Kashi's Wait : A Poem

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Ramya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: LakshMila

Spellbound!
Moist, pure and deep are these words. The essence is heart warming.

Thanks Milz! 🤗

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Ramya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: BabyHimavari
👏👏👏

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Ramya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--
very nicely you have pour down those feelings through your words , good one...👏👏👏

Originally posted by: _Meena_
nice job

Thank you both! ❤️

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Ramya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: ayushimehra
its very beautiful poem,😊
which describes Kashi emotions, kashi inner feelings,👏

kashi charcater , feeling very, soothing on screen which way she express her feelings, that's marvelous

little little movements her expression very cool, or heart touching.😊

or your poem penned down all beautifully
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der lagi aane mein tumko shukR hai fir bhi aaye to
aas ne dil ka saath na choDaa waise hum ghabraaye to

suni sunaayi baath nahin hai apne oopar beethi hai
phool nikalte haiN sholoN se chaahat aag lagaaye to

Thank you, thank you for all those kind words. There are so many words left unsaid when it comes to Kashi and I tried gather those words here.

That little poem at the end is beautiful dear, thank you for that!

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Ramya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: -PyaariBhootni-
Beautiful poem there👏

Thanks girl!

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Ethereally presented! Leaves behind a nice feeling! <3

Thank you, Pro <3

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Ramya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: .-Amethyst-.
Wow, just so soft & spectacular! <3
Your descriptive forms have always been extremely endearing to read.

Amazing :D

Louuu.

And here comes my favourite review.😛 Or is it that, I love it when my sis reviews?

Mahi, you sweetheart, thank you for that comment! ❤️

Lub you! 🤗

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Ramya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
<font color="#6633cc" size="3">Amazing poem Ramya</font>

Thanks, Nonie!

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Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

amazing awesome beauti poem ramya. 👏
thnx for pm dear..

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Srutha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa
I love History Kashi 😳
ResWa⭐️

UnresWa 😳

Rams, you have no idea how much I love the poem. The call of Nature also makes Kashi see Bajirao, for that deep is her love for him, and that high is her want for him to come. Her separation is beautifully written in deep, heartfelt words 👏👏

Kudos, Rams. You out do yourself ❤️