in luv wid dis FF ..

pls update soon .. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
New thread...! Thanx for it dea..! Waitin for ur update..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Just saw this new thread..!!
Update Soon!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Wow was missing chap 7 (B).
But today got it..
Bang on updte..
Hw cud reyam do dt to Taani ?
Karan punched rey 1nce if i was dere i wud shower my punches to him...
Lubd karnika & taani bond

lykd hw Karan made Taani smiled...
Dey r moving to London..
Hmm mny twist r w8ing..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18


Chapter 9 : Broken Angel


Next day was no different for Taani.Since morning she was making plans with Karan to help him how he should propose kittu.She played with Troy to distract her mind from the truth' that her life is no more the same.She even spent time with kittu and helped Karan's mom in kitchen but still that void feeling was not leaving her.That feeling when you feel like everything around you is messed up,your whole life is messed up and you can't do anything to make it better.That helplessness,that void feeling at heart,those wrapped up emotions were making her suffocate.

She noticed 100's of missed calls and texts from her Friends'and from the person whose thoughts are haunting her since last encounter of them.

She wanted to let out that emotions out of her self to lessen the heaviness from her heart.She wanted to feel wanted again.She wanted to feel loved.She just wanted to run to her mother and hug her tightly and sleep in her embrace.She didn't wanted those soothing words which would lessen her pain she justed wanted someone to just listen her.Someone with whom she could share the emotions she is feeling inside her.

~

Swayam closed himself in premises of four walls of his room,But with that he closed even his heart which was shattering at that moment.He still remember the hurtful words of Taani.

Since childhood he is successful to read her eyes.Those eyes which expresses the true feelings of her pure heart.

He had seen so many emotions in them Joy,hurt,worry,care,love,concern,anger. But yesterday he saw only emptiness in them.He wanted to read her eyes.He wanted those to express any emotion even hurt would do but they showed nothing.

That emptiness in her eyes spoke volumes.And that time it was clear to him that he has lost his sister,and this time for forever.

Since morning everyone is running like maniac to find Taani.But he didn't even made a single attempt to find her or contact her.Coz now he know that he doesn't deserve it.Till now he was so selfish but now he has realized that He does not deserve her and letting her go is the best thing for her.

~

Sharon was sitting in living room of Shekhawat house with all her friends.They all are tired of finding Taani since morning.She just dissapered in air and didn't even gave them a chance to apologise.

They wanted to fix everything but she didn't gave them even that chance.

They wanted to apologise for their behavior and for blaming her for baseless things And now they couldn't do that and for that too again they are blaming her.So thoughfull of them.

They can never understand the real emotions of friendship.They are too lost in their own lives to even remorse correctly.

~

Rey was shattered since he got to know Taani left him alone.She went away just like this.Leaving him,his love everything.He was confused that what made her leave abruptly.Answer was just in his front but he was too consumed in his self to acknowledge it.His actions made her do so.He failed as a lover to protect her ,respect her ,care her and love her.He failed her by distrusting her.It was stupid of him to let her go but now the damage is done and he can't do anything to bring her back.But still it is hard for him to believe his truth.And the worst part is that she didn't even talked to him once yesterday.He was ready to face her anger,her accusions but not silence.Her silence really spoke the things which he was feeling hard to believe even now when she left.

Since morning he is running around city like a maniac to find her.He even visited Kritika's place where Taani was living currently but she was not even present there.

~

Karan was feeling so bad when he saw Taani feeling vulnerable whole day.He tried everything to make her forget those selfish people but no matter what he did she was not the same Taani again.The Taani he saw when he spent a whole day out with her.She is no more the bubbly girl who would forget everything in his company.Till now he was so proud on himself that he is capable to make her smile even in toughest situation but today his all hopes broke to make her the old Taani.

In late evening he was trying to find her everywhere in house but she was not there.And when he got on terrace he saw her sitting on beach in front of his home.The same place where last time he confronted his feelings about kittu to her and today he moved towards her to broke the bridge which she made around her and let her open her heart in front of him.

~

Taani was sitting on beach and surprisingly she was feeling so relaxed here.Though she felt the calm sea mocking on her messed life but still the calmness of sea was washing out her anguish and was filling her heart with some strange warmth.She wanted to cry hard on her fate but suddenly she felt like her all tears dried up in her eyes and even after trying hard she could not shed even a single drop of those salty water.

She glanced up at sky but her parents are also not with her today.They also hid behind dark clouds when they saw this state of their daughter.How much they wished they could just wipe her tears once and sing her lullaby to give her the most needed warmth of life.But god even snatched that happiness from Taani's life by taking her parents away from her.

~

Taani was so lost in her thoughts that she didn't noticed when Karan came and sat beside her.

Karan:"You know some months back I met a girl who changed my life totally.I was on verge of killing myself when she entered my life like an angel.She faced so many problems since beginning but still she always fought with her problems like a fighter.She was my biggest inspiration.I learnt meaning of life from her.And today I its hurting me to see her broken.The girl who knew the true meaning of life is sitting here like a lifeless body."

Karan was speaking his heart without even glancing at her.He wanted to soothe her pain but least he knew that her wounds can't be healed just like this.But still as a friend he is trying his best.

Karan:"Taani,I know I was acting impulsively yesterday with those selfish people"

He said from nowhere and Taani glanced at him.

Taani:"They have names,Karan"

She said not liking him calling her friends and bhai selfish.

Karan:"Taani speaking the truth,I don't know what is right for you and what is wrong.I really don't know.I just want you to be happy.Please tell me what you want in your life.".

Taani had a blank expression on her face with his question.

Taani:"I want to be alone for sometime"

Karan smiled and nodded.He knew she needed time and he is ready to give her all time.

Taani got up from beach and Karan was just looking at her as she moved away.He was surprised by her behaviour but didn't spoke anything.He knew she needed that time to recover.

~

Taani moved out after shower.She felt her nerves calmed after long hot shower.She came in front of mirror and for a second she was shocked to see the reflection in mirror.

In place of chirpy.bubbly,full of life Taani there is pale,disoriented,shattered Taani is standing.Her eyes were all blank and the shining of it was lost.She touched herself and flinched when she realised that this all is not a bad nightmare,its the biggest truth of her life.

Her own people made her like this.The person she trusted the most turned her down.She loved them so much and in return she got only and only pain.

But enough is enough now.She won't take all these things now.Now she'll not let them rule her life.Its her life and only she will rule it like she wish to.


I'm so lonely, broken angel
I'm so lonely, listen to my heart
One n' only, broken angel
Come n' save me, before I fall apart


Hello friends,

Guys I m sorry for late update and even in this update I didn't clarified much.I had no plans to write this but I m feeling very bad today.I don't know what made me feel so but I m very dipressed since morning.Even my besties are not with me right now and I don't know ..ahhh. Just bear this update coz I released all my frustration in this.

PM's Later



Note:Guys I m having my second pre-boards from 15th jan.I don't think I'll be able to update .And after pre-boards I have Boards and I can't take any risk with it.So I'll be able to update after March only.I know Its a long span but I can't help it.So see you guys in April only.I'll be less active during this span.I'll try my best to give updates atleast once during this span.

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Edited by butterfly-ravee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
awesome update
u write very well
swayam is right he don't deserve her
taani so sad
karan talk with T is soo soo nice
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Res/unres
amazing update
very well written
taani's emotions u portrayed very well
taani is so much hurt
karan is also feeling bad for taani
taani n karan convo was nice
feeling bad for taani
i hv no words to describe u written it so beautiful
update soon n pm me
Edited by ....pooja.... - 12 years ago

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